Beauty Magazine: Enchantment Master Starting from the Knife Forging Competition

This book package is amazing. Most people read this book because of the title of the book, Forging Knives. But in the end, they put the cart before the horse and wrote about another supporting character participating in a bodybuilding competition and Dwayne Johnson's competition. Do we care about these things?

I feel like the author underestimated the disgrace of the Americans. I knew the protagonist would win, but

This dog tooth gentleman, why don't the protagonist cure it? What do you say about this dog tooth fungus? At first, it jumped back and forth, asking the protagonist to give him the knife, and then he thought the knife was not good and scolded the protagonist. After the protagonist retorted a few words, he jumped back and forth like a clown while scolding the protagonist while going to the knife forging (breaking) competition. I want the protagonist to be ruined. How do you feel, top clown?

Too much nonsense, unclear priorities, slow pace, and forced wit.

But the feel of using it is also one of the important criteria. You will be eliminated before you can get a skater's handle to chop.

Who came in to see it but didn't come for the sword forging competition and enchantment? Are you trying to write a supporting character? What kind of fitness guy is looking at this thing and has no idea what to do with it? Most people won't read it when they see something like joining the Titans.

The runes in your book cannot be said to be a failure. If used well, it will add color. However, the side effects of your runes can only be described in a few words, and I am very discouraged.

What I thought I could see: the protagonist is a swordsmith, getting a gold finger will make him a step up, participating in competitions and becoming a blockbuster, interspersing life and other variety shows as a top swordsmith (you don't even have to appear in person, just pick a variety show, such as survival in the wild, mention the one with the best score can get the knife made by the protagonist himself, and the supporting role will be shocking) Surprisingly, the simplest, clearest and effortlessly refreshing point), and then I lived like this for a season of variety shows + branch plots, participating in the later episodes to compete with celebrity contestants, and becoming a judge... What I saw: Joker How did you write such an inexplicable highlight on such a potential subject?

The protagonist is poorly established. I haven't seen such a novice and useless protagonist in the starting point for a long time. To be honest, it's normal to be ridiculed for not being as good as others, but the protagonist's reaction is very abstract. You either have to be confident and speak with strength for a while, or you are a bit naive. It's not impossible to slap someone in the face in public, but when you write about psychological anger, you also write an image of being wronged. You can't do anything with this kind of endurance. With this mentality, you will always be a loser.

The subject matter is very good, but it's a pity that the author has a problem with the conception, and the outline direction is ridiculously crooked. Pity.

Author, your plot logic is not very good. You don't know that you are a good thing, so you still sell it at a low price. Now forget it, you are still affected by your own creation. What kind of master did you think you were? As a result, he was able to write a good beginning like this. You are enough. One day, the main business is not moving at all, and I just write about his show. What does that have to do with the protagonist? This is not a behind-the-scenes article. Even a behind-the-scenes article has to mention the indirect role of the protagonist. Your damn protagonist simply disappears, which is nonsense. The whole face is missing. If you don't tell me, you can only put it on the shelves like me. If you have perfect attendance, it will only be a gimmick_(:з∠)_

Just like the title, I was attracted to Electronic Pickle. After reading the latest version, I feel that it's pretty good and there's no big problem. It's all green-skinned systems anyway. It doesn't matter whether it's large or small. It's all about having fun. Please update more often. Come on.

Creativity looks good, but it's just creativity. Regardless of the title or the opening chapter, the main plot has already been named. As a result, because I only wrote about forged swords, I couldn't write any content, so I wrote a lot of supporting characters' plots and involved other programs. How to write content around blacksmithing is exactly what reflects your level. After reading a few chapters and thinking about it randomly, I can think of these contents. It's more science-oriented, such as exchanging various knife forging techniques with other blacksmiths. Of course, this requirement is relatively high and requires the author to have his or her own understanding of forging technology (not necessarily all correct, but it must be able to fool most people). And it needs to be interesting, otherwise it will be like academic science popularization. Something more interesting, for example, you can go camping with other blacksmiths, but you can only use the things you forged as tools. Similar interesting daily stories can also be written.

The plot is too fake. The Internet celebrity held a knife without a handle and didn't dare to test it. He sent you to a TV show. I told you that I sang well and you didn't believe it, but you didn't dare to listen. Then he sent me to compete on The Voice of China. You can enter this kind of competition if you want. Can you sign up for someone else to participate? The knife is so cracked that the judges are unlikely to use it for testing. What do you want to say? Your pattern looked like it was cracked, but that was barely fair. After that, the handle became slippery, and there was a feeling of falling off at any time. It was more likely that you were going to die where you came from. Later, I used bullets to test the handle of the knife. Why did you go there earlier? After that, the magic prop ring was sold wholesale for 100 US dollars. The ring not only increases confidence, but also adds weak points to attack and restore the body. You can't write this anymore, and you will be eunuchs at any time.

The runes you use are poison points if you lose, and they are poison points if you win.

The creativity is good, but the character design of the protagonist, as well as the runes, should directly let the protagonist know how to use it and what the effects are. Don't let the protagonist experiment. There are too many plots for the supporting characters. Everyone is here to see the knife forging, not the supporting characters, and the dog tooth in the front. There are more plots than the protagonist. Chapters 1 to 6 can be eliminated. It is too poisonous. There is also the knife tested by the military later. It is such a powerful material. You will 100% be secretly captured and cursed for life. Another poisonous point is the pawn shop. In short, there are too many irrelevant plots in this book.

The gimmick is very good, and the content is hard to describe in one sentence. It is proven by the number 20 on the new book list. It is the first article on knife forging in Qidian. It is written like this to pull the crotch. I cut it and it is all burnt...

There is something wrong with the author's logic. I am not attacking the author. Reading this novel reminded me of Fu Seoul.

The writing is too poor, the writing is a mess

I digressed. I write about the Titan Contest every day. I should at least get a little more main story every day.

By the way, wouldn't it be great to start writing about the Knife Forging Competition? Why write about the Titan Competition again? It's really disappointing. There were only 28 comments in the comment area yesterday, and I saw 41 today. Most of them are negative reviews. It shows that Titan Contest is very unpopular. If the quality of the work itself is too poor, few people will have the time to comment, so there is basically no need to read it if there are no comments. But there will be many people scolding people like you who are originally promising but have problems with the subsequent plot.

The more you write, the worse you get. Isn't it because you don't want to get into the topic at all, and you keep digging holes and digging holes and your writing is still stiff? 😜Don't watch anymore

The creativity is very good. There are a lot of imitations in novels now. You are very innovative. Don't pay attention to us. Those who read the book write according to their own mood. I feel very good and the rhythm is great. Come on, support

Isn't the author perfect? I am more aggressive than you, but I plan to be diligent first before talking 🙂

Good. At least I finished my book carefully and my investment was divided a little bit.