Looking for Immortality? I Am a Fairy!

The writing and plot are okay, but the logic is very poor. After reading the introduction, I thought it was a bad book, a fairy tale like a book about monsters, but it turned out not to be the case. There is a big gap.

Why is there a male chapter and a female chapter in the listening book? I feel so sad to hear that

Looking at the first few pictures, I didn't feel that they were about immortals.

Can you tell me where "Xian" is? Which time traveler behaved as if his body had been taken away by the original owner, he was also drunk. A brainless piece of writing with no logic at all.

It is different from the introduction (personal understanding). The protagonist did not achieve enlightenment for himself, but found an immortal at the beginning...

Very good. The author is someone who has practiced immortality at first glance. He is realistic and very real. It matches my experience of cultivating immortality. It's not bad. 👍👍👍

The title is not good, it gives people the feeling that the protagonist is self-righteous, it would be better to just call it Xunxian

Jin Dian Yong Zhuan (The textual research is lost, a good man will make up for it)

My writing style is not good, I can't express that kind of artistic conception

Can you change the status of adults? Everyone is an adult. Why are you so low in status? Can you write it?

The writing has a unique flavor, it really has a fairy-like flavor. The writing is very smooth and the story is told eloquently. I hope the author can grasp the rhythm and the characters well. The overall slow rhythm may cause readers to lose interest in the book. I hope the author will think more about it. It is worth reading and highly recommended!

Some of the plot seems to have been seen in other books, but there are some strange things

It's a pity that the previous book ended like that. You must write this one well. I invested in it.

I won't say much about the strength.

I've only read a few chapters, but I have to complain about the main character's name, which is really hard to pronounce. At first glance, it's not a name that can be successful 🙂

The author added some details to me

Have you ever been an immortal? I forgot in the middle and took it for granted🙂

Have the orders exceeded 100? 😅, the results are not good, I'm afraid you might cut it, but the writing is quite good

Come on

What I wrote above is different from my expectations, and it can be seen in today's environment. . I really hate clones

I thought I was traveling into the world of Penguin's game "Xianxian", but it turned out not to be the case.

Cultivation is relatively peaceful, with not so much fighting and depression, which is good

Well written! 👍

Is there Shen Nong? From the introduction, I thought it was similar to the style of "The Book of Strange Monsters"

Want 8 tickets?

Good guy, this is over. Where is my ancient world, my ancient immortal gods, and the impure secrets of the immortal gods.