Douluo: I, Ma Hongjun, Conquer the Mainland with the Phoenix

Ma Hongjun? This was Jing Guan's real name. He and Tang San looked down upon each other, and it was normal for them to slander each other in their own books.

The writing in the front is nice, but why is Liu Erlong inexplicably included in the back? It reads so abruptly, the small head controls the big head?

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How does the author arrange the heroine? I think Shui Bing is the most suitable 🙂

What is the difference between the author's Ma Hongjun and the original work? At the age of eleven, he had an inexplicable affair with Liu Erlong, who was decades older than him! The character of the protagonist has collapsed, and the author is very good at suppressing the level. There is no need to watch it at all.

A little poisonous point, compared to the original article, Danmaku Bai worked harder, why is he still at level 38? The original article is that he was only at level 38 due to decadence, but now that he works harder, why is he still at such a low level?

Keep looking forward to it, but there are too many small problems (which can cause embarrassment at every turn). Although it does not affect the plot, it is like finding a strand of your own hair in the meal while eating. Please wait and see first.

His master Folland is not allowed to push from behind!

The previous book "Phoenix Douluo" was also pretty good. The author can read it.

Liu Erlong

Author The trajectory of the future has changed. Should I take the fairy grass or not? The attributes of Poseidon are not at odds with each other, but you can wait for a while. Later, your situation may be different from Yu Xiaogang's plan, which indirectly leads to Tang San's method of killing the protagonist. Then how will you deal with the relationship between Tang San and the protagonist?

Okay, don't be affected, there are other pigeons

The writing is good, better than many Douluo fans, at least I can continue to read it

Phoenix Boy

Author, why don't you charge any fees later?

It's good to read so far, I hope you won't give up on the book

I'll give you four votes, hurry up and start coding 🙂

The plot is well written, but there are still many small problems, including numerical problems, training speed problems, and combat power problems.

Duo Xiehuo Phoenix is ​​better

It's okay in the front, but in the back he gets involved with Liu Erlong for no apparent reason. He knew his master liked it, so he had to do it. It's so disgusting.

I gave you three monthly passes to keep writing.

There are too few written about Ma Hongjun, I hope the author can stick to it