People Are Covering the Sky, Mortals Are Cultivating Immortals

This one should be pounced on too. If you are tough, find someone tough. If fighting is fun, fighting is fun. Just sew the "Eternal Life" system and "Shading the Sky" together, and your results will be much better. Determined to sew "Mortal" and "Zhetian" together, Gou Daoliu and Battle Shuang turned into a pot of random stew. If you don't attack the street, who will?

You can either write about an isolated autistic child who is just a mortal, or you can write about the battle of a peerless genius. Don't sew the two together and write them like four

Is the mortal system too weak?

To compare the strength of the system, I only look at the destructive power described in words by the original author. Looking at the comment section, there are many people who use nouns to compare combat effectiveness and system, which makes me speechless. How can the mortal cultivation system be compared with the Zhetian system? The combat effectiveness is not on the same level. Mortals use magic weapons to fight with the sky-shattering people? If you punch it down, the magic weapon will turn into rubbish. Is the blood bar of the Heaven-shattering Man casually described in the original novel? Like the invincible Xiaoqiang, his broken body can be repaired in minutes. Would you like to try breaking your body to pieces in the mortal system? Minutes later, only the remnant soul was left hiding in that corner. And the mortal system does not have a batch of magic weapons with weak combat effectiveness, and the Zhetian World does not lack magic weapons. I read the book to see the combat effectiveness and system. I only read the textual description of the original author, and did not look at the imagination and comparison of netizens.

Qi-building foundation-building Nascent Soul actually appeared on Jindan Avenue? Do you still have spiritual roots? Mortals can cultivate immortality just as long as they can cultivate immortality. How about the whole Taizhang method? The Supreme Master has not come out to cultivate his spiritual roots. What if there are some techniques that the spiritual roots require to be taught? Everyone can cultivate the golden elixir path! The whole thing was so different that I lost my mood to watch it for a moment.

While telling others to be stubborn. Go on an adventure with people with bad intentions

There is no future for being a mortal cultivator in Zhetian

This novel can only be said to be a great failure, a very typical negative case. The title is clearly about people covering the sky and cultivating mortal laws, so the mortal laws should appear at the end of the first chapter or the beginning of the second chapter. As a result, the book only appeared in more than ten chapters. It is a typical immature writing method for novices 😅

I have lost consciousness several times after reading five of them. In fantasy novels about cultivating immortals, don't always write about the protagonist losing consciousness. This is a poisonous point. Readers will become the protagonist and will be very disgusted when they see it written like this. In addition, the main character is written very brainlessly. Two senior brothers approached him to collect herbs. 8 Didn't agree without thinking about it at all, and they didn't even think about why they approached you and whether you were qualified or not.

Putting aside the structure of this book, the writing and character creation are a bit poor. The protagonist taught his younger sister all kinds of morals, but as a result, his own behavior always showed clear stupidity. The brainless protagonist is unlikable. He can be bad or blameworthy, but he cannot be stupid, otherwise the author will suspect that you are swearing. And most importantly, the protagonist's surname is Gu, not Weiwei. Maybe the author likes this female character very much, but in the description, I didn't see the charm of this character, I just felt it was water, a huge amount of water.

I ran around in my mind and didn't know where to start complaining. I was speechless and wanted to catch the author and beat him up.

This book is a must-have. The protagonist is like a fool. The protagonist actually has the same IQ as the author. Weiwei speaks eloquently, but he himself is like a fool. He spreads random things and doesn't understand even if his wealth is not revealed.

This protagonist has no brains at all and actively seeks death too much 😴. First, a mortal goes to a dangerous place with a monk. How can he trust others so easily! Why did he take the initiative to go to a dangerous place to fight with wild beasts and ended up getting himself killed? Later, he didn't know the difference between a mortal cultivator and a Zhetian cultivator, so he dared to randomly find a life-and-death fight with a cultivator who took the initiative to Zhetian (if someone else comes to kill him, you follow him, but you have to kill him).

