Japanese Literary Giant, Starting to Save the Desperate Girl

The author's skills are good, and it can be seen that he has some foundation, but there are still many problems. For example, after the first few chapters, the narrative logic becomes confusing, and two unrelated things are often mixed together without any foreshadowing. The dialogue logic is also very poor. When a character asks a question, the protagonist rarely answers directly, and even suddenly inserts a large number of meaningless paragraphs, which is really annoying. Moreover, the scenes of slaps in the face and pretentiousness in this book are neither necessary nor logical. For example, the part about Ihara Hibiki is very unnatural. As a powerful and wealthy man, he must look down on the protagonist, but as an entrepreneur, he suddenly cursed without logic after seeing the protagonist's dress. He does not have the shrewdness of an adult in dealing with people. It is pretentious for the sake of pretentiousness. This is definitely unreasonable, and the author's pretentious plot is not good. It is better to delete these plots to avoid disgusting people.

I didn't hesitate, but I felt strangely familiar when I saw this. I realized that I had watched "Tokyo Literary Man, Beginning with Saving the Girl" before.

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The title Saving the Desperate Girl always reminds me of a certain book🤔

Don't make any money? Faced with a hot-selling author, he forced himself to retreat. The plot was originally too slow to advance. It was not enough to have a disgusting editor, so another one was added. Authors with popular works can go anywhere, and there is more than one author with the same reputation. It is not the case that one author is the only one. It's so annoying to watch.

What despair! I just saw a novel that appealed to my taste, but it was still a very young seedling🌱!

Okay, okay, the plot is okay and the writing is pretty good. Come on, author.

Although it looks okay, the brainless villains should be written less, which will greatly affect the perception.

There's nothing wrong with the writing. I feel it's better than most of the great master's emotional dramas.

Three monthly passes, can the author burn them all?

Just like the title, I have revised the long-running transitional chapter, and will continue to revise the previous content in the future.

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Is the author still around? 😐

The emotional line of the two people's world is really good. I hope the author can adjust his condition and return to continue writing 😌

Too lazy to talk nonsense, I still welcome the author to come back and continue writing 😢

Waiting for you to come back😆