Doomsday: My Shelter Unlimited Upgrades

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When I read Chapter 8, I suddenly lost the sense of immersion. The previous chapter was good, but Chapter 8 was too awkward. The protagonist was suddenly given a secondary and self-righteous character. The woman is about to die. Is there so many inner dramas and so many mental wanderings? Like a person who is about to starve to death, can he talk non-stop? I hope the author is excited and I will read it as a reader. The subject is a good subject. I also want to see the robot army.

There is no system, the pig's feet are not as powerful as this woman, there is no system, the pig's feet were so frightened that he almost peed, but if there is a system, he pretends to be cool in front of a woman, it's disgusting to death

To be honest, I like the shelter genre very much. I know that the author wants to write the male protagonist as a calm and rational character, but every time you encounter danger, do you really have to write down some evaluation? It is really dramatic, quite embarrassing, and difficult to evaluate.

When you see Chapter 6, all kinds of data are filled in randomly, so you can't check it yourself.

The protagonist has too much inner drama

One sentence can write a chapter, and one chapter can write 10 chapters. It's really cool, a smooth stroke, and a bit of a hit.

The data is very messy, and the data written just before has changed later.

The protagonist is too bland, the interpersonal interactions are better than nothing, and the plot is bland and not attractive enough.

The writing is quite good, keep it up and keep an eye on you!

Although his writing collapsed in the later period, he was really good-looking in the middle period

What is written? Messy data

It is said that the punctuation marks in the title are all produced by AI and studio, I don't know whether they are true or not.

Can you write 500,000 words? I can't watch it.

The author's main idea is to build whatever you want, without beginning or end, and it's very confusing. The shelter can be built to the first floor of a 12-story building. Why not just build it to the entrance of the community and divide the area into a larger area?

According to what you wrote in the first chapter, the protagonist is an otaku who stays at home and raises a kitten. The monster comes to the house. The inner drama of the protagonist's character is actually not allowing the monster to enter the place he has to protect and the home he has to protect to activate the golden finger? ? ? ? ? And Chapter 8, isn't this really in conflict with the character design you designed earlier? How could a normal person suddenly have a golden finger on the first day of the disaster, be able to build a consciousness-linked reconnaissance robot, and use the robot to watch the neighbor next door fighting monsters in life and death, and still think in his heart that this is a test for the neighbor? ? ? ? ? Ah? ? ? What is this? ? ? Take a look for yourself, do you think it's reasonable? ? ? Ah? ? ? I was completely confused when I read Chapter 8, and I even suspected that something was wrong with me!