The systems are different, and the worlds are also different. Generally, there is no way to compare them. Because the true immortals in some worlds can be so weak that they only need to practice five realms before becoming an immortal. For example, in "The New White Snake Asks the Immortal", after Nascent Soul one becomes Mahayana, and after Mahayana one becomes a real immortal. In the female videos, the training system is simpler, the monks are less destructive, the so-called "true immortals" are weaker, and the author mainly focuses on talking about love. The training system created by Wangyu's Mortal series is far inferior to the Shetian trilogy in terms of the monk's expressiveness. Although the mortal style has developed into a series, in some mortal systems, the old monster who transforms into a god can only move ten meters in one step. But in some mortal systems, such as "Gou Zai's First Saint Demon Sect", foundation building begins to play with concepts such as "fate", "karma", and "luck". But as the beginning of the Mortal stream, if it is generally a physical training system, of course the Mortal series of Wangyu should be the authoritative one. How well does Erwangyu's Mortal series compare to the training system of the Zhetian Trilogy? I can only say that it is extremely weak. Wangyu's mortal system is far inferior to the Shetian trilogy. Many people say that the Mahayana of mortals can reach the pinnacle of the great emperor or the supreme state of the perfect world, which is the last great realm before becoming an immortal. But the actual situation is that the world levels are different, the cultivation systems are different, the expressive power is also different, and the height and pattern of the Tao Fruit are also different. The so-called "true immortal" has a generally recognized standard, which is "the same life span as the heaven and the earth, the same age as the sun and the moon", that is, if the heaven and the earth are not dead, then I will not die. As long as I am not killed by others, the theoretical life span is endless. But there is a problem here, that is, what level of plane world do you live with? Is the "immortal world" where you rely on Dao Fruit the same thing as the "immortal world" of others? The fairy world in Li Xiaoyao's "The Legend of Sword and Fairy" and the fairy world in the Zhetian trilogy are both called "fairy world", and those who live the same life as the "fairy world" are called "true immortals", but are they the same thing? Do you think the real immortals in "Legend of Sword and Fairy" can compare to the real immortals in the "Zhe Tian Trilogy"? In the same way, are the "immortal world" and true immortality in Hua Qiangu's plane the same as the true immortality and immortal world in the eternal world? There is no comparison at all! If you still can't understand, just think about it, are the President of the United States and the President of Serbia the same thing? Yes, they are both presidents of the same country, but are they the same thing? Can we make a simple analogy between the true immortals in the Zhetian trilogy and the true immortals in the Mortal series? Of course they are not the same thing, right? Wangyu's own mortal training is limited. Judging from Wangyu's own expressiveness, he is not strong in the world. Although he is not weak, he is definitely not strong. And the cultivation efficiency is not too high. Some people may say that a monk's combat power is a manifestation of the height of the Tao Fruit he cultivates, but a monk's lifespan is also a manifestation of the Tao Fruit? The lifespan of a mortal is quite good. Those who say this probably have forgotten that the Zhetian Universe of later generations is an apocalyptic universe without immortal matter. The short lifespan of the monks of the Zhetian Universe is not their normal life span. To compare the lifespan, it must be compared with the comprehensive comparison of the Zhetian Trilogy, such as the chaotic ancient period of the perfect world. How long can the supreme beings in the perfect world live? They generally have a lifespan of several million years. If you find ways to extend your life such as elixirs, you can live for tens of millions of years. It's just that the ancient times were too chaotic and there were endless wars, so there were few monks who could die of old age naturally. The "upper realm giants" below, such as the Void Dao Realm and the Zhanwo Realm, also generally have a lifespan of one million years. This is the life span of a monk under normal circumstances. The Wangyu Mortal series is much less expressive. There is no comparison with the Zhe Tian Trilogy. Actually, I saw that when the author Dongbi wrote this book, many book friends had already reminded the author in the comment area and book friend circles that compared to the Zhetian trilogy series, the Wangyu Mortal series was too weak. There is no comparison at all. But the author insists on being stubborn and insists on writing, so if you don't fight, who will? To give you the simplest example, when did the cultivation system of the Zhe Tian Trilogy start to no longer simply start to accumulate extraordinary energy, but must realize the Tao? When was it? What about the training system of Wangyu's Mortal series? Since when did it become necessary for monks to attain enlightenment? Who should Wangyu's mortal system be compared with? It is suitable to compare with the series of novels by Tiancan Tudou. The protagonists of Tiancan Tudou's series of novels do not need enlightenment. The protagonists of "Fights Break the Sphere" and "Martial Universe" do not need enlightenment all the way to the completion of the game. They are all piles of pure extraordinary energy. As long as the energy of heaven and earth is given, the monk can advance. So Xiao Huohuo took more than 20 years to clear the Dou Qi Continent, and Lin Dong only spent more than ten years. Don't be surprised. They have only ascended to the Great Thousand World, and when they have reached the top level of the Great Thousand World, they still have little contact with the rules of heaven and earth. The descriptions are somewhat similar to the spiritual world and demon world in the Wangyu Mortal series, and even the so-called Great Thousand World of Tian Can Tudou is at a lower level. The layout of Wangyu's mortal series is higher. Monks can only begin to understand Tao and master the rules after they become immortals and practice in the immortal world to be the top powerhouse or close to the top powerhouse in that plane. Before, it was just a pile of pure energy. Wangyu's mortal system is comparable to the world planes written by Tiancan Tudou. If you insist on touching the world planes of the Ci Zhe Tian trilogy, people will think you are inexplicable and that the author has no ideas at all. However, what should be noted here is that some people will further belittle the cultivation efficiency of the mortal cultivation system, thinking that the efficiency of Wangyu's mortal cultivation system is too slow. For example, it takes decades to go from Qi training to foundation building, from foundation building to elixir formation, it generally takes more than a hundred years of hard work, and from elixir formation to Nascent Soul it takes hundreds of years. But please note that this hard training time is for monks with normal qualifications (second and third spiritual roots) and monks with normal cultivation resource supply (general family or direct lineage of the sect). If you have an almost unlimited supply of resources brought by Han Laomo's little green bottle, the recently popular animation Han Laomo's Wedding will tell you that even if you have four spiritual roots, you will still have a birth when you are over 200 years old. You can imagine that if you have Tianlinggen and a little green bottle, it is not too much for you to have a baby in thirty or forty years, right? If you have any special physique and the time is shortened, it is normal to have a baby in ten or twenty years. But on this basis, if you are the son of the world that was born in response to the calamity of the Small Thousand Plane, and the "Crystal of Origin", "Essence of the World", "Fetus of the Plane" and the like of the Small Thousand World are all handed to you as if they are free of money, then I dare say that you can also pass the Small Thousand World in ten or twenty years. If you put it in Dou Qi Continent, it would be Xiao Huohuo Dou Di. If you put it in Wu Dong Qian Kun, it would be Lin Dong Martial Ancestor. If you put it in the Mortal Realm Chapter of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, it would be that you have reached the Great Perfection of Divine Transformation and it's time to ascend to the upper realm. So, it is not that the cultivation efficiency of Wang Yu's mortal training system is low, but that the efficiency of Han Li's four spiritual roots is low. Generally speaking, Wangyu's mortal system is similar to those of Tiancan Tudou, except that the protagonists in Tiancan Tudou's works are basically children of a dimension who emerged from one world in response to the calamity. The world of heaven and earth is trying to sell iron and make ends meet, so they have to use all the good things they can to feed the protagonist. Mortal flow is not like this, so cultivation is slow. But if you analyze it carefully, it is actually the same. For example, you don't need to realize the Tao before you reach the peak of practice. Tiancan Tudou never even needs enlightenment.

