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​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​I have read many books by the author. To be honest, I stopped reading this one after I first realized that it was an imaginary world. Because I have been paying attention to football novels, I found that this novel has always been at the top of the monthly ticket sales. There are really no other football novels to read, so I started reading it again. Although there is not much sense of immersion, the author's writing style is very good. The novel looks very comfortable and does not have the major drawbacks of the first few books. In the end, although I am not too keen on the rise of the national football team because the probability is too small and I have no sense of involvement, I still hope that the author can write this novel well.

Just like chicken ribs, tasteless

To be honest, the author just can't hold up the mud on the wall, and he is reluctant to part with the little money, and he refuses to write well. He has been wasting the readers' efforts and has reached this point. He deserves it.

There is no sense of immersion in the empty future world at all, so let's wait for the next book!

Does anyone who reads football articles read overhead football? Eunuch on the shelves?

Awesome, awesome, the U23 national football team has reached the finals of the Asian Cup

The first time I won the Champions League, I just wrote about my return to my country. I didn't write about the climax after winning the Champions League. The second time I won the Champions League, it was like this again. Why are you chasing after me? It doesn't give readers any emotional value at all. Why do you want people to keep reading?

Manchester United has laid the foundation for so much. You are the defending champion and captain of the team. The team is built around you. You ask to buy people, but you go to play for a team that is not as good as Manchester United and form a team with He Chaoyue? I can't watch it!

What's wrong with writing about Chinese players? 😄😄😄 It's quite funny.

I am extremely disappointed, the pressure on the protagonist is too heavy, and there is not much focus on the finals. I understand that in order to rationally improve the combat power of teammates, I cannot bear to do this again and again. This is not how group scenes sacrifice the protagonist's scenes to fill the supporting roles. I am looking forward to how long the author will continue to suppress the protagonist like this, and when will he be willing to let the protagonist win all the championships in a season. There is also the most disgusting hydrology, pre-match interviews, pre-match preparations, post-match interviews, large chunks of commentary, and the words "water" are flying. The key is that no matter what game, league, cup, basically every game is like this. And don't write about the damn locker room manager and the front desk aunt. These two characters are seriously suspected to be created by AI. They are full of human-machine feeling, and there are specific figures on the moisture content of the lawn maintenance area. The use of AI has gone so far that my first reaction after reading each chapter is whether AI is used, which part is used, and how much AI content is used. The author has lost my most basic trust in this area.

I haven't seen such a stupid design in sports novels in how many years. Either regret the semi-finals, or directly win the championship. Which protagonist won the game by getting a red card and missing the finals? Can you give me an example? You have written several books and you don't know the poisonous points of sports novels? Why don't you go back to writing about Korean entertainment? You can just open up the harem without thinking.

If you can write, just write. Every day, it's either the water or the national football team. If the first chapter tomorrow is about the national football team, I will delete the book immediately

Is the author taking it too much for granted? The protagonist is a professional player playing a community cup on a field he knows nothing about. Football players are not a group of highly qualified people. What if there are football hooligans on the opposite side? What if there are die-hard fans of the enemy in the same city on the opposite side? If I were the coach and agent of the protagonist, my blood pressure would be high.

I have ordered so many, and I don't even have the right to say a word. If you think what I said is wrong, you should reply. What's the point of deleting the post without saying anything...

The problem is a bit big. Wei Lai himself has already been the core player at Manchester United and has won the Ballon d'Or twice. He had to go to Valencia, and he had to have his image rights bought by Valencia. It was too embarrassing. If he was a newcomer joining a wealthy team, it would be understandable. For such a big-name star, he still behaves like this. Doesn't he know that his worth means his status? In the book, Manchester United didn't do anything to feel sorry for him. It was like a dead end. Why did they want to leave tonight? You might as well just write about Valencia borrowing a loan to buy Wei Lai, and delete the part about the image rights, which will show that the executives are bolder and reflect Wei Lai's status. In this way, it will be logical to write about Valencia's success later. Wei Lai has status, and the team is built around him. Do you have to do this to disgust readers?

Rt, no sense of immersion at all, very embarrassing

The writing is very good, but I have been disgusted by you twice. There will be no next time. The three views are inconsistent! Su Ke's forced shady World Cup, and then the red card for the runner-up this time, if he can't beat it, he can't beat it, and it doesn't matter if he loses. In the end, he got a red card to blame, who should be regarded as a fool? The extra ones I ordered later will be given to you. I will completely block them and never see them again. There will be only one and two but not three!

To put it bluntly, this book has become useless after the red card of my own decision-making was "fighting for no regrets". The spirit of sportsmanship is never a steady flow, but a breath of striving for "higher, faster, stronger". When the energy dissipates, it's all over. From the moment the author first felt that his protagonist could not win the final, or even compete, the young man who could have been so high-spirited died. For me personally, the book is over after that chapter because the author personally killed his protagonist

I can't stand it. I have endured AI for so long, and I am still subscribing to this embarrassing batch of sensationalism. The result is a mess💩. Why don't you just treat the protagonist, a loser who has failed as a matter of course, and lose the game with a leg tackle?

It is understandable that AI is used to polish and complete things that one does not understand, but some chapters are too strong in AI. . . .

The protagonist's mind is not like a time traveler, but like a minor. It is unimaginable how someone could simulate hundreds of games, and in the end, during the system assessment, he is as at a loss as if he has never played football. It is not unfair that you could not play with such qualifications in your previous life. The author's previous books also had this kind of protagonist. He was relatively middle-aged and full of boyishness. You might as well set it to be a real indigenous boy. The sense of disobedience is not that serious. But you have to set it to a time traveler. It's weird.

I just want to ask, how do you block an author on Qidian?

I've watched more than half of it, and I don't have a sense of immersion. I can't watch anymore!

It's so funny that you're right to read the comments after a while. Where are those filial sons who were washed before? Then wash it for the author

Is the following content really not good to watch?

I didn't get fucked. Some of them looked like they were written by AI.

Just saw Eredivisie. Let's complain. ——As a fan rather than a professional player. It cannot be said that he fully understands football. I can only complain about it logically. The first and second "teachers" of pig's feet are Casemiro and Kanter. And Pig's Knuckle has completed the "Advanced Tutorial". As a result, "now", I always feel that it is difficult to defend in the midfield! Author, are you an alien?

The plot is really getting more and more disgusting. Even if I update it every day, the plot is getting more and more rubbish.

In fact, my impression of Yinzi has always been that he is a very unreliable author. He is talented, but his updates are unstable and he often drinks. What I remember most clearly is the book "Welding the Waist". The quality in the early stage was unparalleled. I, a factory fan, enjoyed reading it. However, in the later stage, I even misremembered the Champions League scores I wrote and refused to correct them. But this book feels very down-to-earth and thoughtful, perhaps because Yinzi's mentality has evolved. This book is really good. It may not be that good in terms of performance, but in terms of quality, I think it can be compared with Fox in the Forbidden Zone. I hope it will slowly become popular in the future. Come on!

Don't correct the typos, don't make up the chapters I owed due to leave, write less and less about the star system that was the highlight at the beginning, just write about your virtual national football team.