Peninsula: Starting with an Introduction to Architecture

Only two 🙂 kidney failure?

The protagonist's oral extortion was as frightening as being caught drunk driving by Sunny, so it's hard to comment. Later, Sunny kicked her nose and face, but she didn't fight back at all. Is she your father?

Two are better, but the harem is not interesting.

I'll order all of Cui Xueli. No sooner said than done

Add some characters, the writing is pretty good but there isn't much traffic.

The writing is a bit too out-of-the-box. Every character is. It feels like everyone has similar personalities. Even if the name is changed, it's still the same

The protagonist's main line is not clear enough: Whether it is a Korean entertainment that focuses on career or romance, it needs a main line around which to develop the plot. For example: Become an actor in your career, or be a playboy type who constantly conquers those popular idol actors. The setting given by the author is rebirth. Then when you are reborn, don't you have any plans for your future? Whether you are following the old path and eating soft rice, or now you have the opportunity to enter the film and television industry and eating soft rice. Writing it now gives me the feeling of hitting a hammer here and there. It's very messy, and writing film and television works definitely requires some detailed descriptions (highlight moments during filming, evaluation of the audience's performance at the end of the movie). These can well anchor the protagonist's progress in fighting monsters.

Stop the water, okay? Write less about the details of filming.

Who did I see? Has our president finally been overturned?

What I don't understand is that directors have to be actors. Directors can't learn it, let alone become actors.

I just started reading. Didn't the author create a group? There are only two heroine color cards. To be honest, Little Sun and Bae Rabbit are not popular heroines. It is very difficult to support a book. The author may consider adding two to three heroines. They may not all be idols. Since you are taking the acting route, you can consider actors. In terms of age, Kim Ji-won and Chae Soo-bin can be used. If not, add Yoona (Taeyeon), one of the three fantasy gods of Korean entertainment. After all, Shura field is popular!

If there are more heroines, then there will be more heroines. There is no need to only let two people be the heroines.

The career line is pretty good, but I don't understand what the emotional line is supposed to express?

Write more sunny, as long as it's not too bad, I'll book it all

It's well written, but why no one has read it? I can't stand it.

Is it possible for a first-level writer to write two books at the same time? I'm afraid they will be ruined if they only have a few hundred thousand words.

It's a pity that another novel is missing.

If you enter the palace, please let me know. It's a pity that it's a good novel and I can't bear to take it off the shelves.

Can he pay less attention to details in filming? Who would? I always watch how the male lead acts, how good his acting skills are, and so on. Just don't describe it. You can just pass it over in one go. There is no need to describe what happened on the crew.

Suzy

The writing is okay. I keep up with updates every day. Good luck to the author⛽

The ones who can subscribe to a single heroine are Yoona, Taeyeon, Sika, IU, and the third generation crystal, Bae Baicai. Above, although Tara is a resident in Korean entertainment, it is difficult to carry it alone. I have watched a lot of Korean entertainment about the second and third generations. I have watched a lot of Korean entertainment with good results or reputation, including single female protagonists, harems, and bulldozers. Basically, if the female protagonists have less than two people, if they do not include the above, they will basically not be able to write, and they will be eunuchs or unfinished early. The first priority is popularity and appearance. In addition, there is experience. SNSD has too many things to write about, such as the Black Sea, reaching the top, and quitting the group. Moreover, they have a lot of variety show materials and have been popular for a long time. In the future, YoonA can also take up the role of actor, Taeyeon solo, Sika and Crystal are not as good as the last two because they later faded out of the stage. In comparison, there are not so many ups and downs, but she is popular and long-lasting, so she can easily carry it alone. Pei Baicai is not popular enough and has no legendary experiences to write. There are not enough stories to write. To a certain extent, it is not as good as Tara. There is only one book, Artist Neighbors, which is popular, so it can be included in the solo book. The single book is also written in a daily style, and has little to do with the protagonist's experience. It is like a fresh urban romance written by borrowing a face and name, unlike Korean entertainment. Tara had its ups and downs, but once it fell, it never came back. There was no follow-up development, and many members were married, so they couldn't be carried alone, but several members together as the protagonists were still enough to sustain the space. Eun Jung Chorong's movie "Best Actor" is an exception. After all, the author is a platinum god. Although Bae Rabbit, the nation's first love, is in various books Everyone is shouting +1 for the female protagonist, but in fact her experience is a little thin, so if you want to write a few female protagonists, you should not hesitate. After all, Korean entertainment is relatively niche now. If you choose a niche heroine in this niche genre, it will only dampen your enthusiasm for writing.

It's a piece of cake, can you die if you don't blow your head?