The Condor Yang Guo: I Just Want to Be a Hero!

This Yang Guo deserves to dominate the world. The founding emperor was not decisive in killing. You are really a holy mother. You can teach the Nine Suns Magic Skill casually, and your character is not even as normal as the original one 😅

The writing is very smooth and not verbose. It should have been a good book, but the plot design is too bad. The protagonist of the fanfic is also Yang Guo. It is not written from the perspective of the reader who assumes Yang Guo, but who would like to read it like you write it? Write about Yang Guo, Guo Fu, Xiao Wu, and Yin Zhiping building a good relationship? Creating a female character yourself but not daring to love her, why would you write it? In the beginning, the Shaolin Temple learned Jiuyang and deliberately followed Guo Jing's route. Guo Jing became a disciple of Guo Fu, a great martial artist. Jiuyin didn't even learn the magic trick of Jiuyang. What if we become enemies in the future? I originally thought that teaching others was to prepare for dominating the world in the future, but it turned out that I was just a good old man who had various relationships with Yang Guo's enemies. If there were ten people taking Yang Guo's place, how many of them would want to have a good relationship with Yin Zhiping, a great martial artist?

It's really difficult to spread the Nine-Yang Magic Technique randomly! Even if you pass it on, don't pass it on in all four volumes! ! At most, just pass two volumes! ! ! You need high-end combat power and your own people as helpers. Two volumes are enough! What's more, Quanzhen Neigong, Peach Blossom Island Neigong, and Jiuyin Sutra, each one is better than the other. Isn't one one not enough? ! What's more, that's internal strength, how can you practice it blindly? The author made his own decision and passed it down directly, but how did you know that Peach Blossom Island Neigong or Quanzhen Neigong can be practiced with Jiuyang? ? ? Besides, the internal strength of Peach Blossom Island, Quanzhen internal strength, these relatively common martial arts, those few people still can't understand it. Can they see, hear, and understand the more advanced Jiuyang? ! You still don't understand junior high school mathematics. You just passed it on to the Frontier International Mathematical Olympiad. Isn't this contrary to your original intention of quickly cultivating talents? ! There is another one, you can also pass it on, just pass it on to the grassroots. If it is fully uploaded, there will definitely be hidden dangers! Even if Wu Dunru's martial arts and literary qualifications are not good, they know how to pass them on! ! ! If it really doesn't work, give birth to hundreds of children, practice each one, and accept thousands of adopted sons. If one thousand doesn't work, just two thousand, if two thousand doesn't work, then ten thousand! ! Anyway, there were a lot of orphans during the war! ! There must be someone with better talent and qualifications than Yang Guo! Once there are those who are selfish, those who are opposed to pig's feet, those who are jealous of pig's feet, those who covet pig's feet, no matter what the situation, once a talented person with extremely high qualifications appears in the hostile force, they will engage in assassination and cultivate high-end combat power. Or directly arm the army! Which one can stop it? ? What will happen to the pig's feet then? ? How do the descendants of pig trotters fare? ? Just like this, leaving such a big hidden danger, pig's feet still want to dominate the world? ? ?

No, let's not talk about the founding emperor. Even the character of a small warlord is not comparable to that of Yang Guo. Check out the martial arts characters in Bao Yi who are pure green-skinned gangsters. Do you still want to be the emperor? Are you crazy?

Fans also create original female protagonists, Lei Dian

The writing in these recent chapters has been a mess💩. To be honest, the writing was mediocre at first, but now it's like this, and I basically have no connection with it.

The heroine is original and has only been married twice.

Huang Rong was prejudiced against Yang Guo because of Yang Kang. Even though Yang Guo saved her many times, he never let down his guard. Yang Guo was destined to be sent away. The better his performance, the more he looked like Yang Kang in her eyes.

The title of the book is "I". Does the author want the protagonist to be an emperor?

Little Dragon Girl

There are always many people who like martial arts, but the decline of martial arts novels is not without reason! Even classics like Shooting the Condor Dragon seem to have a lot of bugs and contradictions now. It's just that everything was lacking in that era and no one had seen it, so there were always layers of filters! But it's completely different now! After more than 20 years of baptism with various online novels, the requirements for martial arts novels are much higher now! ! The overall plot of this book is very good so far, and the writing style is good. Unfortunately, there are still a lot of nasty little bugs. Basically, I thought it was time to submit a review. I hope the author will read it.

Without the cloth bag and the phantom yin finger, Zhang Wuji would not be able to achieve great success. If you fail to achieve great achievements in the Nine-Yang Divine Skill, you run the risk of going crazy. Each one of you will become a bomb, and you don't know when it will explode.

Why is there no female character like Aunt Guo? Author, answer me, look my eye

I think the writing is very good, so I voted for two, come on

Another dog licker and nanny. I discovered why all the martial arts fans in Qidian are dog lickers? Either lick this or that. The co-author's main character traveled to the past and worked as a nanny, kneeling down and licking other people's breasts. When ordinary people have power, they should grab money, food, and women as they please. If you go over there and work as a nanny or a dog licker, you might be sick. Or is it that you have been kneeling for too long in reality and cannot stand up in the novel?

😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 I love you the most

Looking at the comments, is it the original heroine? Is it true that fans should be discouraged from engaging in original creations? Is there a shortage of women in the world of divine eagles? Not to mention whether Huang Rong, Jin Yong's top two most popular Little Dragon Girl, is suitable or not, and whether she wants to write about it. Let's just say that I like Yang Guo's Guo Fu, Guo Xiang, Cheng Ying, Lu Wushuang, Gongsun Lv'e, Yelu Yan, and Wan Yanping. How much is this? Why do I still create original works?

Well written 👍The title of the book is just unsatisfactory

I have been reading books for 20 years. The writing style of this book is definitely high-quality, but it is a little bit toxic. The rest is fine.

In the plot after Hua Zheng comes out, has the author become obsessed with his art?

From Yang Kang's point of view, Yang Kang is right. The world is never black and white, only the standpoints are different. If Yang Guo admits his mistake for Yang Kang, Yang Kang will crawl out of his grave in anger.

The author doesn't need to belittle himself. Among the dozens of Shendiao fanfics I've read, you are enough to be ranked in the top three. If I read more online articles, I should think that your writing is good. There is no way around it. Many people who have just started reading online literature like urban warrior kings and fantasy trashy genres. They don't like the genres that are a little more refreshing and not dense.

By the way, what is the author planning to write next? Is it still a fanfic?