Douluo Dalu: From the Start, I Imprison Dai Mubai

The introduction is written like a rat in the gutter.

I wrote a big poisonous point earlier, and after much consideration I decided to revise it again. It took me a day and a night to revise all the previous chapters. Chapters 11 to 22 were rewritten. I didn't pass the test, so I originally planned to cut it off, but when I saw that there were still people reading it, I thought about writing it down. Thank you for your support. I will read the suggestions in the comment area and will reply when I have time.

Unexpectedly, I feel that this book is okay. The protagonist is a normal person with normal IQ, but the operation of participating in the competition will do more harm than good. The rest is okay.

The biggest problem with this book is the competition and the inexplicable conflicts, but the rest is actually okay.

It's good to read, keep it up. I've read a lot of Douluo fandoms, and the conflict in the plot at the beginning of this book feels more realistic.

Oops, that's good, the logic is self-consistent.

It's either a dragon or a tiger, and then there are all kinds of mythical beasts and artifacts... Or the spirit has no soul power and has evolved countless times... Or there is the unreasonable hatred towards the master and disciple's relatives...

Stopped updating? I think it's pretty good?

This is from the Douyin tweet, that is, before you modify it, it is the poisonous point of your modification. I wrote it before, because Dugu Yan wanted to go up to give gifts on his birthday, which caused his life to be threatened. In my opinion, the follow-up treatment is not a poisonous point. It wrote about Dugu Bo's viciousness. It also describes the unscrupulousness of the protagonist, the expansion after the strength rises, as well as the tolerance and growth. I feel that it is well written. Making mistakes is not terrible. You must remember the lessons. The growth of the protagonist is not in strength, but in the character of the character. It makes people feel bright. It's just that it's difficult to deal with Dugu Bo in the follow-up. At worst, you have to be conciliatory and seek the immortal grass in front of you and Dugu Bo's protection. Later, if you get into trouble or face a life-or-death crisis, push Dugu Yan or Dugu Bo out to die or prevent disasters in order to avenge this. Besides, especially Binghuo Yan was still thinking about how to kill Dugu Bo, but had no choice but to give up, which was very good, and wrote the charm of the character. After all, your main tone is darker and true, the strong is respected. After the change, Qian Renxue from a medical clinic came to contact him for no reason, and attracted Dugu Bo ( Jiu Xing Begonia Family:? I came to an unknown medical clinic and made a name for myself. The prince met me and attracted a titled Douluo. Are you being too careful and forgetting about yourself? ), especially the little miracle doctor who made people feel that he was acting like a child, very childish, completely different from the feeling you wrote before, and a bit disappointing. Just take care of yourself, author.

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