
Naruto: Hinata Neji, Builds the Strongest Kumogakure Village
火影:日向宁次,打造最强云隐村
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 581k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Author's suggestion
The pace is too fast and it's too easy to get the reincarnation. How do you write the details of the battle later? Are they all like One Punch Man punching a kid?
I do not understand
To say that Neji has a high talent, is it considered that he has a high talent if he realizes the truth on his own? I don't know how many talented people there are in Konoha alone. Even if there is no caged bird, at most they are jounin. Although Hinata and Hanabi are not as talented as Neji in terms of fighting, they have high-purity Byakugan, which is the necessary factor to evolve the reincarnation eye. If you want to say that Neji is a genius, then who does Orochimaru mean? What is the immortal bag? Without relying on blood, Kabuto Sennin has almost reached the limit of ordinary people. From an ordinary orphan, he finally commanded the army of dirty soil to defeat the ninja coalition. If White-Eyed Wolf hadn't forced an illusion to dispel his obsession, the coalition would not know how long they would have to fight. Jiraiya is considered a late bloomer. He does not have a strong bloodline, and the third generation did not teach him any powerful ninjutsu. He relied on the sage mode to force his combat power up. In the battle of Yuyin Village, if Payne didn't know him too well, and he barely understood Payne, even if he couldn't defeat him, it wouldn't be a problem to retreat calmly. Orochimaru is even more ruthless, and has perfected many forbidden techniques. Tsunade can draw two blows with the Hakuhao Technique. There are also Yondaime Rai, Ohnoki, and Terumi Mei who are slightly weaker. On the other hand, Kakashi became a jounin at the age of 12. If the Sharingan hadn't hindered him, he wouldn't have been so kidney-deficient, but he still suffered the disadvantage of debuting too early. Again, you may not be able to defeat Danzo. Danzo is very good at using Wind Release. Don't think it's so amazing, as if no one is a genius. Even in terms of tragic fate, Neji is not ranked high. Kabuto killed the dean himself, Jiraiya's two apprentices failed to catch up, and he accomplished nothing in his life. Naruto was discriminated against, Sasuke was exterminated, and Gaara was even worse. So you see, everyone's good impression of him is based on his character of a tragic genius, but whether it's talent or tragic fate, he doesn't rank high.
Unlocking the reincarnation eye is more difficult than the reincarnation eye, and even pure-blood Otsutsuki rarely has one. The protagonist is a defective product.
Shouldn't Neji be locked up and used as a breeding machine by someone like Kumogakure who steals the country... If Neji can be the boss in Kumogakure, then Dazhu and Madara will be happy together. If you don't agree, you don't agree.
Fan author suggestions
Your pace is too fast and the finale will be over in less than 100 chapters. If the combat power is too strong in the early stage, it will definitely collapse in the later stage.
Why are Indra and Asura cheating? They are the sons of Six Paths. In the Hyuga clan, Hyuga Tennin (is he the son of Hamura Otsutsuki?) Has a reincarnated eye. He is even more cheating than Asura Indra. Why is Otsutsuki Sheren so powerful? He is a special case of bloodline atavism. The whole clan died before one appeared.
It's such an ambiguous affair, and there are no heirs, so Yunyin is really relieved.
You can see it. He is wearing the skin of destroying Konoha but he is still a collector. Isn't this writing method dragging down some of the original characters of Konoha? At best, the F4 family doesn't want it, but in the end, isn't it still a Konoha village wearing the skin of Kumogakure? ?
According to the original timeline, when Neji was four years old, Samui should have been only sixteen years old at most. Even if she barely had the strength of a jounin, how could she deal with three opponents of the same level at the same time?
Do you want to take photos of Meimei?
It's not very poisonous, so why can't I sign a contract? Isn't it the easiest way to sign a contract when writing fan fiction?
Hyuga Neji and Kumogakure. . . Considering the relationship between the two in the original work, they are almost the same as the hunter and the prey, but any other village would not be so uncomfortable with it. . .
If you want Kumo Ninja to dominate the ninja world, the first step is to kill Naruto first, because the original book states that Naruto will become stronger when he encounters a strong one. He can defeat Uchiha Madara or Otsutsuki if he encounters one. Even if you have the reincarnation eye, Otsutsuki Toneri + the giant reincarnation eye will be killed by Naruto's elbow! Especially his son, who reached the peak of Sixth Level at the age of 16 and was even more powerful than his father. If Naruto didn't want to unify the ninja world, there would be no one to talk about among the four great ninja villages.
Neji is already a caged bird at the age of three. You can't leave at the age of four.
Author
Don't you understand what it means?
It's boring. It's been on the shelves for almost a week and there aren't even ten chapters.
I have no motivation to continue reading at all.
Another stallion story? You can't write a specific one, for example, you just like to be alone every day.
Author
You know, what I mean is that when you decide to start the latest novel, you can choose the novel about the world of Qin Shi Mingyue that I explained before.
Before Chapter 70, the names started to get confusing. Does it look like it was written by a real person?
Author
Have you ever watched Qin Shi Mingyue and Detective Conan?
Author
If you open a novel about the world of the bright moon in the Qin Dynasty in the future, you can choose to be a Korean king and cut out the novel about the girl Madam Hu and the girl Hu Meiren. It will easily attract the interest of reading the novel.
Author
What it means is not very clear.
Author
Can you answer the previous question?
Author
When you decide to start the latest novel, you can choose the novel about the world of Qin Shi Mingyue, which has been explained before. Take a screenshot of the girl Madam Hu and the girl Hu Meiren. Can you answer it?