Dawn of the Dark Ruins

The author is indeed good, but it is not exciting enough, and the protagonist keeps falling. Although this way of writing can better reflect the despair of the wasteland, but it is not so Internet-like. It is not easy to combine the despair of the wasteland with the protagonist's personal happiness.

Wow, this introduction of the author makes me very doubtful about how the people in the article survived. After all, even the shadows between the fingers are exposed. So I have a small question. How do these people solve the shadows caused by the breasts in the clothes and the birds in the pants? 🤔

The protagonist has been running away, being caught, running away again, and being caught again. Is this going to continue in a cycle?

The protagonist, Goldfinger: has photographic memory, a human-shaped camera, and controls the black fog. Plot: It's not bad, but the protagonist is in a miserable state. He is either being arrested or on the way to being arrested. The current chapter 30 is about being caught working as a black slave. The update is too slow, the food and grass are currently edible.

The level of writing the story is very good and I can read it. It's a good story. I'm just stating my opinion, not slandering. The story is very good and I can keep reading. I hope there won't be any poisonous points. You can probably guess the subsequent plot, and it will slowly develop and change the world. In fact, I'm afraid that the book will become boring in the later stages. This is a common problem with online writing. Very few books can survive the later stage. And your update will block some people. At present, I was very interested in it at the beginning, but now my interest is gradually decreasing. I have finished catching up on it, and then I am still watching it. Interest will gradually decrease. The subject matter is very novel. If your update can be promoted and coupled with some suitable promotion, many people will read it. You know, there are many books that are just like shit, but they can still be ranked at the top, so you need some marketing techniques to market your own books. Readers are also very picky. In recent years, the level of some authors has not improved, but the readers' reading vision has improved. Come on, don't think that I am nothing. I have been reading novels for more than ten years. These are just some of my opinions. It is enough that your story has the desire to make people read it. The web article is very successful when written like this. If the data is not good, don't be discouraged. The wine is good but the alley is too dark. You can learn from Mr. Lei's marketing 😁. Xiaomi is truly invincible, period. I hope there will be more updates ~ It's time to fight hahaha

The wasteland has a pure flavor, almost like radiation, the background is absurd but not depressing, there is a dash of black humor, and the writing skills are really good. .

So far it's pretty good. Except for the initial flaws of tens of billions and millions of hatches per day, there are no other flaws. It's much better than many books on the list. I'm pretty good at finding faults. I can't find any faults with it now that it's on the shelves. I'll order dozens more chapters and continue reading. Many books on the ranking list are full of bugs, and there are mentally handicapped plots everywhere, but people still pay for it. I don't know why this book has such a poor score. Is it because the author's editor was not strong enough and didn't recommend it? I wish the author to meet a big sponsor soon. A large reward can attract a lot of traffic.

The writing is okay. Is the author really a newcomer? It can't be an extraterrestrial demon, right?

The writing is quite good. I found that most of the good ones from Qidian are not popular, and the ones on the rankings are basically unreadable.

I'm impressed, the writing is really good, the feeling of the wasteland is captured, and the character descriptions are spot on, but I feel like the protagonist is currently in a fugitive simulator hahahaha