After Choosing the Bad Ending, They All Caught up with Reality

This kind of subject matter is often easy to die midway or end hastily. I hope you, the author, can continue to create and give you a complete and exciting ending 🙂

Meng Xin's new book is about to start. By the way, the main plot of this book is not to gain rewards and become stronger by increasing your favorability. The first paragraph is just for plot needs. At the same time, this book is determined not to speculate in stocks, and all the heroines will be included. By the way, I would like to thank all readers for your support!

It's too early to kill him by just touching your head when you come up.

Kick me after the first dungeon ends

Collect it first and wait for me to taste it 😄

Why don't you start writing from the Shura Field where you all came to visit? There are too many people writing one copy after another.

No, you and the princess haven't slept together for decades, have you had a baby? That's weird

The male and female protagonists in the first dungeon were both well portrayed, but the second dungeon felt too female-flavored and I couldn't watch it.

You can only talk about so many benchmark works on this subject. Unless you write like this, you surpass others or write your own unique style of work, it will be difficult to get out of the circle.

Does the introduction look a bit like the fairy book? I quite liked that one, so read this one

Very interesting, good luck to the author. I just feel that there are still some problems. For example, the heroine's two best friends are dispensable in the plot, and there is too little description. There are also some plot details and foreshadowing issues. How the Dragonborn leader comes back is not mentioned. Why did he cooperate with the evil god to drive away the real dragon? The last thing is my own taste. For example, what XX doesn't know is what it is like. It was very strange to read, a bit out of sync with the plot, and a bit like a spoiler, without the hint of hints. If it is well written, there is no need for this. Readers will guess the character's growth based on the plot, which is a bit superfluous.

The first story was well written, but the second one didn't feel right The protagonist's transformation made people feel watery, and just helping the heroine awaken to a physical constitution would make her weak.

I feel that the plot and routines are a bit like Tomato's book, Life Simulation Sword Fairy? Has the author read that book?

The pace is good, there is no lag, it is relatively compact, and the reading is quite smooth. There are no obstacles, and there is not a lot of information that makes you tired at the beginning. Are there any spoilers below? Hmm.... The first copy is so sweet to me, it's quite beautiful. In the second dungeon, I feel that becoming a Taoist couple is a bit too fast. It would be more interesting to push back the point of becoming a Taoist couple, maintain the master-disciple relationship, and depict the inner entanglement of the female protagonist and the ambiguous feeling with the male protagonist. It would be better to cultivate the emotions a little more maturely. In addition, I didn't understand the inner demon part, and although it is said to be full of possessiveness, this attribute is not obvious, and the slightly yandere attribute after that is not reflected at all. If you want to go towards the portrayal of a heavy girl, I feel that it is too easy to start. There's not much else to it, overall it's good-looking and in line with my taste, and I hope to continue. In addition, if you expand the second copy, it will become a new novel. The setting is quite classic. After you refine it and expand it, it will be another multi-female Shura field.

The writing is good, why is there no one here?

Not enough😭

Boer update soon, I voted 4 monthly votes

At least change the font, this font is too blurry

Why is there no more updates, so it's said to be unfinished?

In fact, I think the main problem with this article is that there is no connection between the characters in the three chapters. The only connection is the jealousy in reality. Personally I prefer watching the latter part. Moreover, this type of article focuses on being short and quick. To enjoy it, it must be intensive. The first chapter is really good, but later on it feels like it has shortcomings. Moreover, if you catch up with the update, you will feel confused and pass by hastily. Recently I saw an article that did a pretty good job of going back and forth on the same timeline. The theory that a gun in front will go off in the back. There is a sense of connection. I'm not an experienced reader either, so this is just my humble opinion. 🙂