Douluo: the Ultimate Chaos Qingxuan

Brother, let's not do it. Can we state our position first? Judging from the current situation, you neither take the side of the Tang family nor stand against them. You just said that you probably won't be with Lan Xuanyu. Judging from the current plot, if there is a single female protagonist, it will be Lan Mengqin. As for the two heroines, they are Lan Mengqin and Tang Yuge. But the relationship between Lan Mengqin and Bai Xiuxiu is quite good. If you are on the opposite side of Lan Xuanyu, what will you do about the relationship between Lan Mengqin and Bai Xiuxiu? You can't write about a friendly relationship with Lan Xuanyu in the end. How can readers buy into it?

Dear author, I went to school early the day after tomorrow. Can you update before 9 o'clock tomorrow night? I'd appreciate it if you could finish my wish. This is the best Dou 4 fanfic I've ever seen.

I haven't read your other book, but I've already ordered it. The subscription for this book is also fully ordered. Please update quickly. If you write about Douluo in your next book, I'd like to see you write two male protagonists.

Fighting Four is difficult to do originally. The protagonist's double martial soul (currently I don't know what the second martial soul is) is not as fast as other people's single martial soul with level 8 innate cultivation 😊

Take Gu Yuena in and become Lan Xuanyu's stepfather

Can Tang San and Lan Xuanyu be killed? I feel that the Tang family is not good. I hope the author will not write about living peacefully with the Tang family later, otherwise I will just stop reading it.

The largest number of people have watched Dou Yi, and there are not many people who have watched Dou II. There are fewer and fewer people watching Dou III and Dou IV. You can tell by looking at the number of fan books.

Personally, I feel like I've already written fan fiction, so why should I have a single female protagonist? I need to have multiple female protagonists and include Tang Yuge.

It's on the shelves! It's on the shelves! Have you cast Big Brother? Look over here! The more soldiers Han Xin has, the better. I will not reject anyone who comes!

I hope it will be a single heroine First of all, Dou Si is Lan Xianyu's autobiography of cheating all the way. As the heroine, Bai Xiuxiu has very few scenes (basically none), then there are 33 people in the class, Thirty-three Heavenly Wings, among the seven monsters, Tang Yuge, Bai Xiuxiu has a complicated composition, and other female characters are mentioned briefly, but Lan Mengqin is okay

After reading so many chapters, let's start with the Senluo Star chapter. The protagonist fights so many soul beasts that are not in the original work, and all of them are powerful. After fighting for more than ten chapters, in the end, the protagonist has no use for those soul bones. Breaking the record shows that he is awesome! Just get a soul, directly arrange for the protagonist to fight that tree, and then win easily, and finally let Xianyu go up, but they can't break the record, and they can't go to the place where they got the soul bone. And because the protagonist saw the potential of that tree, he can save it and get a soul. This is no better than the content of your book. When the ferocious beasts are chattering, the protagonist interrupts and talks about dragons and phoenixes. It's interesting and fun to pretend to be cool with them from the perspective of a time traveler, right? You're not afraid of being killed because of your own strength. Also, it's already the Tianlong chapter. The protagonist doesn't go to Tianlong with his wife, but goes with his senior sister. Why is it that Senior Tang is his wife and author? Is it interesting to entangle each other? Being ambiguous and refusing to accept her, doesn't this make people upset? The protagonist also pretends to be a dragon and works as an undercover agent, which is not much different from Lan Xuanyu. He still works for the Federation or Shrek. The only difference is that Lan Xuanyu is a third-generation god, and the protagonist started his career by making plug-ins.

When to kill Babar, the Little Dragon God, who is on par with the Third Reich and Israel? Or let him eat a giant turtle?

Killed all the three little dragons and the obscene dragon king Tang 50 Drained their blood to help Ditian become the Dragon God I also took out the old coin of the Dragon God and whipped the corpse to humiliate the crazy dragon in front of Ditian Finally conquered Ditian and attacked the Great God Circle Expose and humiliate them all, such as the Bingqing Yujie Tang Buddha, the 25-year-old rapist Zhou Weiqing, and the rapist Mad God who cannoned the Queen Qin Emperor. By the way, I also want to extract all the auspicious beast skull blood, blood, and luck from Little Mouse Dai's father-in-law and humiliate them.

