Fairy, Please Stop Liking Me!

Brother, please let Xiao Qi be the heroine, I beg you, really, she is different. 😭😭😭

It's pretty good. At first I thought the princess was a traditional evil villain like a fairy, but I didn't expect that she was just a good girl who was deceived. I'd love to see more.

Come, the author and I read, eunuchs are like the whole family😀

Can Qidian have a function to refund money for eunuch articles? I'm really convinced. Spend money to read eunuch articles and you'll have to suffer the consequences yourself.

The book is good, but I'm afraid of sudden eunuchs. Can the author change his mind to never eunuchs🥹

I finished reading it in one afternoon. The author is really good and the first book is very smooth. To express my personal thoughts, in the latest chapters, the content feels a bit rushed. It feels like the author is accelerating the introduction and intersection of female characters. For example, he confessed to Sister Ying openly or secretly, and even brought the matter to the table and had a showdown with two people in an attempt to ruin his own image. Now Xiao Ran, Sister Ying, Master, Emperor, Zhao Hongling and the twin sisters are gathered in the capital. Coupled with the development of food fiefdoms. The content is a bit too scattered. I feel like I can write slowly without being anxious. For example, Sister Ying, as the male protagonist's only friend in the capital, could have accompanied him and made suggestions while secretly making love while the male protagonist was selflessly dedicating himself to the country and the people. The male protagonist thinks that he is different from the mortal world, and he is also his best friend. If he observes etiquette, nothing will happen to him. Then got stabbed in the back. It's more dramatic and the story flows more smoothly. It's more natural than now where the male protagonist forces his way on top. The male protagonist is a person who does not hesitate to serve the country and the people. She is already a super succubus, so there is no need to forcefully add conflicts and accidents. Of course the above are all personal opinions. Come on, author, write well and look after you. Assign some tasks, you go and kill Mr. Guan Guan

This book will be on the shelves soon. There will be three updates guaranteed on the day it is released, and one chapter will be added for every 100 readers! I beg you readers to read more! ! Thank you, little brother 🙏🙏🙏