At the beginning, the protagonist teaches Weiwei how to maintain a healthy attitude. I am also very happy with this protagonist. In the end, the protagonist, who is still a mortal, was "deceived" by two monks (invited, the protagonist had no doubts) to go outside to collect medicine. I thought the protagonist was going to show some kind of plot, some kind of reversal and plan. In the end, there was nothing, and he survived purely by the halo of the brainless protagonist. Also, I don't want to talk anymore

To say you eat shit is a high praise😓

The cultivation system is not a cultivation method that covers the sky and fights against the heaven and the earth. You can live until the end of the world, even if you kill the enemy and dance on his grave. The important thing is to write down the characteristics of the cultivation system. Don't make it look different. If the mortal cultivator system follows others' slogans of "covering the sky and covering the soul of the sky", it is using your own disadvantages and other people's advantages to fight for it.

I couldn't stand it in the first chapter. Could this be revealed from the protagonist's mouth? Now that the Kowloon coffin is coming soon, Weiwei is no longer a child. As a result, her words are full of childishness and innocence, and her character collapses. The protagonist has never started. He knows nothing about spiritual practice. With the intelligence shown in Weiwei's original work, even his younger sister can't possibly listen to the protagonist. Here Weiwei is as brainless as a silly Baitian. The protagonist also takes everything for granted. His heart is as high as the sky and his destiny is as thin as paper. He cannot cross the threshold of his own practice. He has no idea about the situation of practice. He still points fingers at others. You don't understand the way. What if something goes wrong?

Whoever wants to see this male protagonist who is a pure loser should watch it. Do you really think readers can get into this kind of loser? It would be better to just write about the main character cultivating in seclusion. This is more in line with cultivating immortals. The main character is not a native of Zhetian and has to fight with people every day to become enlightened.

In the first chapter, poison is released, and in the beginning, there are various output plots, predicting the future, and even saying that there will be a Nine Dragons pulling a coffin into the ancient restricted area in the future. A mortal is still cultivating immortality, let alone Han Li. His IQ and cognition are inferior to those of dogs.

The dog shook his head after seeing it. If a mortal is cultivating immortality, he can indeed see it, but forget about covering the sky and immortality. If you don't fight, you have no resources.

He deserves to have no results. The founder of the secret method that covers the sky is the Immortal Emperor. Compared with other methods, it has unlimited potential. There are a large number of scriptures and secret techniques in Zhetian's local secret realm, and there are several nine secrets with specific addresses waiting to be obtained. As a result, if you don't practice the secret realm method, it will be like having to cut off your leg and have to use a wheelchair.

I generally don't comment on novels, unless they are very special ones, and I really dare to say anything.

Damn the main text! And unlike time-travelers, the protagonist is not bad at all!

This time traveler has been pickled and is a dead eunuch

This is it. After watching it, I still want to see the protagonist Gou Dao Dacheng come out to show off. This show is too cool and keeps hooking me.

What a mess, you can't practice the Heaven-Zhetian method in Zhetian, you can only practice the mortal method, then the author, you can't eat when you're hungry, you can only eat💩

I don't know whether this person is a scumbag or something else. He dares to say anything and offend you with anything.

Fellow Taoists are welcome to read and comment!

I'm speechless. Why did the author use the immortal cultivation system of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality? If you want to apply it, why don't you use the immortal cultivation system and magic weapons of Yi Nian Xiao Yao. Although they are the same, you don't need to copy the magic weapons of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. Why use the mortal system when there are ready-made games?