Comprehensive Martial Arts: Wudang's Young Master Refused Zhao Min at the Beginning

Like female videos. . . . As soon as I finished helping you, I turned around and tried to overwhelm you with my strength. Little did I know that there are only three realms for male fans, the realm of seniors, the realm of fellow Taoists, and the realm of ants. And Hong Xixiang's character is really not like this. He will not listen to your nonsense at all. At that time, he took Xu Zhihu into the imperial city alone, leaving behind a rule that no matter how big a rule is, it is not as big as the sword in the hands of a poor Taoist. It was because of Xu Zhihu that he stayed in the mountain, and it was also because of Xu Zhihu that he went down the mountain. After time travel, without Xu Zhihu, he had to fight with him. . . I really thought he was a stupid boy. . Little did they know that he had been audacious for eight hundred years.

No, there is a big problem with the author's social experience! It is almost impossible for this author to have any friends.

A self-exciting novel, the characters cannot stand up

Sb is one, nonsense, Zhang Sanfeng was seriously injured by the two elders Xuanming and Yang Xiao, Yin Tianzheng was lower than the two elders Xuanming, Ah San became the Western Shaolin from the Vajra Sect, the Vajra Sect was created by Huo Fu Tutuo secretly learned Shaolin martial arts, and the Western Shaolin was founded to deal with the Vajra Sect. This is not bullshit that the author changed.

It was indeed written a bit too viciously. It started out quite well, and the writing style was good. It was able to describe the state of mind of a Taoist sect. But as I wrote, I ended up being inexplicably indecisive. I was targeted, accused, and designed not to talk back. I obviously saved Wudang, but was targeted by a group of 34th-generation disciples. In the end, even what Yu Daiyan said was not counted. He questioned the protagonist's internal strength on the spot and was inexplicably suppressed in combat. After receiving the palm power of the two elders Xuan Ming, I turned into a waste. As soon as I heard that I had become a waste, I was disgusted. What did you write?

The protagonist has a weak character and has too much affection for his children. There is no decisive killing.

What a pity. Originally, it was good to describe the brothers in the same sect. However, these recent chapters have become dark and turned into infighting within the same sect. But the old ones above are still there, so why not fight here?

The author feels that it is better not to write fan fiction, but to be original. Fans are character backgrounds and story skeletons prepared for novices. It would be better if you just change the character to a new sect in the martial arts world at the beginning of the chapter. Looking at the title and content, I thought it was a fan novel, but your content is so awkward that I really don't want to read it.

This book is considered a fake fanfic. The Wu-Tang Clan is not like the Wu-Tang Clan, and the protagonist is not like Hong Xixiang. Many settings have been changed in a mess. It is better to change the name. It insists on taking advantage of the traffic of "Eternal Dragon Slayer" and "Swordsman in the Snow".

Too Moji, weak and powerless, Momojiji, even died once and still like this

It's only eight chapters, it's too early

Show off first, then be questioned by everyone