From the Roland Mountains to the End of the World

I've just read a dozen chapters and it's almost time to pronounce a death sentence The writing is just okay The pacing is a mess and needs to be reorganized The first three golden chapters are in a fog, and few readers are interested in continuing to read after reading them All I can say is, come on.

Every recommendation you make is the fuel that ignites my creative flame. If there are any characters I want to add, I can consider writing them in.

The writing in the first volume was indeed unattractive, but it only became a little more attractive during the trial. In the second volume, I will see if I can improve the writing style and plot concept.