The Mortal Immortal

After the reward of 500, it's just to come in and hit the lotus❗Two chapters per day are enough❗There are also one chapter per day, it's so boring! The new book has been prepared for two months, but there is no inventory? However, due to slow work and careful work, the quality can still be guaranteed❗The currently updated ten or so chapters are much better than the previous two, Magic Sword Roar. It can be seen that it has been polished for a long time, and there are also a lot of foreshadowings. Let's see how to build this fairy world! I feel that the character of the male protagonist Xiaoliu is still a bit like a charred face, Chen Qi! Finally, a word of advice, two chapters a day is a guarantee, three chapters a day and five chapters a breakout❗ Come on!

Some book friends said that the layout of this book is small, but in my eyes, there are small advantages in this book. If I write another fairy book fifteen years later, it will be nothing special. I always feel that the problem with this book is not the size of the book, but that the original down-to-earth feeling of the book is a bit weak. In fact, Toad wants to write a little bit of the taste of the world in every book, but he can always write that taste in the first 200,000 words of the book, but then it disappears. Of course, the "secular world" in this book is basically about casual cultivators in the city, but the ecological niche has not changed. Toad's book writing is better than imagination and control of plot clues, but it is weaker than the internal logical consistency of the setting, which is actually quite important in the online world after "The Lord of Mysteries". In books such as "The Immortal Gourd", "One Sword" and "Riding the Dragon", the world of mortals is the same: there are only a few types of people in the world, those who are pretentious are domineering, the weak and kind-hearted people are full of politeness, those who have no immortal fate are all scheming, and those who have worldly wealth are blind. The first characteristic of these people is not their profession and destiny. They are not traffickers, pawns, princes and generals, nor are they successful people and unlucky people. Their first characteristic is always "whether they have a destiny", but it is the former that best reflects the characteristics of ordinary people. This is not as simple as whether Toad has "thought it over". Could it be that he hasn't thought about a book in twenty years? It's not about "writing power", he has enough writing power. It's just that Toad has never thought carefully about what the social structure of the mortal world should be like in the transcendent world. Toad's world view always has the secular world, but the secular world and the world of cultivating immortals are essentially independent. Any power in the secular world is false. Even the more power you have in the secular world, the The "power to truly determine the fate of the world" is further away, but the secular world is still running stably according to its own logic. It's just that some people who are half-immortal and half-incompetent will be like a fish in water. The society written in this way is essentially a divided society in two halves, and there is no "qi of the earth". In the second half of the secular world, all social relationships are inherently fragile and irrelevant to the overall situation; in the upper half of the immortal society, everyone is happy to be grudged and pretended to be slapped in the face or to be slapped in the face. This kind of separation means that once the protagonist becomes a little stronger, it becomes less "vulgar" and the essential flavor of the book disappears. Toad can think more about this aspect and let the protagonist participate more in issues that affect and transform the relationship between immortals and secular people, instead of being limited to casual cultivators and immortal sects. Only then can the concept and taste of "vulgar immortals" be maintained. Of course, no one can teach him how to write when he reaches the level of toad. It's just that the early stages of this book are really amazing, and I hope it can make further progress, so I'm going to introduce some family advice that is difficult to learn from.

I feel that it is not as good as the previous martial arts book. It has more than ten chapters. The protagonist is just an ordinary low-level person with no special characteristics. There is no highlight that attracts people to read. I suggest you cut this one and start a new one.

No matter how much you want to tell the readers, being silent completely disrespects your parents and is full of calculations.

You've already cultivated 250 chapters and your level is still so damn low. Are you getting old, toad? Can't keep up? Even if you have cultivated the Buddha's heart and become the Buddha's light, your realm is still too low. . . It's good to fight, but the level is too low. . . There is such a magic that changes the spiritual roots of qualifications and qualifications. It is so defiant, and the realm is too damn low. It just gets stuck, just ink marks. If there is anything good to see, tell me, and if there is anything good to write, tell me! There are so many awesome skills but the realm is too low. You must be doing it on purpose. You are trying to cheat money by pretending to be old wine but not the medicine. It is a waste of my monthly ticket! I won't give it to you!

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It's too slow to warm up, and there's no cool point so far. The main character is always a small one, and there's no hope of getting stronger and reaching the top.

Ever since the main plot found a way to save the teacher sister, the whole book was incomprehensible, with a hammer here and there a mallet, and when it came to being an eunuch, I wrote as I pleased. I guess I didn't even have an outline, right? To kill the reader's emotions, the opening chapter is invincible, 10s barbarian, let it go

The old guys are no longer good, their time has passed