Cultivation of Immortality: I Seek Immortality with Thunder Method

The first plot begins to screen readers 🙂

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. The sense of substitution in the novel must be to introduce the protagonist. I am afraid that no readers like to introduce the protagonist who is down and out, so some plots must be paid attention to. Don't suppress the protagonist too much in order to promote your desire. Now is no longer the era of writing about the main character.

It is obvious that the author borrowed some elements from Dao Zheng Zheng, such as the ten major disciples of the House of Commons... And so on. I am looking forward to it, but the author has some poisonous points so far 1 The data is wrong. The beginning of the third chapter says that 2 years have passed, and the result is the same. A year will pass again, and the protagonist's salary will be 3 spiritual stones, 1 spirit stone, and 2 villains are brainless and can only feel speechless. For example, the Poison Flower Valley incident, I don't understand, everyone is doing sect tasks, just getting nectar, they are all forced to contribute. It's not a secret realm, and the elder is outside. The Gu family has an extraordinary family, so there is no reason to fight life and death there 3. The plot arrangement, the author's cultivation schedule is unreasonable, for example, Senior Sister Du's qualifications are only half as good as the protagonist. Directly going from the 2nd level of Qi training to the 4th level of Qi training, and passing the first betrothal gift of Qi training, is this comparable to those with superior qualifications? You can't contradict yourself. And I feel that the protagonist's IQ is often not online. As for the poisonous flower valley incident, the author read it for yourself. Do you think it is reasonable? The protagonist even thought about giving the nectar to the senior sister to repay her. To be honest, I didn't understand how the senior sister helped her. I was speechless again when I talked about this. , The author said that the protagonist practiced hard for that year and went to the Dharma Building to learn various knowledge. As a result, he didn't even know the most basic sword-raising pool at home🤡 4 There is also the currency system. The author of the storage bag purchased by the protagonist can actually include the currency system and the protagonist by the way. I'll take a look at the spiritual stones I've been saving for a long time Suggestions 1 After the author has finished writing, read it yourself to see if there are any basic mistakes 2 The author can learn from it appropriately, such as the struggle between the great avenues, immortality starting from the Great Zhou Dynasty, etc. , Their worldview is quite grand, such as Kung Fu, the Eight Scenes of Yin and Yang... Taisu... And the like are very high-end, and readers can also feel a sense of belonging after reading them , like your 7 major sects, such as Yunpuppet Sect, Tianfu, Wuji, etc., They don't sound very popular.

How can qualifications and understanding be juxtaposed with xinxing? It seems that if qualifications and understanding are good, xinxing will be good

The ordering of the wealthy couple's land should be recognized by most book friends. It is really unpleasant to have a wealthy couple's land at the beginning of the book!

The opening picture is a glimpse of the avenue

Refa advances too slowly. The sect felt that it was too funny inside. The author probably has never worked in a large company. Many things have their own rules. No one can do whatever they want if they are strong.

Not bad, you can watch it without so much pretense and slaps in the face

The writing is very good, and I can honestly say that it is one of the better recent books. You can read it and recommend it!

Encouragement

It feels very good. Come on, author.

Study hard and maybe your grades will come up.

Dear adoptive fathers, after reading this great man's book, can you read mine? Hey-hey……

Well written, definitely a great book

Supported

It used to be two chapters, now it's one chapter, and today there's no chapter at all

This novel is so cliche, you can tell what it's going to be about at a glance.

In fact, the writing is pretty good, but I don't know why my grades can't go up.

I've read more than a dozen chapters. Isn't it just a battle between the great avenues?

It's very good. I read the beginning. The author's writing is very good. I'm afraid some old author has returned to the starting point. Let's see how the plot goes later.

Damn it, it's a big fight, isn't it?