1. The yin and yang chaotic bird (the one from Tang Yuge in the original work) 2. The scorching sun and the shadow of the taiyin (my own imagination, hidden in the chaotic green lotus)

I hope the author can write a single female protagonist Lan Mengqin

I hope that the author will enjoy reading the article more than reading it. There is no layout, no ideas, no ideas, and you have to write boldly but you are afraid of losing your combat power. I dare not write this or think about that. I know it or not, but I don't know how to write Doukai and write Doukai. The score plummeted, not to mention that it made me dizzy. The first twenty chapters were perfect, but the second half was nothing new. It's boring. The characters are poorly understood and have poor inner thoughts. The protagonist possesses a treasure from the Ancient World. The author also forcibly reduced the strength of the protagonist with the treasure, which shocked us. I don't know if you have read The Ancient World before writing this. There are three taboos for authors: If you don't know or understand, don't write too hard, which will deduct huge points. It is in line with the readers' interest in reading, rather than focusing on the whole story, which means there is no intention. I have ups and downs, and these languages ​​have captured my interest in reading. Evoke Resonance Design something to make readers think deeply about this book. Don't always stitch together other people's stories. You should think about your own ideas and create your own. Only then can you write your own articles. Writing articles and novels is like writing about the various aspects of life and the vagaries of the world. Only in this way can you improve your writing level. It's more like listening to readers' opinions.

To be honest, this book was okay in the early stages, but fell apart in the middle and later stages. You neither wrote about opposing the Tang family, nor about siding with the Tang family. You at least created the content of the copy yourself, and there are so many chapters. Lan Mengqin has hardly made much progress in her relationship. You can do more emotional scenes with Lan Mengqin while you are doing the task. If it doesn't work, you can just change it to a stallion story. Black and red can also attract some popularity. Is it better than you who want to abandon the book at every turn?

There is no difference between the Yin Dragon King's betrayal of the race and the Bingqingyujie Tang family. They are all gimmicks. It is better to train the Ditian family to be conscientious and loyal.

Can the author kill the Tang family? I think the author almost becomes a friend when he writes like this.

What do you think, author of Chapters 462 and 463? The protagonist is already a god king at this time, and there are no taboos. Lan Mengqin's parents actually said that the two women working together with one husband would have a negative impact on the family and the world, and how people would view it. What a joke! The protagonist is now the God King! These problems no longer matter, the author's writing is a bit redundant. After seeing it, the author hopes to change the plot and write it, but it cannot be written when the protagonist is already the God King.

You can't play Dou 4 without opening Hang Dou 4. Dou 4 has become the back garden of the Tang family.

Author. Lan Xuanyu became the Dragon God at the age of 20, and the circle of great gods also returned at this time. The protagonist is now 18 years old, and has only two years to live. He has not even broken through to the title of Douluo, and the protagonist's combat power is only a little higher now. What is the difference between cultivating immortality and not cultivating? If the current age group is a level 99 extreme douluo, quasi-god realm, true god level peak combat power, it would be reasonable.

Add some finesse

What is this? The ending is completely different from the introduction 😒 Where is the chess player? I only saw a person who used his lower body to think about taking in Tang Yuge, and a nanny who took care of his younger sister. If the older sister can really achieve the same strength as the protagonist, then the protagonist will look even more useless.

I read the table of contents of Chapter 378. Can the Tang family be destroyed? This rat, a bastard, half a hundred, will the salted fish be immortal?

It still has a great start but a messy ending. They agreed on a single female protagonist, but ended up with Tang Yuge in the end. If it can be written normally, it will definitely be regarded as a masterpiece of Dou 4.

At the beginning, the combat power was suppressed, and it was a slap in the face. After suppressing the combat power and not being able to beat those few people, you suppressed your Thunder child, Dian within Dian, none of you fell behind, and it will be on the shelves after 30 chapters.

It's unfinished, Crimson Mother has been brushed off, there is no plot in the great circle, the protagonist is still the nanny of the cheap sister, and in the end, I don't know who is the protagonist between the protagonist and the cheap sister.

I'm convinced, why do you have to add Tang Yuge? 😵, every time there is a plot about Tang Yuge, it feels so awkward and uncomfortable to watch.

The author should stop writing about the cheap sister of the protagonist and hurry up and push the plot. What I am writing now is not what the readers want to see at all. It is the plot of the Crimson Mother and the Circle of Gods that the readers want to see.