Under One Person: the Forbidden Files of the Magician

The character of the protagonist written by the author at the beginning is a bit bitter and hateful. Whether it is the protagonist's own psychology or the profile of Master Xu San and Xu Si's thoughts, they all create an image of a seeker after experiencing the world. Then suddenly three personalities were separated, and Lu Linglong was still forced to join the protagonist. The person who joined was not the real protagonist, but the protagonist's clone, which caused the plot to be extremely fragmented. Personally, it has affected the viewing experience! I don't quite understand. You should either focus on writing about the image of a seeker, or you should focus on writing about emotions. It's very confusing to want and want at the same time.

Emmm, what can I say? After reading a few chapters, if the setting is a female protagonist, the dialogue and so on should be fine. But if the protagonist is a young man and a young woman, it feels so awkward. This is my personal experience.

The emotional lines are so stretched, the protagonist is so weak that it's a bit disgusting, and the name of the doppelgänger is also difficult to pronounce and weird.

If you fall into the trap of being inseparable from one person, you have to lick the company, lower your qualifications by half, and the beginning is in vain, drive high and go low.

I wrote six chapters of a fox... Firstly, I felt unhappy after finishing it, and secondly, I didn't advance the main plot, so I'm just talking about it.

It is recommended that there be less brainless plots about love, and only about half a picture is sweet. If it is sweet for several consecutive pictures, it will be boring and boring. Personally, I think emotional drama is not the author's strong point, so I should reduce the number and frequency of writing this type of drama.

From time to time, I see people who are under the same name. It has been so many years since Lu came to Dian. In other words, even the most popular Lu can't see a few copies. Why do dots keep popping up? Is there a book that became popular or is this stuff very popular recently?

If you want to really write about magic, you need to read more magic books that exist in reality. These two books are Aleister's Four Books of Magic and the book about the Golden Dawn. Both volumes are very thick and large.

What an idiotic way of writing. The male protagonist is written the same as the female protagonist.

At the beginning, the author wanted to write the protagonist's character, but the writing was not good and the writing turned into shit.

It's both a clone and a powerful one. To be honest, Xiao Nanniang's clone is not as good as the one who suffered so much and hated her at the beginning.

It doesn't look good, it always makes me feel like the Dragon King is back

😅😅😅

The author is definitely not old, and the lines are full of secondary fantasy

The gospel of setting the party, the author does have a few brushes, and the monthly ticket is given

How to say it? The beginning, especially the tone and voice, is indeed a vulgar novel. It is the kind of novel that will hit the street until it can no longer hit the street. But it doesn't matter. I'm here to look at the setting. Just set it up.

Author, your writing is not as good as you think. Chapter 7: Where is the nightmare? Look back and see for yourself. It feels like a child showing off his toys to me, which is a bit weird.

In general, the characters are too flat and blunt. Although there is nothing poisonous, it is not very good. The protagonist is too powerful, making the plot bland and boring. If you like this kind of thing, you can try it.

Enemies who can block space appeared in just chapter 50; the magic aspect is very unimaginative. The setting is that a mage does not even have a familiar, there is no positional warfare, and there are no curses. Apart from a storage space, the time and space spell only has a flash that will be blocked by the enemy. The combat performance is also very mediocre. He also talks trash during the battle.

To be honest, Lu Linglong's character in the original work shouldn't be able to do such a thing

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Fenmao only has three mouths, and it just so happens that Xiaobai only has three mouths. The expensive circle is really chaotic.

If you write about one person and then say magic is truth, then why are you writing about one person?

After reading it, I felt it was okay, but the nightmare chapter felt like it was written too early, without enough foreshadowing, and felt a bit dry.

In fact, it's pretty good. When I first started reading the first chapter, I thought the introduction to the male protagonist was just a mindless, pretentious story. But overall, it's pretty good, and it has a pretty good grasp of the rhythm. It's just that sometimes there's too much nonsense. In fact, sometimes it doesn't need to be described in detail. Regarding things like the principles of magic, sometimes more than half of a chapter is just about the principles. My roommate likes Lu Linglong very much. Please update the author soon.

Can the author contact the editor and add a reverse flow or succubus tag? It can be regarded as a contribution to the classification of works, isn't it 👍

No wonder my grades were so bad later, I deserved to die.

Qiuqiu informed.

🙂 After all, I can't stand it any more. The character he created really makes my scalp numb. It's better not to write about my feelings.

Don't learn from the magic of the Forbidden City