Douluo: the Scientific Research at the Beginning Shocked Mr. Mu

Because it was first read by Q, then this book may not be promoted. The editor will probably tell me to cut it off. Would you guys watch if I came to Qidian 😭😭😭

It's really cool. I like this semi-refreshing feeling. It gives Douluo a bit of a technological shock. Just write the emotional line and make the heroine look like a person, like a stamp collector. If you really don't want to write, just downplay it. It's very good.

The content of farming in the early stage is almost full of excitement, improving strength, winning the hearts of beautiful women with the power of scientific research, and the favor of the strong, as well as slapping those who refuse to accept it. These contents are very interesting ... But just when I thought I would continue to write about farming until "the protagonist's strength improves", "the heroine or the harem candidate is determined", "stands in a high position with the help of the strong", and "becomes everyone's favorite". "Dai's Teacher", the plot suddenly changed. In order to realize his dream, the protagonist left Shrek Academy ... That's not to say that leaving is impossible. Let me give you an example. Qidian nuclear-powered battleships often play this trick. The protagonist is farming in a certain place. When he is about to become the strongest through farming, he suddenly leaves that place and everything has to start from scratch again. See It was itchy and very unpleasant, but... He still got the high-quality result. That's because he is an infinite flow. His farming plot is completed in the vast multiverse and high dimensions. The farming is interrupted at the beginning, and will be picked up later, and then become stronger ... But the author, yours is not an infinite flow, it is a farming novel in a single world, so you cannot follow the same method in writing. In Hua Lao, in order to maintain the coolness, the story must be limited to a single area, and the map cannot be changed - you can change it, but you must have the corresponding ability, ... Now, after changing the map, the coolness is interrupted, and forming a new coolness requires a certain amount of space, commonly known as the transition plot, and during this transition period, it is easy for readers who feel unhappy to run away.

This book has now officially entered the middle stage, and the next step is to develop power and farm. If you have any plots you want to see, you can reply in this building.

Wow, the author obviously tells the story very well, but the comment section is all vying for the heroine

As long as the Ice Emperor doesn't get together with that fat silkworm, that'll be fine. The original book made me angry.

Endless Cyber ​​Shennong, come out! ! ! !

New account? Douluo fan? Did the protagonist master the world's cutting-edge technology in his previous life? Like grand narratives? Who are you?

It was well written, but the relationship scenes were too awkward. It felt like there was no process, and I fell in love with it. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is very obvious. I will not fall in love with them, nor will I show such helplessness like someone who has never been in love.

I read about Lin Mo's life experience before he traveled through time. Because of his desire for power and intrigue, civilization destroyed each other and destroyed each other. Only the white desert of Antarctica was left, a virtual world where all the teachers were willing to die rather than live. I hope that after the protagonist travels through time, the decisiveness and decisiveness in the label will have a higher pattern, instead of the pretentious slap in the face and the upgrade of the diaosi in the cool article. I also hope to find a way out for the soul beasts, and even for the God Realm, to transcend the zero-sum game mentality of life and death, and use wisdom and momentum to overwhelm the opponent and force the same path, rather than pure physical destruction. Isn't the ending of the original world the same as Lin Mo's previous life? The Tang Shenwang's selfish desires, the soul beast civilization became extinct, the evil soul masters within the human race fought among themselves, the world was reduced in dimension, and everything was over. Looking at you Douluo, I came here to see the colorful and splendid and rich life world of Douluo. I want to see you give new ideas for solving Douluo problems and achieve harmony with yourself, harmony with human beings, harmony with nature, harmony with various racial civilizations, and the contention of a hundred schools of thought. I look forward to a gorgeous Douluo trend.

How about changing Xiao Huo to Xiao Huo Niang?

I personally feel that the writing is very good. Maybe it's because I am a science student. Anyway, I hope the author will stick to it.

In fact, the author also needs to consider what value the soul beast will have to mankind after creating his own soul rings and soul bones. When the soul master no longer needs the soul beast to break through, is it still necessary for the soul beast to exist? A suggestion here is to add a contract with the soul beast at the end. Similar to the soul beasts in other immortality novels, human soul masters can grow together with the soul beast through the contract and share the evolution of the soul bloodline. The soul beast can also enjoy the growth rate of humans through the pact, and because the entanglement of cause and effect with humans makes it more likely to succeed in overcoming the catastrophe.

It's really well written. It's hard to believe how such a good book has so many fans. This is much better than those books with more than 100,000 fans.

What do fans like to watch? Of course, I personally support multiple female protagonists.

The inexplicable literary youth is a bit awkward and often speaks only half of his words. However, the new book does not have this problem. But I read the old book after reading the new one, which is so tortured. When will the author optimize it?

Does this book have too many adjectives? Every look, every movement, every word is filled with various adjectives. Less than half of a chapter must be filled with adjectives.

It gives me the feeling of Zhuge Liang fighting Lu Bu hand to hand

Many people say licking. I think it's okay to lick anyone, as long as it's not a Japanese devil. There are many traitors licking Japanese devils and becoming their dogs.

Let's read the extra chapter about the past life first and then read the first chapter. The martial soul came out and made me cry. To be honest, it's better to just put the extra chapter in the first chapter.

Couldn't it be written by a medical expert?

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Does anyone have anything similar? Half of it is gone. It's as uncomfortable as detoxification.

After reading the first forty chapters, I have a good idea, but the rest is hard to describe. The basic conservation of energy is gone, and I am completely following my words, a bit omniscient and omnipotent. I started by making spiritual liquid, and then started giving lectures to help people heal martial spirits. , And then began to create soul bones, and by Chapter 40, a body that can accommodate the soul of the soul beast can be created. During this period, there are eight extraordinary meridians, large and small, martial soul transformation, soul power scalpel to treat diseases, to suppress the divine king's consciousness, and to rub the eyes of the Ice and Fire Instrument. Anyway, there is no explanation. It only takes one or two chapters. Once you know this, you will know how to do that. The author wants everything but doesn't write about how it came about. I feel that this is easier to write and that is easier to write. With so many ideas, I can write a different Douluo by myself. So much content is crammed into the plot of just over forty chapters. This is probably because the supreme and powerful creator of all things opened a trumpet out of boredom. Otherwise, how can we explain this omniscience and omnipotence?