Huo Yuhao Was Succeeded by Erlang Shen at the Beginning!

My assessment is that the missile kills mosquitoes. Not really. If I can't write anything long, I can only write slowly.

It seems that the resources required for the Eight-nine Mysterious Skills are an astronomical figure for Douluo, right? And the author, this mountain-breaking ax has directly become a martial spirit, and the one completed next door has spiritual thoughts attached to the weapons, okay? And the settings of these exercises can't be localized like Lin Dong's novel next door?

I don't understand the point of being coerced by Xuanzi and still having to control it with an ice jade scorpion soul bone. Anyway, if Ma Xiaotao doesn't die in Chapter 20, I'll just delete the book and edit it.

The author has some pleasant words: when will he leave💩Lake

The character Huo Yuhao written by Tang San seems to be full of grievances now. To write a fanfic about Huo Yuhao well, it requires a clear idea Looking forward to the follow-up, please subscribe after it is released.

I've read Chapter 29. Yan Shaozhe's performance is too normal, the pattern is too big, and his character is too upright. The original work is so uncomfortable. It gives me the feeling that the author wants to clean up Shrek, and then let Huo Yuhao stay in Shrek (for those who have watched Dou San, only Shrek can't be washed)

Huo Yuhao clearly knew that Tang Clan and Shrek were the places where Sugar Buddha trained his dogs, so even though you said you would not join Tang Clan Shrek, you still listened to Beibei and went to Shire Lake to be an auditor. Isn't this a trap for yourself? 🙂😥

I have read Chapter 30 now, and I feel that the author wants me to see what he thinks Shrek Academy would be like without Tang San's influence. After all, the original book makes me feel like this academy has been poisoned by others, and no one is human.

Ling Luochen has a little ice elemental martial spirit that can accurately sense the location of the protagonist's ultimate ice. The Ice Emperor also said that she can use her to find the Snow Emperor and the Ice God's inheritance 🤔 Author, do you think we are all fools when you give away your daughter? Whether the Ice Emperor seeks inheritance from the Snow Emperor or the Ice God, he is much higher than Ling, right? The ability to accurately sense the protagonist's position is incredible, and the protagonist's ultimate ice + spirit cannot escape others' perception. Still don't want to escape? Didn't you forget to take in a daughter even when you were being hunted by the generals? Can you be normal and stop making these plots that defy your intelligence? We haven't avenged our revenge, but we started talking about it first. That's really cheap.

The matter of the severed hand needs to be resolved as soon as possible, which is obviously an uncomfortable point.

It feels like after I really rescued Huo Yun'er, I had to ask Grilled Fish why you resisted your father.

You should be able to patch things up as soon as possible, and I am a harem party member. If you don't tell me this as soon as possible, don't waste each other's time.

Moreover, the main character's blocked meridians have been cleared of impurities, and there is no need for the Xuanshui Pill. The Soul Ascension Pill is of little use. As long as the Whale Gum becomes a soul master and sells a soul guide, it can be sold with money. There is no need to go to shit to overcome it.

Please change the title of the book, what a stupid mistake.

No, buddy, are you really writing cool articles? Don't make me feel like Akaishi when I first came to Qidian.

This time, the debt must be paid with blood! So cool!

It's so happy, so happy, so happy. Most of the tricks now are based on realizing the potential in the future, but they have never thought about not being afraid of life and death on the spot

First of all, I want to talk about the shortcomings before I talk about the advantages, but I want to talk about the shortcomings first, because these shortcomings are designed for the later enjoyment. It is like suppressing the suppression first, because I am afraid of stepping on some people's thunder, so I will talk about it first The first one is to join I entered Shrek Academy, but at Turning Point 4 or Turning Point 3, I would kill the skater and then leave. It can be said that I suppressed it for a while just to feel better. It is understandable, but it may be a blocking point for people who don't want to enter Shrek There is also the second The first point was that during the competition, Xuanzi forced him to be treated. Ma Xiaotao, who already had a background in the Sun and Moon Academy, was still forced to be treated. Although this was a blocking point, it was the most enjoyable later. The sun and moon settled for a while, and then directly killed the white tiger. The Duke's Mansion, took the imitation sky-opening ax and chopped off the head of the tmd Duchess I'm asking you tmd how many other fanfics of the same type can directly tmd kill the White Tiger Duke's Mansion like this? How many of you can tell me, brothers, this is an absolute masterpiece.

No matter how many times I read it, I still feel that this book title is terrible. Brother, inheritance is a verb. Your book title gives readers the feeling that the author has no cultural level and has no desire to read in depth. I suggest you change it as soon as possible🥲

I really didn't expect it to end so suddenly. I guess the author didn't think about how he was going to write it in the future and then he just got stuck here and finished it all. Personally, I think this fanfic is pretty good, but to be honest, I really can't accept it coming so suddenly. I still quite like this fanfic. (Although I don't know if the author doesn't want to write anymore, there is still an outline, but in reality, there are things that have to be done, so I can only choose to finish it in a hurry. I still hope that the author can fill in the real ending in the future)

😭😭Write more, it's really not enough

The soul of Huo Yuhao's mother Huo Yun'er either dissipated or was reincarnated after death (the specific setting of Douluo in this regard is not very clear), and Tang San left Huo Yun'er's soul behind. Regardless of whether Tang San wanted to use it to control Huo Yuhao or not, it can also be said that he actually saved Huo Yun'er's life.

In the beginning, you could read a chapter for only 10 cents. But the more you read later, the more you felt something was wrong, so you spent more and more. When you look closely, you can now read a chapter for 20 cents 😭

Eighty-Nine Mysterious Skills, the soul is immortal and the body is immortal, right?

I would like to recommend a Douluo fan "Douluo: Martial Soul Essence, I am the Master". It is not brainless, it talks about certain logic, is reasonable and cool, and is half-studied about the protagonist.

Selling dog meat at the expense of others feels more like the way a time traveler does things.

Is this the second setting, not the fourth setting?

The plot has advanced to this point, what about the Holy Spirit Cult? Two Extreme Douluo and a bunch of Titled Douluo are as if they are offline.

The current situation is that the author is putting pressure on the protagonist.