Xiaoao Starts from Attacking Huashan

Not bad indeed! It has the spirit of youth, the seriousness of traditional martial arts, and serious dialogues. I especially can't stand the swearing all over the place, and I often use modern-style "I'm sorry" and the like. The main thing about writing Buji characters is their style and lack of restraint, rather than being full of foul language like a hooligan. He likes to write this kind of thing. It's so easy to write about martial arts in Hong Kong dramas, right?

It's so bad. Ever since I came down from the mountain, ever since I met Yue Lingshan, and now I've met Ren Yingying, I've been sickened even more by looking at it. I'm really out of my mind.

Is it possible for a swordsman to carry no sword with him?

The beginning was pretty good, but after going down the mountain, it gradually became unsatisfactory. There was no clear goal, and the protagonist kept using the reason that his identity could not be revealed. In the middle, he even made a cool move without a sword. The protagonist kept clamoring to go down the mountain, but in the end, he went down the mountain just to get the evil spirits in Fuzhou and the sword in Longquan? If others don't know the evil sword manual, why don't you know it? If this thing is a lot of trouble, how will it help your Sword Sect come out? How many treasure places are there in the gold plane? If you don't want to improve your martial arts skills and become a leader as soon as possible, you'll be playing house in the arena every day. If you keep pretending to be a pig, it will reduce your enjoyment. If you don't fight, who will?

The plot hasn't been fully developed yet, but the character design and writing are all well established. Although many people say that the author's personal settings are different from the original work, you don't need to pay too much attention to these in fan fiction. After all, if it is to be exactly the same, it is better to just read the original work.

I hope it will continue to be updated, and don't be too eunuch.

Single and long, no? If you don't reply, there will be a pitfall by default.

The title party is like many novels starting from Xuanwumen. It is estimated that it will not attack Huashan until the end of the book.

It's over, it's over, the updates haven't been right for the past two days, the author probably wants to cut it off

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I hope that the dispute over the sword energy can be resolved perfectly, so that the sword energy can be unified to revive Huashan, and no outsiders will be involved.

There are no big problems, it's great! ! ! !

It's well written, but a bit awkward. The protagonist is young and handsome, and has good martial arts skills. The things he did down the mountain should be famous in the world, but because of his status as a swordsman, he has to suppress his reputation, which seems uncomfortable.

It's not interesting for the protagonist to be tied up

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From chapter 34 onwards, the book is plot-oriented. You learn swordsmanship, have a heart-to-heart relationship with master and apprentice, become successful in swordsmanship, meet the escort agency by chance when you go down the mountain, and conquer the escort agency to lay the groundwork for establishing your own power. These contents are all pretty well written. In Chapter 34, Yue Lingshan appears, and the book has a lot more interaction with female characters. The author is not good at interacting with multiple female characters, and his writing is quite average. It is a pity that the plot description in the first 34 chapters is okay. Although there are some bugs, they do not affect the quality of the novel. As soon as several female characters that the author cannot write appeared on the scene, the plot that was foreshadowed in the past collapsed on the spot.

This book is well written, and it is a more traditional martial arts style that is comfortable to read.

I hope you won't be a eunuch. The reading experience is too poor. There is no notification of release and the updates are slow. It gives people the feeling of being a eunuch at any time.

Every time people think you are done, you procrastinately write a chapter or two and then continue to stop updating. If you decide to cut it, just post a post and say it directly. If you don't cut it, just keep writing. Isn't it interesting to procrastinate like this?

Stop updating. Why don't you write a description or something? Just be an ostrich.

Don't worry, there's nothing wrong with the story or writing, and the most important thing is that the flavor is right.

The writing was good at first, but then it went off the rails.

Keep it up, don't be a eunuch, it's a rare good book! Come on!

You can't be a eunuch anymore, can you? It's considered very good among Xiaoao fans, but it's a pity.

Should I write it or not? If I write it, I will pursue it. If I write it, I will cut it off.