Heroes of the Ten Kingdoms

I haven't finished reading the examination of the Impermanence Temple yet, but I think I understand how to read this book. Just accept the unique setting of this book and focus on the plot of the book itself. Whether you are literate or not is a setting. Asking means you have been taught, it is not important. How to excrete in the cave for so many days is just a setting, it is not important. If you look at other novels, they don't write about this shameful thing. When watching the Impermanent Menstruation, I had no water or food for several days, was poisoned and injured, and why I couldn't die. These are all settings, not important. You can only continue watching if you accept it. If you don't accept it, you can leave. Others were injured in the fight to the death, stabbed with swords, or even had their hands broken. How could they still be alive without professional treatment? There was no blood loss or inflammation. They were all settings and not important. Summary: This is an imaginary world, which is different from our earth, and people's physiques are also different. Don't put the logic of the earth here, just concentrate on watching the author advance the plot to satisfy your curiosity. You see, this is how you convince yourself. No way, I really like martial arts, and I have long given up reading other novels. This author's writing style is indeed outstanding. Those little flaws that look awkward are all settings and trivial matters. As long as the plot keeps moving forward, it doesn't matter. I don't know if I'm charging or flying, maybe it's the Cyclone Barb Wolf 🙂

The writing is good, the details are well described, and it is enhanced by the elements of sound and color. It is vivid and vivid, and it is worth reading.

The writing is good, but I feel like it's still lacking in some places. Let's keep up the good work.

But it's enough to relieve boredom, just like the salty peanut after a strong drink.

There is a female protagonist, I chase her 😍😍😍

There is a female protagonist, I want to see it😍😍😍

The male protagonist has always been manipulated by others, once or twice is enough, it has always been so boring.

There are some bugs in the front, there is no food, babies are being born non-stop, the protagonist can read, and the broken leg in the front seems to be fine.

It's very sad to say, because there is no food to feed the family due to famine, the protagonist goes to bury his newborn sister for the fifth time. Even if you give birth once a year, it still takes 5 years. A lot of people in the village starve to death. After so many years of famine, they never forget to work hard to create humans every year.

Those who are attracted by the Silver Alliance step on me 🤓

I just like that Wenwen's green writing and green hat have the flavor of traditional martial arts 😍

Seeing that clues are gradually emerging now, the protagonist is too passive and has no opinion of his own. Or in the author's "general trend", the protagonist has no "self-interest" at all and is all driven by emotions. However, the author does not specifically write the emotional line as the main line, so the protagonist is really quite pale, especially when Daliao appears. When the general trend requires a protagonist, he acts as a warrior who promotes the plot. When the general trend passes and the map needs to be changed, he relies on emotion to change the map. Therefore, the description of the emotional line needs to be forward, and there is no need to write it at all. It is all calculated by others, and it is really a tool.

The plot is a bit ridiculous. Two famous figures in the world actually starved five of their children to death!

This writing style defies all kinds of great gods.

Excessive metaphors, flashy words

The author has the freedom to write however he wants! Readers are free to criticize as much as they want! Don't engage in double standards!

There is a reason for the poor performance. The writing is pretty good and the level is very high, but the plot really has some shortcomings: the foreshadowing and hints can be said to be either incomprehensible to readers or missing. It is difficult to explain why the characters in the novel have such motivations, which makes readers feel very abrupt and unreasonable. If this is too abrupt, readers will naturally complain and abandon the book.

The author is very good at writing small scenes and portraying characters. However, the story's fluency and rationality are insufficient, and the twists and methods of promoting plot development appear unfamiliar. I estimate that either the author conceived the scenes one by one and then found a way to connect them. Either I have read enough books, so I have enough reference samples when writing scenes and characterizations, but because this is my first time writing a book, I can't handle the details well. If you can accept it, you can read it, and if you can't accept it, you can look forward to the next book. I think he can definitely write something famous.

A good book, but the problem is that the plot is really hard to study in detail, it's full of contradictions 😥

Too literary, either this lunatic or that lunatic, and there are a lot of adjectives. I am not saying that I hate literary youths, but it is too much and too illogical. In order to maintain the character of the main character, it is too illogical. Every fart by a character has a profound meaning. If you say "I know you didn't eat today", the narrator will have to follow him to see through people's hearts! Everyone has a lot of stories about suffering and hatred. The protagonist is hanging on the wall + Jack Su's halo is fully activated. I don't know how Shen Jihuan fell in love with the protagonist. There is also Xiao Ou, the first light of life in the code. The protagonist only said one sentence, sorry for not scaring you. It can make her feel that she can die. What does this kind of plot mean? What kind of saintess from the Liao Kingdom makes her own decisions and lets the protagonist see her naked body and then inexplicably says "Man, I must get you". What does this mean in Longshan Village? The protagonist Duan didn't want to meddle in others' business, and Lan Hua always wanted to be a chivalrous person. I'm not saying that the protagonist must save people, but if you have the word "chivalrous" in the title of your book, and then the supporting character wants to save people and the protagonist doesn't want to meddle in other people's business, the protagonist will go down in this comparison, and then there is He decided to take action when he saw that the leader of the village was the eldest brother. After rescuing the people, he said something about the injustice on the road, drew a sword to help, and had various inner activities to angrily kill the enemy and be compassionate. This is not consistent with your previous attitude of not wanting to meddle in other people's business. . Too many flaws

The writing is very good, but I came here to read Xia. I haven't seen Xia yet, not even the shadow of Xia. It's a bit hard to stick to it.

This is called a novel. Ninety-nine percent of the writing in the starting point is just pandering. The author is wagging his tail. It is either a time travel or a system, and there is nothing of his own.

The author wanted to use a very old writing method to write a very new book, but ended up writing it in four different ways.

... Just like a rotten egg in a bowl... Don't write stinky, don't write egg, don't write bowl...

There are many contradictions, such as AI grabbing a knife, but it is undeniable that the writing is generally very good. Many details do not seem to be written by the author himself. There are many self-contradictions and clerical errors. There is a feeling that the author is not controlling the direction of the story.

I just read chapter 9 and I saw a lot of poisonous spots. I hope he can come back to his true self in the future. What kind of alloy is the box made of? It can't be opened. Twenty years have passed since two people gave birth to a child.

It's so awesome, but it's just like that at first glance. The writing is not very good, the sentences are not fluent, the dialogue is like a baby, it's very awkward, the plot is average, and it's not interesting.

My ribs are broken, but I'm fine. Are I a superhuman?

It's totally mindless, the protagonist is so kind to the end

After reading the first 500 words, I felt that the AI ​​flavor was quite strong.