Zhutian: a Martial Arts Journey Starting from Nuanxue

General plot: Once upon a time, there was a dynasty of snakes that lasted for seven thousand years. The dynasty relied on the god Ho Luo to perform human sacrifices and massacre other "bad people", making the people miserable and angry. Later, just like the story of the Demon King and the Hero, five friends worked together to overthrow the Snake Dynasty, sealed the God Ho Luo with a blood alliance, and established the Dragon Dynasty. These five people are the ancestors of the five families of dragon, tiger, pig, crane and turtle in the future. The Dragon Dynasty has existed for more than four hundred years, but it has also begun to decline. The five major families that were once close to each other gradually began to have their own little thoughts. In order to consolidate the relationship, the contemporary Dragon Emperor married women from the Hu family and the Zhu family, and each gave birth to a child. However, the Zhu family girl bribed the Hu family girl's maid (later the Jade Concubine) and conspired to set fire to the Hu family girl. However, the child was spared by the Jade Concubine. The baby floated down the river and was raised by the sage Pingtian, who is the original protagonist Bi Yan. The daughter of the Zhu family is actually the product of the Zhu family's fornication and has no blood from the Long family. This is the strategy set by the head of the Zhu family, Lu Kunhai - to secretly replace the Long family. You have been the emperor for so long, so it's time for me to replace the Zhu family. But just at this time, the seal of God Ho Luo was loosened, and a huge white lotus with eyes grew covering the whole city. White lotus is not afraid of water or fire, and even if it is chopped with a knife or an ax, it will not be able to damage it at all. The white lotus constantly spits out a white floc. Once ordinary people come into contact with it, it will turn into a living zombie monster, known as Nuanxue in history. If the seal is loose, then the five major families need to work together to strengthen the seal again. But the contemporary Dragon Emperor Ji Xia is no longer what he used to be, and his body is weak. The Turtle family proposed to let the prince ascend the throne, but the Pig family strongly opposed it (once he ascended the throne and found out that he did not have the blood of the Long family, wouldn't the secret be exposed)? As a last resort, the Turtle family took out the sword tomb seal that assisted the blood alliance seal. The latter relied on the power of the earth's dragon veins to strengthen the original seal. The price was that the Dragon Emperor had to be fixed on the throne and not allowed to leave. This time the five major families worked together to cast the blood alliance seal, and even the Zhu family really helped because he wanted glory and wealth, not the release of the evil god. However, something went wrong with the seal, and it was the He family that went wrong. The He family's unique skill is stargazing. They can establish contact with the stars and thus serve as Si Tianjian. During the sealing, the stars whispered in the ears of the head of the He family, telling them all the Zhu family's conspiracy - so the He family went crazy after realizing that the Long family was extinct, the seal was inevitable, and the Ho Luo God was destined to corrupt the people. "It doesn't matter whether it's sealed or not, the end of the world is inevitable, so why should I try so hard?" So the He family returned to the island where the family was stationed, closed off the outside world, and began to enjoy the joy before the end, calling the protagonist a "belated hero." After the seal failed, the Zhu family also returned to their jurisdiction and began to capture people for transformation experiments. Lu Kunhai did countless evil things and transformed himself into a giant monster that was not afraid of Nuanxue in an attempt to escape liquidation. Let's talk about the Turtle family and the Hu family. These two are quite loyal, both civilized and military. The Turtle family is a scientific researcher, and the head of the family, Zhao Changgeng, even developed a Gundam robot. Zhao Changgeng discovered that Nuan Xue was only effective against flesh and blood creatures, so he created a mechanism to block the outside world. He began to study Nuan Xue. The seal of the sword tomb, the essence of Nuan Xue, and even the origin of He Luo Shen were all the results of his research. However, human power was no match for the magical power, and the Gui family could not find a way to counter Nuan Xue. There is an extremist under Zhao Changgeng named Mo Tianwen (the old man from the agency) who plans to engage in mechanical ascension - everyone will become a agency man, so they will no longer be afraid of Nuanxue. Because he was too extreme, he was imprisoned by Zhao Changgeng. The Hu family serves as the general. The head of the Hu family, Qin Fen, guards the gate of the palace, killing countless living corpses and demons, and protecting the Dragon Emperor from being disturbed. However, he also knows that things are getting worse and worse, and the Dragon Emperor has no way to recover. Finally, let's talk about the protagonist. The protagonist was raised by the Pingtian Saint and taught the killer skills. Saint Pingtian is the leader of the Loving Mother Cult. He received an oracle from the Loving Mother God in his dream, so he believes that the chaos in the world is all the result of the retrograde actions of the five major families, and the protagonist is the savior recognized by the Loving Mother. As long as the protagonist defeats the five major families, the world will definitely get better. Unfortunately, the loving mother is also the vest of He Luo Shen. The reason why she does this is to grab the last blood of the Long family and break the seal. According to the game's storyline, God Ho finally succeeded in tricking the protagonist into destroying the five major families, and then cast a spell to put the protagonist into eternal sleep. During this period, all living things in the world were basically exterminated by God Ho. A very small number of people united together, transformed themselves into machinemen, and went to Turtle's house to take away the core of Gundam's Vientiane, because only this thing, which can be called infinite energy, can use the secret of time to help the protagonist resurrect from the dead to fight against Ho. And with the help of the sword spirit (a talent of the Long family, his father can also wield four swords, the protagonist is more powerful and can wield seven) and the suspected land god (other minor gods who can't deal with Ho Luo), he gradually wakes up from his dream and starts the final struggle with God Ho Luo... (Actually, the DLC is a bit forgotten, except for the naked body and beautiful back of God Ho Luo. I don't remember anything else, I only know that it roughly tells the story of the origin of God Ho Luo)

