In the Era of Martial Arts, I Will Become an Immortal in a Hundred Generations

So far I have read 404 chapters (a very magical number). I don't know if the author is tired from writing. Anyway, I am a little tired from reading. If nothing else, this is probably the last time to write my review of this book. I delayed subscribing to this chapter for 23 hours, and I found that I was the 44th person to follow up. In other words, there are less than 50 subscriptions in 24 hours. I don't know how many orders this book has on average, but my blind guess is that it will soon fall below 100. If the author thinks what I say does not make sense, be sure to tell me the real subscription data. In addition, I am also following another book. That one is updated at midnight every day, with 4,000 words updated every day. I just read the latest chapter, and my update ranking is outside 200. I remember I said that I also write a book. If the author is confused about the current situation, I will help the author analyze the possible reasons. The rhythm of this book is messed up! This is the first problem with this book. The simulation genre is usually fast-paced, quickly upgraded, has many levels in total, and can change maps quickly. As for your book, it is only faster in the early stages. By the time you get to Bai Emperor, or even earlier, as early as Emperor Ziwei, the rhythm of this book has started to become like Old Lady's Foot Wrapping Cloth (you know what to follow next). It's just that Bai Di's problem gradually became more and more obvious. In an ordinary simulation novel, this number of words should have changed 3 to 4 maps. You have only reached the second map, and you are still far away from ending the copy of this broken ship. I still can't get past Bai Di's level. Do you think your mock essay is rich in content? If I hadn't said it, the author would probably still be complacent, thinking: "My mock essays are richer in content than all of theirs. Look how extraordinary I am." In fact, from the readers' perspective, what the author fills in are just plastic plots, and they can almost be picked up after reading one chapter every two chapters. The author may not be convinced when he sees this and thinks: Is it so difficult to write a flesh-and-blood simulation? I want to say that there is a reason why simulation writing is fast-paced. If you stay in the same scene for too long, it will be easy to write something inconsistent and logically confusing. To give a few simple examples, the previous description of the ending of the Blood Moon Demon King's arrival into the world said that Professor Bai Di disappeared for no reason, and then the protagonist was tortured by various characters in the hunting world. The author writes wherever he wants, but as the author writes more later, there is a sense of separation between the front and the back. According to the setting thrown out later, the ending described above will not happen. Because at this time Bai Di should be stimulated to revive. It's not the turn of these hunting gangsters to come here to torture the protagonist. For example, the ending of Red Emperor's Transformation into the Sun already describes the scene of Jueling's success. However, the author later changed the setting and said that the connection between the Jedi and the broken ship was the connection between the Jedi and the Heaven, not the inspiration. Thinking back on this setting, is there a sense of drama? (It's too bad that the author wrote wherever he thought.) Including the appearance lines spoken by Bai Di before he revived and released Bai Di's Sky Sword. In fact, in the later settings, Bai Di should not have said this. The author also arranged for the protagonist to try to read the story of Bai Di. However, taking into account the following circumstances, it is easy to conclude that the protagonist's experience of seeing Bai Di was purely due to the author's helping him cheat. According to the normal development, the protagonist can't read anything, and Bai Di directly revives. The protagonist dies just by glaring at him, and then he reads his memory? Now you know why simulation writing has to be fast-paced? Fight the BOSS quickly, change the map quickly, and distract the readers' attention before the bug is exposed. If the author is asked to release a reset version, my suggestion is to cut off the plot on the shipwreck in the later stage and not create so many realms. After transforming into a god, you can merge directly into a body, after you merge, you can directly transcend tribulations, and after you transcend tribulations, you can directly become an immortal. The protagonist always has trouble passing Baidi's level, just like I can't pass Ashina Genichiro's level. But writing a novel is different from playing a game. The longer you stop reading, the more frustrated the reader will feel, and the excitement you need later will have to be more intense to fill it up. However, the author spent hundreds of thousands of words writing a frustrating plot, so what does the author plan to spend tens of thousands of words describing the protagonist's feeling of relief after defeating Bai Di in the end? Don't come up with a sentence like"The protagonist swung his sword. In Bai Di's shocked eyes, and under the protagonist's radiant sword energy, Bai Di's figure shattered like the moon in the water, getting smaller and smaller, and gradually disappeared." Such a sentence. I think I wrote this sentence very carefully, but if the protagonist defeats Bai Di in one stroke like this, do you think the readers will buy it? The people who are chasing you all want to see how you arrange the protagonist to defeat Bai Di. But if you just describe it simply like I just did, and go over it in one stroke, you can just see how the rest of the people react. The author may still feel a little aggrieved. Everything you said makes sense, but... But there is a difficulty that the author doesn't want to talk about. If the author doesn't want to say it, I'll just say it! Author, when you wrote this book, did you write it word by word with a keyboard yourself? Isn't it? Not really! I have also used this kind of assistance to write a book (author, you know what I want to express). Sentences that may seem normal to those who have never read them are, at best, overly worded and repetitive. But to me, an experienced person, it is as obvious as a torch in the dark. I know that the author has cultivated, and I also know that the author has cultivated very hard. I can tell. But sometimes this trace is just like the author's protagonist in Bai Di's eyes. No matter how I hide or erase the trace, I can just see it at a glance. I saw this happening the first time I wrote my review, but I didn't say it until now. Who can code 10,000 words a day? Is the author Eagle Trumpet? Of course, that's okay. Technology has advanced. I've done this too, but I didn't post it on this platform. What I write is something that is not convenient for publication on formal platforms. I don't mean to say anything bad, but I want to tell the author that there are pros and cons. If you accept its convenience, you have to accept the hallucinations it causes and the disadvantages of lack of concentration. The author should work hard to overcome it rather than make it worse. (Author: It's so convenient to mess things up. You can complete a day's tasks in half an hour at most. Who doesn't love it?) Overcoming and being unable to overcome it, wanting to mess things up but not being able to do it completely. As a result, the author got stuck again. There is no other regret in this world. Originally I was thinking about how to give the author some suggestions, but after thinking about it I decided not to say them. Finally, I will give the author two monthly passes. This is not encouragement or appreciation, but just a commemoration of the fate that I was able to write three consecutive articles to the author in the vast sea of ​​books. Now that we have said what needs to be said, let the author do the rest!

