The Sky Is Blazing, Cizer Wins the Easter Match

It's rare that someone still remembers Tian Zhichi, so I have to support him on this one. After reading more than a dozen chapters, let me talk about my impressions and suggestions. First of all, the author's writing style is quite good, but the starting point is no longer the era when novices were everywhere, and there are many authors with good writing skills. Except for the writing, I felt that the plot advanced very quickly, and there was no subplot to spread out the details. The impression was that I had just passed a very important plot, but I was basically not emotionally disturbed. For example, if Jiang Nan really writes a sequel, he will definitely spend tens of thousands of words describing the conversation in the limo, the final adjustment of Seraph, and even the final heart-to-heart talk between César and the princess. Also, Jiang Nan will definitely write a wedge from the perspective of the princess to shape the winner of Cizer's comeback in detail. Also, the princess's information is too deceptive. The author can also write some plots that Jiangnan cannot write, such as the princess's arrangement in the Papal Kingdom, etc., Which can not only enrich the plot setting, but also accumulate emotions for the final battle (for the princess). In the final analysis, these are still the problems of the plot advancing too fast. It would take a book just to finish writing Chipu vs. Jiangnan. As for the setting of Mrs. Linglang's life experience, I don't know if it is the original creation of the author. I personally think it is very good. It not only completes the world view but also echoes the plot of the engagement. It is worth spending a certain chapter to carefully perfect it. The above are some of my humble opinions. Anyway, cheers to the author

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Personally, I think Cesare is more likable than Lu Mingfei, but I don't know why no one has written about Heaven's Blaze

Come on, keep at it, the author is great 😭

Adele has been waiting for ten years

Even if it is written as 💩, I will like it and support it

Come on, author, it doesn't matter if you write slower, as long as there's an ending.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Come on, come on. This is a big regret during my student days.

When can I vote monthly?

Author, I think you forgot about the height difference between Prometheus and Seraph in your description? The height difference between the two is more than three times. From your description, they are of the same height.

Some people remember the Blaze of Heaven, which is great But is it unreasonable to set Patriarch Hector as the boss? If Cizer wants to control or destroy the Papal State, it will be much smoother with the help of the Borgia family. What's more, the original Hector is not deeply hostile to Cizer and even shows support. Should the big boss be Cicero?