Wearing the Same Clothes, Each Person Has a Game Cheat

I can't stand it. The spirit cage itself is nothing to write about. For a time traveler, the plot line is too weak. There are only a few camps. Apart from fighting monsters and doing daily routines, there is really nothing to watch. Most of the novels about spirit cages at present are also about eunuchs. One more thing, are modern people so successfully trained? I made some kind of dust people, but no one resisted. Anyway, if I followed the hunting team and traveled through time and became some kind of bullshit dust people, I would break out with them on the first day of the time travel. Not one person in the entire hunting team would even think about going back. I want to see how many days that bullshit lighthouse can float.

I suggest removing Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, most of the books written about it are dead, pure curse.

The time period of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba is probably in the early 1990s, a few years after the Sino-Japanese War. To join the Demon Slayer Team is to recognize a Japanese as the master. The so-called breathing method is of no use, because the author of this work himself has said that he added special effects to the fighting scenes. The real situation is that you will not draw your sword, and then some fire or water energy will come out. Those are just special effects! It will not make you extraordinary, just like Taekwondo, Jeet Kune Do, Muay Thai and the like in reality. These are just schools, but one is boxing skills and the other is sword-drawing skills, so what are you trying to do? Can you recognize a master and then risk your life to help the Japanese kill ghosts?

What did Beacon write? What did you say? The Ultramarines hacked Beacon and the others to death. I am the Emperor.

I hope that the author will not be like other people, saying one sentence after another. Some authors misunderstood the same flow and separated multiple protagonists into narratives. As a result, the protagonist in the previous chapter was invincible in the world, and the protagonist in the next chapter was picking up garbage at the garbage dump. Even after multiple protagonists crossed over, the protagonist was still invincible, while the other protagonist just changed to a larger garbage dump and continued to pick up garbage. This made people feel seriously uncomfortable, anorectal. After the cross-over of the main characters in Kona's book, they immediately skipped the development process and took off on the same spot, instead of each protagonist being re-developed, and the cuts were very frequent. In the last chapter, he took over the world with one person's power, and in the next chapter, the world immediately changed to me eating donuts in the United States. The cool points were perfectly skipped, and I was smug and thought that all the cool points could explode together in the follow-up. As a result, the book died before the cool points broke out.

If "The Spirit Cage" is about Boss Bai's village, you can also read about exploration and other things. Are you writing about the lighthouse plot? Who looks at that cesspool? Kill all the upper levels by default, skip and watch jojo directly 😅

Orochi's [Sunlight] uses the power of space to shatter the space and attack the opponent. Without sunlight, the official translation should be [let everything fall into nothing].

No, bro, did Bai Yuekui's chess game start so early? Officially, what are you stirring up? There are so many holes left unfilled, and the next update will have to wait until 2026? You'd better come up with a special chapter to save him. Is Mark going for Charles? Bai Yuekui will probably not die, but are she and Mark acting together, or are they unilaterally playing tricks on Mark? Is Charles dead or not? Did the legendary Standing King put on the Abyssalist armor and stand for one episode? Also, is Master Lai number 19? Is he the same thing as the Lord of Light and Shadow? The gap is so long and there is no clue about the material. What else can the fan author do besides making up his own (face covering) I already have a premonition that I will be stabbed by the official (clam) I can only make up my own brothers Fortunately, I am writing a story about the same story, so there is still room for redemption (wipe sweat)

It's so messy, it makes my head hurt just looking at it. The identity of the protagonist is not fixed either. Sometimes he is a commoner, sometimes he is an extreme warrior, and sometimes he is a soul. It's not fixed at all, and I feel like I'm going to have a schizophrenia watching it. Tongchuanliu is already chaotic, but you have so many clones in the same world, which makes it even more chaotic. And you have a golden finger, how will you write later? Sharing the power system and knowledge system of each world with Chuanliu is enough for you to write. You also added a golden finger, which is really superfluous.

Poison. I personally hate people who are trying to act like this. I don't want to see anything that is crazy and just a trick.

. . . . I originally wanted to watch it, but Marvel didn't say you can't write Mi, it's just you. . . . I can't understand. The gem-filled Ultron is not that strong. Except for those from the comic concept and Thanos (gm), the heart of the universe, there are not many people in the Marvel world who can fight him. . . . Sorry, plus the ghost slayer and spirit cage you wrote, the spirit cage is okay, but I really don't know why many fan authors like to add ghost slayer. Bye

Acting or something, it's really a big mess

It's boring. I don't think everyone is here to see the troops.

I don't quite understand why I always write about things that are famous but not worth writing about. You are like Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, Jojo, they are quite famous and pretty, but this stuff is not suitable for writing fan fiction. Unless you write out its own highlights. Jojo's battle of wits. Demon Slayer's passion and fighting. But if you don't write it down, writing this is completely meaningless. Because what you write will not look good unless you write it with characteristics or imagination.

Can Star Dome Train defeat 6-gem Thanos?

It's quite impressive to have 20 chapters without any passion at all. The writing is too bland.

After all, the author is still a newbie, and the coding speed is only that fast, so sometimes in order to finish writing quickly, I don't notice when I am short of time. It is indeed easy to form some inexplicable paragraphs when I write fast. Also, because the author has graduated from college for a long time, he basically doesn't have much time to re-refresh the plot, or play the game that he may write after, so it is inevitable that there will be some omissions. _(:з∠)_ For example, in the first part of the spiritual cage, an old man pointed out the oriole and divination box in Warhammer. I really didn't understand it, so I changed it. Յ(¯¯Յ) (I am half clouded) I don't have money to buy a flag, I only watched a video of ordering lobster. I have played the game Star Marine 2, but I have never played Dark Taunt and Rogue Trader because it takes too much time. Therefore, there may be some ridiculous bugs in the future. When the time comes, you will have to rely on your enthusiastic brothers to point them out below this post or in the original paragraph of the chapter. Many worlds or games that I plan to write about in the future may also be more or less like this, because I really don't have enough energy to read everything from beginning to end, so I will ask all my readers for help in the future (~￣▽￣)~

What do you say? Anyway, when I watch Jojo movies, I always feel that the overall plot is a bit slow and too watery. Moreover, the author's plot advancement is not ideal, and it is very difficult to follow it. Just keep it. Also, I originally thought that there would be a staged climax after it was put on the shelves. But it was all about the main character's guesses and introductions, which really confused me. Oh, by the way, I read it on QQ Reading.

The author's chapter on the protagonist's self-analysis, can it be made into an all-in-one chapter in the future? The content of each chapter is already small, so don't post multiple chapters.

Becoming a eunuch so soon? Alas, it can only be said that it is expected. The opening chapter is about the unpopular Soul Cage. The JoJo world is okay, but the Demon Slayer that follows is a bleak world that most people read online and don't read the novels. Alas, Demon Slayer's Curse, this is how I like to write Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. The plot is just that, and the world level is not strong, so it can only be said to be expected. The author writes about this type, and you write this kind of unpopularity in the beginning of the same period. To be honest, if you want people to read the same period, why don't you have a Naruto Pirates at the beginning? What about Marvel and DC? Who watches these unpopular worlds? Alas, in the end he lost popularity and became a eunuch.

Small-circle thinking is not advisable. In a world where even jobless reincarnations have fans, one must break away from the fandom thinking. Most of the public has seen it before it is worth writing. Conan has so many bugs that it still accounts for a large part of the fandom. No matter how popular one person is, only some users pay attention. The notorious S. H. I. E. L. D. In the Marvel world comes to provide warmth, which is more attractive to readers than the so-called unpopular masterpieces that are unknown.