It's a pity that it's still a seedling (Involving slight spoilers) Advantages: 1. Except for soul penetration (the setting in the article is memory awakening), other lightning protection and depression prevention are excellent. 2. As a new author, at least the writing style doesn't look awkward, especially in this plot setting. I have seen this kind of description in many novels that requires "acting skills". Many authors like to add some inexplicable descriptions of expressions, such as "pretending to be angry", which makes people pick their toes. 3. The plot is quite novel, at least to me personally. In other words, I have seen similar movies before but didn't watch it because of the poison or thunder. The author's idea of ​​"ascension to immortality, physical body to sainthood" is quite clever, and although we can already guess the general plot direction of the book, we still have the desire to continue reading. 4. The male protagonist is portrayed according to personal taste, not vulgar or greasy, maybe it is also due to the plot setting, unlike many novels where he is straightforward and has no tricks, pretending to be cold but greasy on the inside. A little bit virginal, but not uncomfortable to watch. Moreover, the author is consciously handling and foreshadowing the protagonist's gradual growth and personality change. There are also some shortcomings, but it is more flesh and blood. 5. The portrayal of several female protagonists is okay. There are some loopholes in the settings, which may be due to the fact that the plot has not been developed yet. They are not very full, but surprisingly almost all of them can be remembered. Disadvantages: 1. Half-soul travel. I understood the setting in the article correctly. It should be that part of the memory was blocked and then awakened. It can be seen that the author consciously dealt with the soul travel. I actually don't care about general soul travel. However, many of the heroines in this book have a basic favorable impression of the protagonist (not enough to like) because of the protagonist before awakening. It looks weird. The main reason is that the characters before and after are relatively separated. It may be better to set it up so that one soul and two souls are missing, and then the soul and personality make up for it. 2. I don't know if it is the author's writing habits or some oral habits. There are often long and difficult sentences with multiple adjectives in parallel. I was discouraged from writing in the early stage, and there are too many places in the form of paraphrasing for language description. 3. Slightly abuse the heroine. Maybe it's because I've read a lot of Tiantian's articles before, and I feel like Xiao Ran is a bit miserable. At the very least, the heroine has paid so much, so we can't take it for granted. In the latest chapter, it's basically other heroines who are doing the hard work, chasing her husband in the crematorium, and the male protagonist setting up various escapes because of his ascension, and the sacrifices are basically only for the common people. It cannot be said that before the awakening, the male protagonist was miserable and just abused the female protagonist (if it is true that according to what the male protagonist said in the article, he believed that he "owed no one", then I have nothing to say). 4. (Personally) I think the current setting of the heroine, the Empress, should be the most beautiful. Personally, I still prefer an evenly distributed setting. I don't know if the author will deal with the bonus brought by the emperor's fate in the later stage. 5. (Personal comment) Some heroines are introduced too early, and the plots of some senior sisters and junior sisters can already be predicted. Others that may cause depression: 1. There is a supporting role of yy heroine. But one of them is already dead, and the other one also has a way to die, but there are a few places where it says that Xiao Ran is almost the dream lover of all the men of the right age in the capital, eh~. 2. When Zhao Hongling fought against the Golden Scale Guards, her armor and clothes were damaged, but only arrow wounds, rotten flesh and the like were described. I can't think of any other ones. There may be some, but personally I feel that there are basically no mines and no depression when I'm low on defense. Suggestions: 1. The author should add character cards first. I thought there were only two female protagonists. 2. Xiao Ran is really good. It feels like she has the appearance of a royal palace. On the contrary, the empress has no performance. I just remember that she is the first in appearance. Just reading the first few chapters, you might think that Xiao Ran is a xxn, but it is true that her initial description was "the male protagonist will forgive me and understand me", although she immediately said and acted to show that she would abide by women's ethics. Moreover, there were many evil slaves in the princess mansion. Although they were all dealt with, it was later said that Xiao Ran knew that the male protagonist (before awakening) smiled and greeted the slaves in the house for Xiao Ran's sake. This shows that he knew what the palace people were doing. From the beginning, I really thought she was a villainess who was a stepping stone to the plot, xxn. The author will see if he can revise and patch the first few chapters. After all, it is obvious that he is going to be the heroine. 3. As for the text problem mentioned above, there are a lot of long sentences with multiple adjectives juxtaposed, but it is also personal. I don't know how other readers feel. 4. It's not sweet enough, or there's basically no sweetness, nothing exciting. The male protagonist is extremely lacking in subjective initiative emotionally. Although the setting limits the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine to mainly come from "accidents" and "backfires", and there are also foreshadowings and hints of the protagonist's change of mind, we still hope that the protagonist can gradually take the initiative and have some interactions between the male and female protagonists that at least look similar. Hey, it can be considered a personal trend. Others: It is mainly some personal and subjective opinions and suggestions. The author should just focus on himself. I hope the results will get better and better, and don't finish it in less than 1 million words or even become an eunuch 😭 or more.

Female fans prefer to write books about this kind of emotional drama, but there is nothing outrageous so far. The logic is self-consistent, interlocking, and it looks very comfortable.

There are too few new ones on the shelves. I was thinking of reading it directly. I didn't expect that there were so few chapters, so I had to save them. It's really well written. If your update speed keeps up, it will become popular in the future. If you can't keep up with the update speed, it will most likely be sold out.

It's not really going to die. Can the author tell me something?

I... I... I...😫 Update... Update...😢 Woo ~ Wow! 😭 Author, I really feel like I need to update! Why do you do this to me😭 Quick—— —— Wow—— Hee hee... Hee... Hee hee hee hee hee hee

The author has something in the structure of his writing. Keep it at this level. My evaluation of Xiancao

Bold Laohe, if I don't accept Ranbao, I will fight with you 😭

After watching the "manslaughter" plot of the male protagonist, I was completely obsessed with it. It is a rare male protagonist who has charm and courage and is not a flat male protagonist. He is not the kind of ascending novel with traditional routines and all kinds of death-defying rejections, but a real man with flesh and blood and feelings. I like to watch this kind of thing the most, and the chance of love is also a setting that I like very much. Real flesh and blood, at least so far it is getting better and better. Also, when will my Ranran be on the heroine card 😍😍

Fortunately, I have the habit of putting books on shelves 😃

Don't cut it😢

I already write 2,000 words a day. Isn't it really going to die? 😭