There’s a Door to a Multidimensional Space in My Warehouse

What is written here! The wording is not everyday, how can ordinary people speak like that! There are many unreasonable aspects in the plot, and the setting is a failure. Goldfinger was originally enjoyable, but it didn't feel enjoyable at all.

If you start a small business based on your daily trivial matters, you might still be working in a building materials store by the time you get to Chapter 1,000. Time Coin may reward people based on transaction turnover, but it refuses to change its approach at all.

It's very awkward to watch. The sentences don't make sense, and there's no connection between the top and the bottom. And it's just the beginning and there are so many characters. Who can remember it? There are so many names. Don't write down the unimportant characters.

There are many regrets in life and it is impossible to be perfect. Perhaps incompleteness is what makes all living beings different.

Your urban life is too urban. Not suitable for web writing

What's the most outrageous thing about decades of appreciation?

Very average, not suitable for those born in 2000

The introduction looks awkward, the fourth paragraph is redundant, right?