There’s a Door to a Multidimensional Space in My Warehouse

What kind of writing is this?! The vocabulary is so unnatural; ordinary people don't talk like that! There are many illogical plot points, and the concept itself is a failure. The "golden finger" (a powerful, overpowered ability) is supposed to be satisfying, but this makes it utterly unenjoyable.

If you continue running your small business with this kind of mundane daily routine, you'll probably still be stuck in a building materials store by the time you reach Chapter 1000. Time Coins could be awarded based on transaction volume, but they refuse to change that approach at all.

It's awkward to read; the sentences are disjointed and lack coherence. Plus, with so many characters appearing right at the beginning, who can remember them all? Don't include so many unimportant characters.

Life is full of regrets; it's impossible to achieve perfection. Perhaps imperfection is the true nature of all living beings.

Your urban lifestyle is way too urban. It's not suitable for online novels.

What's the most outrageous thing about appreciation over decades?

It's pretty average and not suitable for Gen Z.

The introduction looks awkward, and the fourth paragraph seems redundant.