Tianju

All the recommendation votes are given to you, come on

Encouragement

Come on, author, keep an eye on you!

Let me tell you my opinion. First of all, your writing style is not bad, but the expression and writing of the article should be improved. First of all, the first few chapters of the characters are written in the form of inner monologues. It feels like writing a running account. It is difficult to be involved in it when reading, and it is a bit boring. The second fighting scene is a bit simpler. The character descriptions feel superficial and the image cannot be established. Especially the emperor's daughter, as a high-ranking figure, cannot be felt at all. Whether it is the portrayal of the image or the description of the character, it is too ordinary and the character is not distinctive. I can't appreciate the domineering, majestic and noble temperament of the so-called emperor's daughter, as well as the wisdom of the city. The dialogue between the characters is very bland, and it is better to be more careful with the wording. A real big shot can scare people with just one look, and a simple sentence or a small movement has profound meaning. The above is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't comment. Thank you. If you don't like it, just pretend I didn't say it.