The recent chapters have lost their focus a bit, look at the title of your book, and then look at the techniques used by the main character now. Hasn't this lost its core appeal? Being in the Hong Kong comic world doesn't mean that you have to use the martial arts from the Hong Kong comic world. It's okay to say that the internal martial arts magic weapon doesn't need to be of the Nuanxue type. The protagonist is now majoring in Shiquan Martial Arts and Purple Thunder Sword Technique, so why not change the title of the book? To be honest, Nuan Xue's martial arts setting is high enough and useful. They are all martial arts passed down by gods. Is the purple thunder sword technique more effective than my sun and moon flow? Isn't it powerful for the judge to kill people on a large scale? Isn't the divine movement mechanism higher than the inexplicable Shiquan Martial Arts? If nothing else, you can let the protagonist learn the Purple Thunder Sword Technique, with the Furious Thunder King Kong as the main Purple Thunder Sword Technique as the supplement, and an entry that has mastered many of Zi Lei's awesome points will definitely be more attractive than the so-called dual cultivation of swords and swords. Then there is no foreshadowing of the protagonist's personality changes. The previous changes are not thorough enough. To be honest, I think the heroic approach is inappropriate at this stage. Not long after he came out of Nuan Xue's rotten world, it only made sense that he would slowly become normal after being half crazy and half crazy and killing He Luo. Finally, don't think about wanting everything. Your purity will not make readers think that the protagonist is very strong. It will only make people feel baffled by the sword and sword and the complete martial arts. Either abandon the Hong Kong comic series, practice multiple entry effects, and focus on Nuanxueliu to retain the existing readers attracted by the title of the book. Or consider changing the name, focusing on martial arts in Hong Kong comics, and treating the Nuanxue series as a system plug-in. If you want everything, you won't be able to please both ends.

Isn't Nuan Xue a bit of a supermodel as a starting point?

Overall, it's okay. I think of a normal time traveler. It's not like others. He's either a loser or pretending to be cool. He also pretends to be awkward. I finally see a normal protagonist. He runs away if he can't be beaten. He knows what's good and what's bad and doesn't kill innocent people indiscriminately.

To be honest, the protagonist can refine the masterless magic weapon, but there are some magic weapons such as Tianjing that you cannot refine at all. And the leader of the army has already decided it. That is the leader of the great goddess Nuwa, the Saint. Nangong Wentian, Nangong Great God. In this case, Tian Jing Nuwa can only lend it to you at most, and it is impossible to refine it for you.

I'm so bored lately. What's the biggest difficulty in writing Hong Kong comics? That is unknown, and the plot is protracted and boring! I don't know how to arrange dungeons Iron General Zongheng is really not well-known on the Internet today. The process should be faster, kill what should be killed, and solve it as soon as possible. There is no need to fight with some characters. The protagonist is obviously capable of ending the battle quickly. Wind and Cloud Divine Weapon Dragon and Tiger are already the most popular. It is enough to write down these three series and related details in detail. The others should be brushed up as a copy, and those that can be briefly described will be skipped Generally in the main world, Dragon, Tiger, Wind and Cloud has the most, and there are few divine soldiers. I've seen it, but because of the Little Divine Soldier, it's still very famous, so I can write it, and the setting of the Divine Soldier is still very extensive In general, these three series are almost enough to be written interchangeably. You still have Nuanxue in the main line Iron General Zongheng can't improve his combat effectiveness in stages, and he doesn't have a high reputation, so it's just an over-the-top chapter to open a copy Hurry up and cut it, I'm too lazy to order it, you can tell what p words are written just by looking at the chapter names.

