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The first chapter is not written like a web article, it is like an explanation, there is no buying point, the location and characters are just thrown in the reader's face, you should understand what writing a novel is about, you don't even have a good plot development 😐

My recommendation is to put your book in Ai, and then change the male protagonist's name to something more normal, and make the male protagonist's character look like a human being.

Everyone in the bar, Huzi, has seen you. Do you want people to see you so much? What else can you say↓ Write slowly, 3 million words will help you get ahead. Some readers like to read long articles 🤔

It happened to be written that the bandits killed Liu Yuanwai's family and the protagonist experienced the old man Du incident and ended up cleverly. The protagonist went to the academy at the beginning to prove that it was not random writing. All the characters, plots, and what they said in the article are foreshadowed. The battle realm, world view, and subsequent development will all have reasonable explanations. I first conceived three parts. The first part is about 600,000 to 800,000 words, which can explain all the characters, plots, and story development clearly. If I hadn't signed a contract, I would have finished writing the first part, giving the entire first story a complete ending. Believe me, this is a unique story! If anyone sees it, you can leave a few comments!

Just go practice if you want to cook. A novel is not like a novel, and an expository essay is not like an expository essay. It is really hard to swallow. Just immerse yourself in your own world and enjoy yourself

The author is going out to play, a friend is getting married, and he is traveling for a few days. He may not update for the next four or five days. When he comes back, he will write 100,000 words first to see if he can sign a contract? I can't finish the first part and explain all the foreshadowing, characters, and plot. I know my writing is too complicated!

No matter what, let's finish it first. I'll finish the first novel without any regrets, and then finish the rest directly. My current goal is to at least finish the first novel and have an ending!