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the humble praise begins to sound, and the number of dead givers begins to decrease. When you read the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously formed, and the voices of praise became louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside.

In fact, there is a problem in many time-travel and body-taking novels. How can an ordinary protagonist have direct feelings for his original parents? Even if they have been together for several years, many plots cannot be separated from the family or cannot handle this properly. It is very awkward to think about it.

Count this food and grass. It's just that you have to use money to deposit and withdraw points, which is not good.

Author, the White Emperor is a dog that hurts the family. Can you move to conquering the universe quickly? And to be honest, if you don't care about the earth and let the universe develop, you will probably be able to beat the White Emperor in two or three lifetimes. Why do you write so frustratingly? You will lose your IQ after reading it for a long time.

I order you to update 100 chapters a day. I know this is difficult, but this is an order.

Can't you just go to that Qingchuan Taoist and get the money? There are still tens of billions a month.

I just want to say that there is no such thing as lottery and stock market in the world of martial arts? This is the first time I saw a simulation where the protagonist would quit his job and take a part-time job because he had no money to redeem his cultivation.

If we don't update this book, we will publish it, it will be over 100,000 words 🥵

There's nothing wrong with writing, it's just that it's not refreshing enough, let's settle down some more

A good-looking series 🙂

More updates, more updates, more updates 😆

It looks good and the amount of updates is also good. Keep up the hard work and update. Come on

The quality of this book is already high enough to be considered a fine product, but the reviews are constantly negative. The root cause is that the author doesn't understand it, and neither do the readers. I want to write this comment to let the author see what direction you should continue to work in. I can continue to write more good stories. First of all, this is a complete story. This alone can touch the threshold of high-quality products. The author should understand what you are writing and who your target readers are. If you want to write a complete story, then write the story completely and add a little suspense. If it can be fascinating and have a little talent, then a book called "Feng Shen" will be natural. The biggest problem with this book is here. The author wanted to write a complete story, but from the book title, to the rhythm, and between the lines, he revealed the tendency of brainless and refreshing writing, which attracted a lot of readers who wanted to read brainless and refreshing writing. As a result, they only saw a story that although complete, was not fascinating and even a bit boring. It is impossible not to scold you. The author should first clarify the general target portrait of the readership group you want. Or, what genre do you want to write. It's fine to want to write stories, and it's fine to want to write cool articles, but you have to stick to it and don't do it half-heartedly. Take the framework of the story and start writing a cool article, and use the style of the cool article to write the story. So, the author must first clarify his destination. Then according to the destination, frame and structure the outside of the book. For example, what book title to use, what direction the introduction should be, what style to use for writing, and even down to what type of catchphrases, common phrases, characters' quirks, etc. These bits and pieces are inconspicuous, but they can give readers a huge sense of reality. It is these senses of reality that can make readers willing to believe you and be willing to take your place in the book. In fact, depending on the performance and reputation of a novel, this aspect accounts for at least 30%, and for some extreme genre novels, it can even reach 50% to 60%. In other words, the success of a novel is largely determined before you choose the subject matter and start writing. Secondly, if the author wants to write a story, then he should learn from the writing description of detective suspense. Starting point masterpieces are basically suspenseful. If the author wants to write a cool article, then logic is not important. As long as bugs are not fatal, they can be ignored. But the emotional impact must be in place. This is the author's biggest problem and the most criticized aspect of this book. It's not the so-called rhythm, nor the so-called plot and characters. Those readers who just don't like it but can't or don't realize it can only use other close points or the points they care about most to attack the author. Then, there are indeed some deficiencies in the author's rhythm, but they are far from having a major impact. The author should be more familiar with writing books than me in this aspect. This problem can be naturally solved as the number of words increases. If you want to become a great god, it is easy to achieve it with just a little bit of diligence, talent, intelligence, strong emotions, etc. If you want to become platinum, you need to know which one of you is outstanding, and then focus on cultivating that one. When the so-called period of time when the body, mind, emotion, and will are most harmonious, the emotions are the strongest, and you are ready to burst out, you can become a god with a book and become platinum directly. The most peak moment of a person's life is this moment. No matter what he does, his work at this moment will be the culmination of his life. This work will have a strong personal style, but will not appear too aggressive. This is also the moment when a person is closest to God. Most of all the problems, puzzles, and doubts in life will be solved at this moment.