What I'm writing is getting more and more wrong. Why are there always people who don't make any money but just get sick?

When I say eunuch, I mean eunuch, I don't even bother to make an announcement Author, Ni 🐎 is gone

Since being plotted, pig's feet have been deflated everywhere. Is it really good to write a refreshing article like this?

I just pulled it after I pulled out Emperor Hater. It's not interesting to look at it twice.

What, he was beaten to death by He Luo Shen?

I haven't even reached 50 chapters since August 30th. Let's not talk about the plot. The settings are becoming more and more mixed. Games are not games. Hong Kong comics are not Hong Kong comics. I can't write them. If you can be more violent and crazier, you won't be half-dead like now. I can't stand it anymore. I hope to see you again.

Let me put the conclusion first The author's writing style is good, the subject matter is also great, and it is readable. But the plot concept is a little bit cliché. In fact, many unlimited streams are very good in the early stage, but the reason why they rush out in the later stage is that they also want this and that. In fact, the most important reason to create an invincible character is not to find a reason for his invincibility, but to have a prominent style of painting. As long as the painting style is outstanding, even an inexplicable "super power" can make the character stand upright. I have only read twenty or thirty chapters so far. The story laid out by the author at the beginning is very good, but after saving Gu Gang, it is a bit cliche. The core ability is the flying sword, so don't use the "Purple Thunder Seven Strikes" sword technique. Not only does the painting style conflict with it, it also conflicts with the cold-faced and enthusiastic ancient hero character in the front. To create Yan Chixia's character, you don't want me to save you, and I have to wait for you to repay me. Of course, part of the appeal of Mysterious Weapon Mystery may be the Shenwei, but my personal opinion is that if you want to come up with a good book, don't fall into the trap of constantly looking for chocolate. Constantly looking for the next piece of chocolate, looking for and polishing the plot, then throwing it away. This is the problem with many blockbusters. They are too lazy to write a book with potential in the early stage. The author's writing is good and his values ​​​​are also very good. Don't imitate the 70% of people who jumped on the street in Qidian! Martial arts and martial arts, writing the word "xia" well is the rhythm of a book conferring the title of god.

Many novels are like this. The writing is good and the plot is good, but the core is a piece of shit that makes people unable to finish it.

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Could it be that the author couldn't continue writing and wanted to be a eunuch? The update time is becoming more and more unstable in the past two days, and it is getting interrupted day by day. If you really can't continue writing, just finish it and start a new book. Don't waste everyone's time.

I used to play Wind Walker Lei Yi with a very high winning rate. I originally thought that this genre was the best, but it was still the same until dlc1 came out and I changed to Shenxing. Then I changed to Fire 2 Fighting Endless, but the result remained the same. Finally, when dlc2 came out, I changed to Mother Seal Kaitian. It wasn't until this time that I realized that it was me who was the best.

Open the world of Sea Tiger II Location: Brazil Detailed address: Amazon No. 114514 Stone Mountain Scene characters: Boss/Ji Tou Si Protagonist: Diao Shao Goose (replacement object) Friendly guest: Lan Mengmeng/Lantong Tong Main mission: Escape from the cave Side mission 1: Three months of understanding Side mission 2: Blast them away Final mission: The strongest person in the world

I read a few chapters after it was released and stopped reading. It didn't look like it was written by one person before it was released. The plot was a bit new before it was released. After it was released, it became a standard assembly-line online novel, full of clichéd plots and writing styles. It is reasonable to stop updating and run away.

😰 There has been no update for two days. Someone can help me.

Just cut it, it makes me feel uncomfortable when you write it 😒

The writing is quite good. In fact, these worlds are quite interesting. I haven't updated them in a few days. I don't know what to do 🙂

From two updates a day at the beginning, to once a day later, sometimes not at all, and now it's like a eunuch.

I stopped updating all of a sudden, it was obvious that something was wrong with my life.