All Heavens: Starting from the Lord of This Life, Watching for a Long Time

After reading it, I was speechless anyway. The protagonist has such an awesome physique, but after arriving in the world of the Supreme Being, he devoted himself wholeheartedly to the world of Buddhism. He also had a deep emotional connection with Buddhism. In the end, he practiced the Demon Subduing Kung Fu for ordinary Buddhist arhats. He also practiced the Demon Subduing Fist. The protagonist had no idea about other super awesome kung fu techniques. I would like to ask the author what kind of Tao are these ordinary exercises? Have you cultivated the way of subduing demons? I remember that the awesome techniques and ideas in The Lord of One Life were all very profound, right? There are those who cultivate true spirits, those who cultivate years, those who cultivate long rivers of time and space, and those who cultivate cause and effect, but the authors of these techniques don't like them? Only interested in subduing demons? Anyway, it gives people the impression that the protagonist entered a super large treasure house, and then took a silver coin, saying that this is the most valuable thing in this treasure house. The people watching were speechless. The protagonist is also very unpredictable.

With all due respect, this plot is really a mess, that is, the writing is okay and I can read it, otherwise the plot is not as good as Xiaobai's writing

Author, can you explain? Why does the protagonist always hang out in front of Meng Qi and intervene at critical moments? And then you still think that the people in Six Paths of Reincarnation didn't notice. Could it be that those people are blind? You said that the system can hide the protagonist's traces, but that must be under the premise that the protagonist has hidden himself. Isn't it a bit too ridiculous for you to come out and wander around at any time and forcefully explain that you haven't been discovered?

The unprecedented five tribulations were added to the body. As a result, before the tribulation, I could fight against the dharma body by blowing constantly. After the tribulation, I still had to fight against the dharma body. It was overwhelming. I stopped watching.

The more I look at it, the more I look like a loser. Can you be a bit more cool and stop being embarrassed everywhere?

As a protagonist, he also ran under the nose of Han Guang, the Emperor of Heaven. He was trained every minute. If he jumped in front of Ah Nan, wasn't he looking for death?

Playing with fists is not popular in this life

I've basically never seen a fan who didn't collapse after writing about it for a lifetime

From the beginning of these two chapters, I said that I would divide into three identities. The second identity is the ax used by Pangu, and the third identity has the ax hanging outside the body. Do you think others are blind?

This life is a bit cheating. This world comes with built-in monitoring, memory reading, and random restarting and rewinding. For the author, there is very little to write about. If you don't create a side-level plot to cover up the future possibilities on the timeline, the protagonist of the fanfic will be completely transparent.

1. The setting is okay. Giving the Golden Finger of Immortality can help the protagonist grow. Special physiques can also help in the early stage. New achievements can also unlock new small abilities 2. There is nothing wrong with reading before practicing martial arts. Combined with the cheat, it can be seen that the details of growth are intentionally enriched. 3. The author is also relatively humble and active. Suggestions and criticisms in the comment area are patiently recalled 4. Let me briefly talk about the shortcomings. Although there is nothing wrong with reading in the comment area, there are still many criticisms. There is nothing wrong with reading, but the author's writing is not good, that is, it is not interesting and has no plot. Either follow the trend of online articles and listen to the opinions of some readers, practice martial arts, strong skills, stronger skills, super strong skills, one level, two levels, three levels, and then add emotional rendering to defeat powerful enemies, giving people the feeling of upgrading from monsters. Either you have to impress people with details, which is another kind of refreshing feeling. Reading Buddhist scriptures should not mean reading 10, 100, or 1,000 Buddhist scriptures. In this way, when practicing martial arts and upgrading, you need to use the shell of Kaiqiao, exterior scenes, and Dharma body, and decorate it with the concepts of time, space, cause and effect. Reading upgrades should also be detailed and decorated. This is not enough for the author, it is superficial. It's enough to read some introductory books on Buddhist scripture theory, read some Buddhist stories, and use them to fool us lay readers. Of course, it would be better for the author to read the original text of the scripture and incorporate some of his experiences into it.

What is included in the new book inventory? If you can't write well, why should you choose the one who is worthy of this life? If you only cultivate immortality, why are you jumping out of this world?

