Breaking Stars with Bare Hands, You Call This a Scavenger?

The main character is a good guy. Others are morally bad people. The universe is 99.9999 Not suitable for life. I specially found a living planet to take out the garbage. What a luxurious federation. Life stars are all garbage dumps. There is not a single waste star

It's so hard for the protagonist to defeat two country bastards with this configuration. The millions of flying swords exclusive to space users are just like rusty ones. The psychic black hole can't absorb and absorb energy fiercely, so it doesn't live up to its name. Su, the daughter of a big plutocrat, actually went out naked and fought for a long time without even taking out any decent equipment.

There is a brother at the beginning. You don't need to look at it to know that that brother is useless except for causing trouble.

How many first-level warriors does it take five chapters to kill? What rubbish?

How can you, the brother of the protagonist, catch up with the protagonist? How can you just downplay it and take care of the protagonist when he is NB? You don't want the protagonist's brother to catch up with the cheating protagonist. That would be very difficult 😰

The writing style is not good, and I can't write the New Dollar spirit of Goldfinger. . . .

Your convergence is 1, but what is awakened is the space system. What about time? Special psionic black holes, but not related to gravity. The author is not imaginative enough to do fancy things, such as the unified system, the life system, the soul system, the causal destiny system, etc.

They say that if something is wrong, they will basically trace the source. The protagonist is indeed a good person if he doesn't ask questions, but being on a junk planet and leaving a time bomb nearby is stupid. The protagonist's time-bomb friend just rents out the night and has almost enough money. As Lao Deng said before, the protagonist is the one who solves the rental problem? You wrote about sharing a house, which is appropriate to save money, but sharing a house with a small-minded bombshell is a bit poisonous. Although it is said that it is eaten to the core, in that environment, falling down from the beginning is equivalent to having no hope in life and is equivalent to garbage. Wouldn't it be better for you to write separately and rent a house separately?

The author has been a scavenger, and some things are very touching.

Can you please hurry up and let this brother worship the heavens? If only Ladybug has no talent, no martial arts, no strength, no good background, and no good eloquence, what's the use of immortality? The protagonist works as a nanny for him?

The introduction is so cool, so you need to write it well! Keep at it

An author with great potential, but many details currently lack polish and is very immature.

The plot development in Chapter 15 is rather blunt.

Is it a trumpet or plagiarism?

It's well written, but it's a pity it's a space opera or something. What is the difference between it and what we usually call decisive killing of F? The plot is equally sophisticated, and it also provides for upgrades, but its enjoyment or the author's enjoyment does not lie in how many levels the protagonist has upgraded. The author's enjoyment lies in the advancement of the plot. The characters here are purely marionettes. No matter how gorgeously written they are, they are just gorgeous marionettes. The plot is just for the sake of the plot. All plots that focus on the protagonist's body are to serve the protagonist's upgrade. All goals, searches and directions are to obtain the resources needed for upgrade, thereby creating a channel for your own upgrade. The advantage of articles like space opera lies in the plot. The characters are all exquisite, like perfect dolls, although they are too fairy tale and middle school or middle school student-oriented. The disadvantage is that it looks annoying. The fights and some key scenes are redundant.

Grain and grass, clear world view

How did I get the eunuch novel updated 25 days ago?

Why is it so poorly written when it's put on the shelves? There are all kinds of meaningless word-count descriptions. I can't figure out how to break a sentence into dozens of words. It's just like a primary school student who can't write an essay and has to write it out. It's ugly.

Come on, save double the amount😲

It's become watery now that it's on the shelves, which makes me feel that it's not worth the money spent.