The Number One Scholar in the Red Mansion

Don't lick Jia's family. This kind of thing is already ruined on the street. You don't even want to see it. Basically everyone

The No. 1 Pick is too conspicuous, so change it to the No. 3 Pick. The treatment is actually about the same.

In the early stage, it is a relatively routine imperial examination essay, and the plot is relatively stable. After the protagonist is reborn, his memory is outstanding, his imperial examination craftsmanship is smooth, and he then becomes a famous teacher. . . The advantage is that the writing style is acceptable, but there are often inconsistent descriptions and confusing names in the article. For example, the protagonist is set to be thirteen years old, but there are several places where he looks seventeen or eighteen years old, and there are a few typos in the chapters. In addition, the handling of interpersonal relationships is relatively shallow. At present, most of the supporting characters seem to be very superficial. (However, they are all supporting characters with the same surname. However, only Daiyu has a little role in the Jin Chai in the Raiders. Let's wait and see.) Finally, although it is a novel about Red Mansions, it seems that the Jin Chai will appear later, and there is no Yuanzi scene in the first hundred chapters. To sum up, if the author is not a supervisor and is not tired of the old-fashioned plot of the imperial examination, he can add it to the bookshelf and slowly catch up on it to pass the time November 28th The author finally started to push the plot, and asked the protagonist's teacher Yang Shilang to appoint the protagonist to Beijing to investigate the transfer of interests of the Zhen and Jia families with the help of his kinship with the Jia family. In this way, the map was finally changed to the Jia family in the capital. Those who like to see Jin Chai finally waited. At the same time, the author is also getting better at promoting the plot. The two plots of dealing with Jia Lian's lack of money and beating and testing Jia Yucun are both lively and interesting, and at the same time not too brainless. Worth a look.

Come on, Feng Ju, the writing style is great, so far it looks like food +

What is the protagonist's motive for poisoning Jia She? This is a very sudden turn in the whole story, not to mention that Jia She is the uncle of the protagonist. Although he has not met a few times, there is no hatred. It is said that the protagonist has never killed anyone in his past life. Jia She kills when he says to kill, and then turns around to help Jia Lian write memorials and hold funerals. I only saw a ruthless and duplicitous jackal. With such a person, would Sister Lin be scared to death if she slept next to him at night? The main character is talking in his sleep or drunk. As mentioned before, the protagonist told the maids in the courtyard several times not to go out. Everyone knew that Jia She was lustful, so the protagonist was afraid that Jia She would make Qingwen kiss her, so he acted first? Isn't it ridiculous? If you were afraid of this, you shouldn't have accepted the maid when I gave it to you. You shouldn't live in Jia's house either. Wouldn't it be convenient to live outside without having to live under someone else's roof? Furthermore, why does the protagonist live in Rongguo Mansion? In order not to mention the intersection with Jin Chai, the other purpose is of course to complete the task given to him by the teacher and conduct a secret investigation. What are the benefits of killing Jia She? You have only been in Jia Mansion for a few days, and your footing is not yet stable. How much do you know about the background of Guogong Mansion? The mysterious death of Jia She will definitely arouse the vigilance of the people in the palace. If the emperor can't find the murderer, won't he send someone to keep an eye on him secretly? It's a matter of one sentence. How will the protagonist investigate in the future? If the guarantee is not complete, the truth will be exposed. I secretly investigated a matter that should be low-key, and suddenly resorted to very violent methods. This was even though Jia She had not provoked the protagonist at all. If the protagonist is targeted in the future, will he also kill everyone who provokes you? That's not how it works. Don't say that the protagonist just didn't expect that Jia She didn't go out, and was accidentally hit, so he killed him as a last resort. You prepared the poison in advance, which shows that you were prepared to kill Jia She. But this is inherently contradictory and lacks motivation. I hope the author will write down the reasons for doing this later. The book is a good book. Come on, author, don't be a eunuch.

Good looking, too few updates😢😢

The writing is quite good. If the emotional line can also be written well, the score of this book should not be bad.

The writing is quite good, I look forward to the follow-up 😍

It's well written, but the pace is a bit slow.

The book is really good, but I can't get good grades, so I can only support it by subscribing every day. I will accept it even if it is cut off in the future.

I typed a lot of words over and over, but it was hard to describe how I felt. My only request is to update it as soon as possible, come on

The author's writing is beautiful! Like it

The reason for the poor results is that the number of words is too few and the plot is not developed. Besides, the most attractive part of writing about Red Mansions is not to change your destiny. If you write slowly, the results will be good. After all, Dream of Red Mansions is also a good subject.

The writing is very good, it doesn't matter if it's slow, I'll add more after it's released, if it's not too bad it can still produce results.

Some write books as a side job, some as a way to support their families, and this kind of subject matter is niche. I hope I can finish the book and it will be well written.

Why don't you look at the character cards? I feel like many people in Red Mansion read the character cards and then decide whether to read them or not.

I hope there won't be any stories about being ostracized in the Jia family, so please keep your distance.

Two monthly passes support it

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Please tell me whether it's a monthly update or a weekly update. At least there's a signal.

There are still people voting for you on the 11th. Is it true? 😭

I went to scan for new books today, and I suddenly found out that a new book has been opened. That's all here 😭😭😭

No, this is what it looks like? It's a pity. It's a very good imperial examination essay.

Where are these 2 chapters? Why can't I see them?