Are there any female characters who want to see the original work, such as the snack foodie and the chicken-butchering swordsman? Want to watch exciting battle scenes, do you have the skills? Want to see the ups and downs of the plot instead of following the original work at a glance, do you have one? If you don't write or can't write what readers want to see, then what do you want readers to see?

Isn't he the most respected person in this world? , What's going on behind the scenes? It's so nonsensical. It's okay in the front, but it's like a red stone in the back.

There is also a distinction between superior and inferior Dharmakaya-level peerless magical powers. The Dharmakaya of the Immovable King, who is certified by the Vajra Indestructible Divine Power, is not even a great Bodhisattva or an Arhat.

The battle scenes were grand at the beginning, but the descriptions of the battles were very stretched and strengthened in the later period. However, the protagonist always pretended to be something to be seen, and also pointed out other people's secrets. It did no good at all. It always increased risks for himself, and there was no explosive point. How long did it take to just read the love letter? Although the author has made some progress in writing, except for the scene of killing the scene, the rest of the plot is as dull as water.

The first copy is good-looking, but the main world is boring. I suggest you not write about the main world, and no one cares about the cold treatment.

I feel that the priority is not clear, and the protagonist does not force the fruit with them. Many conflicts are actually unnecessary. From time to time, it is said that the protagonist has calculations, but after looking at it, I feel that those calculations are completely unnecessary. It was immortality at the beginning. In fact, I read a book at the beginning. I think this is okay, and then I traveled around There is no problem in traveling, talking about love, and taking your time. I always feel that the protagonist has a sense of urgency. There is no need to live forever, and Meng Qi will become the other side. There is no problem at all for the protagonist to live to the next era. I don't see how to solve the regrets. I always feel that everything is almost meaningless.

The author probably hasn't read the original work. If he has, he won't dare to cause trouble as soon as he enters. Meng Qi is the devil who travels through time and the Supreme Being is always watching him. Erlang Shen is waiting for him in the Shaolin Temple.

After that, I didn't really want to watch it

Heaven is dead, Huang Tian shall stand! The bell of the Eastern Emperor rang, and Jiu Ge entered the world of the Supreme Being from the ancient well in front of the Sanqing Palace in the world of martial arts masters. He was dropped to the ground, opened the box, and pulled into the six reincarnation spaces to perform the reincarnation mission. Jiu Ge discovered the sacrificial purpose of the Donghuang Bell and was sent to the top of another Mount Tai. He witnessed the Nine Dragons pulling the coffin and went to Beidou to bury the Emperor Star. Zhetian: Sacrifice the bodhi seed to enlighten your divinity... Sacrifice the crocodile ancestor's divine fetus to obtain the secondary body method... Sacrifice the holy fruit to discover the secret seeds... Sacrifice the supreme residual consciousness to obtain the ancient emperor's secret method... Sacrifice the flower body of Hedao to merge with the mark of the heart of heaven... The Lord of the First Life: Sacrifice the Demon Lord's residual thoughts to obtain the Demon Lord's inheritance…Sacrifice the True Martial Evil Thoughts to obtain the Three Sky-cutting Swords…Sacrifice the Tathagata Divine Palm's true meaning to obtain the Absolute Saint Abandoned Wisdom…Sacrifice the Demonic Blood Peach to obtain the Jade Disc of Good Fortune… Which is stronger and weaker, the Dharma of the First Life and the path of cultivating one's body? The bright heroine Jiang Zhiwei, the cool and refined Ruan Yushu, the charming little fox born in Qingqiu, the fairy Weiwei, the flawless demon girl Yan Ruyu, the playful and cunning Ji Ziyue, the ethereal saint Zixia, The cold goddess Yi Qingwu, the noble ancient princess... Jiu Ge starts a journey to the heavens and worlds, and then establishes the Yellow Sky, sacrifices to the strange plateaus and monsters of the heaven, and proves the fruit of transcendence above the sacrifice path!

Finally, I have traveled in deep space. The general outline of my Tathagata Palm is still not as convenient as that half of the Taoist Fruit.

Multiple female protagonists, Little Fox, Ruan Yushu, Jiang Zhiwei. Ethical investment, approved by the Demon Emperor (Demon Saint), and with the Human Emperor Sword, from the small world of fairy traces to the cave of all things, to the real world of the Northern Zhou Dynasty and the Southern Jin Dynasty, humanity reigns supreme!