I Used MC to Build a House, and the Immortal Cultivators Thought It Was a Cave.

Except for chapter 25, it has nothing to do with cultivating immortals 😰. The MC part is pretty good 🤓. Is there a mod behind the protagonist? I kind of want to see the swords drawn and the battle between immortal cultivators!

When writing games, don't write too much realistic plot. It feels like a fragmentation. Just play the game and be happy and that's it.

I saw the latest one, the 145th one. It's quite nice, like an MC instruction manual. Let me just say one thing: kill the cow first when you meet the villagers for the first time? ? ? After harvesting the villagers' fields, at least give them something to plant (°ー°). The key point is that the villagers' reaction is too dramatic •̩̩̩̩ᯅ•̩̩̩. They don't care about the cows and only care about the old man Xin and picking up the benefits? Others are super nice

The fun part of this book is to write more about interacting with people in that world. Why are you just writing about playing games?

The Sword of Universe Domination, the Pickaxe of World Destruction, the Longbow of Fall of Heaven, the Ax of Natural Desolation, the planet-devouring shovel, just blow hard.

Why is it that the author's writing is all about the sect in the game world? It's enough to just mention the dialogue and exchange in one stroke, and write it in a long way. I came here for MC, and the protagonist didn't appear a few times. On the contrary, there were many other plots in the game world.

The noob taste is too obvious, but there are no obvious poisonous points. I would like to give you a suggestion. Don't spend too much time explaining or introducing the MC. As the author, just treat yourself as the only person in the world who knows about this game. Just talk about what the protagonist can do at the appropriate time. The same goes for everything else. Don't always think about explaining "why this is so". Just lay out some settings or plot to make it reasonable. The approach of "the author helps the reader think" and "chews it up and feeds it" greatly affects the perception. (For example, in the first few chapters, there is a plot where monsters are killed but nothing is dropped. In fact, there should be no explanation that there are drops in the game. Just leave the sentence where the protagonist wonders why there are no drops. Readers will understand. Even if they have never played the MC game, they will at least know that the protagonist is unusual)

You live upstairs, and you suddenly conjure up a 5.3-Ton sword that you can't even lift? And the house is safe and sound?

I don't know if the author can see it or not, but I'll say it anyway. The author of the recent chapters seems to be just writing about how to play MC.

Insert an eye👀Call me to watch after it's over

Just looking at the title, MC's construction ability is really not as good as Xiuxian Cave. One is construction and the other is creation. There is really no comparison.

In the early stage, when you have no combat capabilities, do not write about events that touch the extraordinary power of reality. You can write about events, but do not get close to the protagonist. You cannot write about behind-the-scenes stories like this. You must write about invincibility at the current stage. Without combat capabilities, writing will only be counterproductive. It feels like you have no idea, or you have never read novels like behind-the-scenes stories.

I hope that in reality, there is no such thing as the main character's ability, and it's just a ghost invasion. Don't make it so messy that the main character doesn't even have a sense of existence.

Is the author thinking about creating something like the World Devourer and the Sky-based Dragon Slayer Cannon to shock the world of immortality?

It's great to watch. Finally, it's time to interact with the villagers and the Immortal Sect. This part is what I'm most looking forward to. I'll just write the real stuff later. I'm more looking forward to the plot in the game 😍

An idea of a cultivator in the original world entering a different world Entering hell through the gate of hell, there is protection within a certain range of the gate of hell, which weakens the burning effect. If you leave too far away, the effect will be reduced step by step. After the protection is completely gone, only golden elixir or above can walk freely, otherwise you will be burned to death over time (the foundation will last longer. Water attribute monks cannot mobilize spiritual power in hell, but they are more resistant to burning than ordinary monks. If you stay with fire attributes for a long time, you may become insane or possessed. , These are limited to the side effects of Jin Dan and below) After entering the end, Jin Dan and below will undergo a mental shock. If you can survive it, you can have a huge improvement in your soul and freely explore the end. However, if you cannot survive the foundation building, you will have a mental breakdown.

After reading it, the writing is pretty good, just write as normal!

Rubbish, eunuch reservation, subscribe with caution

It's the kind of hidden tremor who is super chaotic when doing tasks in the cultivator. Once provoked, he vows to turn the whole world to M. In reality... He is a bit tough-talking and a little timid, but he also does not give up but fights wits and courage with life (funny) Speaking of which, will the protagonist invite [technoblade] to fight for him in the future? (The expression is changed to the skin of a technological knife), this unruly boss is also one of the legends in the MC game industry. I suddenly had this idea and I don't know why. It's just that if the protagonist really asks him for help, there will always be an inexplicable feeling. (Let's not talk about how many times t can be opened in PVP in this world. If we really ask technoblade to fight for us later, let's talk about o7 first (dog head saves life)

So far, the author's writing is quite good, and the style or content of the novel is still very in line with my wishes. I hope the author can continue to keep it up and not engage in those cerebral congestion plots.

Where are the recent pictures of pig's feet? Inexplicably, some kind of witch has been replaced

Hold [W] to think ▊▊▊▊▊▊▊▊▊

The book is good, but there is a bit too much nonsense. Anyone who reads your book basically understands MC. Some things are just a little click away. You don't need to write too much. Come on 🙂