The author updates 10,000 times a day. He is hardworking and capable. He writes very well. Please support me.

My suggestion is that the author needs to polish the details. There is actually no problem with the plot. The reason why many readers may leave is due to some small mistakes (such as the mismatch between the identity and combat power of the characters, etc.). I am talking about the free chapter. You can change it when you have time.

The plot is okay, it's nice to have less brains! It's considered food and grass, non-toxic, don't worry

Why is there no one around? It feels pretty good.

I have caught up with the latest 200 chapters. I will not post a book review yet, but will just talk about the plot setting guesses from the perspective of solving puzzles. About Jiutianjun's identity and brief discussion: Jiutianjun has revealed six people so far, and three others are currently somewhat vague. Jun——Xia Emperor Cang——Prince Qing——Old Heavenly Master Qiong——Qingchuan Xuan——National Master Xun——Xie Muchia (The following is a guess) You——Emperor Ziwei (the leader of Hunter Sky) Hao——Professor Bai Di Change——the protagonist or the person who gives the protagonist the book of eternal life or eternal life The book itself Jiutian has a prototype, so the Haotian Lord corresponding to the Sword Master should be Professor Bai Di, the Youtian Lord should be the unknown Ziwei Emperor corresponding to the intelligence, and the Biantian Lord corresponding to the divine calculation is consistent with the protagonist's setting. Others, including the protagonist himself, should not know that the protagonist is the Biantian Lord. If the protagonist's Book of Eternity is given by someone else, then the person who gave it is the Biantian Lord. Speculations about Bai Emperor and Professor Bai Di: There is no doubt that the person who releases the Bai Emperor Sky Sword every time at the end of the simulation should be Professor Bai Di. But it may not be him himself (this possibility cannot be ruled out). It is most likely that the real Bai Emperor was resurrected with the help of Professor Bai Di's body, took away Professor Bai Di, and then released the Bai Emperor Sky Sword. If the protagonist saw who released the sword energy in a certain simulation, the protagonist would be very surprised by the opponent (unexpectedly, the person who destroyed the world every time was Professor Bai Di). Professor Bai Di should know that his end is to be taken away and then destroyed, but either he is unable to stop it, or he accepts it happily (I am leaning towards this possibility). Xie Muchia is very strong, but he should not be able to defeat Professor Bai Di (even if he is not captured by Bai Di). Speculations about the Five Emperors: The Five Emperors more or less have their own plans. Bai Emperor is the most anxious and has the fewest trump cards and backhand. As soon as Emperor Xia was about to succeed, he immediately resurrected and took action. Although he was very majestic every time he destroyed the world, he would probably be eaten up by the remaining four people after he was destroyed. However, the protagonist could not see the end of the simulation. The trump cards in ascending order should be white, green, red, yellow, and black. Even if Jueling succeeds, Emperor Xia is not the final winner. Black Emperor should take advantage of the last moment before Jueling to suck a big mouthful of spiritual energy, and then become the strongest on the surface after Jueling, replacing Emperor Xia in ruling the world. If the protagonist can survive all the catastrophes of world destruction in a certain simulation, then the book should almost fill in the holes, collect the foreshadowing, and then begin the ending.

The author still has 29 simulations to come on!

As title

Why doesn't Tingshu support multi-person recitation roles?

The writing style is rather childish, and I can barely write about fighting. If you ignore these things, you can still watch it.

The author's writing style was a bit novice at the beginning, and there were many shortcomings in plot and setting, but I feel that he is making continuous progress. This book shows that the author is writing it carefully. Come on 🙂

What is the free chapter about? Is it impossible to open it? Can't get a loan? Can't borrow money? No wild road? Even if you really don't have one, you should write it out. The protagonist tried all kinds of tricks to cheat, but in the end, it didn't work, so he had to work part-time. It won't take more than a few sentences to write like this, right? Nothing, hard suppression, is this fast pace? Genius flow?