Douluo: Prequel to Dragon King Huo Yuhao Lives Ten Thousand Years Later

Whoever is stronger is the real person! ! ! !

It's too abstract. My brother, you really don't need it. I just made a previous work.

If the author is a group friend, we will support you. Recently, the stars have been updated less and later, and many people are actually dissatisfied. But unfortunately, the writing was so good at the beginning, and everyone is more harmonious. The content of this chapter by the author feels pretty good, but the writing style needs to be polished. Overall, the shortcomings do not hide the good points, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, it is supportive, and competition is good for readers. Authors, don't abandon the book, write well. If you are mainly writing a prequel, you don't have to write it very coherently. You can write it in stages, such as Huo Yuhao's preparations at each stage. The most important point is that if I insist on writing it down, I hope to add a little bit about the transition between the Snow Emperor and the Spirit Pagoda in ten thousand years. After all, as soul beasts, the Sun and Moon Empire and the Sun and Moon Federation were definitely not accepted at the beginning. However, they were very harmonious in the last ten thousand years. There is a lot to be done here. The writing style doesn't have to be brilliant, but it shouldn't be abrupt. It needs to be more thoughtful. As long as it's not too inconsistent and inconsistent, just stick to the writing style of the first chapter.

The fluency of writing needs to be improved, but I am very optimistic about this guy's strong energy in writing 🙂🙂👍It's very smooth

Great, someone has performed surgery on Xingchen

Awesome, what did you write about the prequel to Stars?🙂

Why did you update the prequel but not the main story?

The three creations are here, I hope it can be written better

You must live! Don't let the King of Sugar God take advantage of you! Fellow Douluo Yuhao with good grades has died countless times due to various accidents! ! ! Come on😊

Come on, author, give the stars a little stimulation😍😍

It's okay to update a little slower, as long as you don't update incessantly, work slowly and carefully (must be of good quality). If you are stuck, just say something, otherwise it will be misunderstood that you ran away. Come on

666, The author's three creations are still too authoritative.

If you have anything you want to see about the Spirit Transferring Tower Spirit Family, you can post it here. If I think it can be added to the subsequent plot, I will write about it later. If you have any ideas, please send them in!

Dude is a character👍

Prequel! ! ! Brother! Let's read the prequel for your children.

It was written by a fan.

The AI ​​flavor is a bit heavy, and it doesn't match up with the previous plot. I don't expect you to be good at writing, but don't just leave the plot to AI to conceive.

It must be continued! ! ! ! !

Please update, it hasn't been updated for a month or two.

The original author has been resurrected, why are you still lying dead?

I wanted to wait for your update, but it turned out that the original work was fake.

Wannian Yuhao is resurrected🙂

Anyone who didn't pay attention to the original author would have lied.

Will it be updated or not? Author

It's been a month and there's still no update? Author

The main body is resurrected, is the clone still there?