Step into the Door of the End

Now that I got it, it's fate, so I'll give you a collection first 🙂

At present, there are two fatal weaknesses: The first protagonist is not obvious enough. I can probably tell that Mammon is the protagonist, but most readers probably don't have the patience to distinguish it in detail. The contradiction in the second opening chapter is not prominent. According to the current mainstream trend of online writing, even if there is no explicit fierce conflict, at least one point should be mentioned to lead to the next plot As for the description of other irrelevant details such as scenery and artifacts, it is too detailed and cumbersome, and the setting is relatively unfamiliar. These are all minor problems Generally speaking, I personally estimate that the chances of signing a contract are not too high. , You have to be mentally prepared In fact, these mistakes are easy for newcomers to make. I made them all when I wrote my first book. Later, I cut off the first dozen chapters and rewrote it before I successfully signed the contract and put it on the shelves After mentioning the shortcomings, let's mention the advantages: The author should have received enough education and knowledge, the writing should be smooth, the transitions between paragraphs should not be stiff, and the character dialogue should not be awkward. It is recommended to watch the live broadcast of the editors. It contains the key points of signing a contract. As long as you use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, you can still sign a contract