Be My Mother, Magical Girl!

It turns out that the daughter is looking for her mother, not the protagonist looking for her mother. It's boring.

Alas, I thought the protagonist was Junior Wa, but it turned out not to be the case. It was boring.

Have you ever installed tiles? Just call mom, come with me and I will take you to Shinhwa

Come with me and I will teach you how to be a mother🙂

If you want to ask if you can watch it, I think you can watch it. Although there are some problems, they can be ignored for now Let's talk about the advantages: multiple female protagonists have been confirmed, real combat with real swords and guns, no pulling and pulling. The aspect of a daughter who goes against the will of heaven and wants to find her mother is really novel. The shortcomings are my personal opinion The steps are a bit big. At the beginning, I mentioned the collection of all magical girls. Later, it represents the true appearance of magical girls. There are also a lot of them in the figure room. With so many heroines, it is easy for you to not be able to write well. Explosive; The male protagonist knew that Yan Falcon, a magical girl, received no praise for protecting the citizens and was violently raped online without any reaction The world view was too open, and the first few chapters directly revealed the civilization of the universe. Can you handle it? Also, there is the classic "Maybe I saw it wrong." No man, what age are we in, and you are still doing this disgusting plot? Let me ask you, does this trick have any other effect besides disgusting the readers of the book? You'd better not make a big deal out of this information.

Children, stop destroying the world view of magical girls. Isn't the core of our magical girls love and miracles? (Perhaps)

After laying a handful of tiles, I fell in love with this section. Isn't it wonderful?

I originally thought that the perverted protagonist made a magical girl into a hot weapon, but I didn't expect that the male protagonist is the hot weapon.

Please help me contribute to reading every day! Just read the latest chapter every day! Now the starting point is to arrange traffic package recommendations based on the tracking data. Once the tracking data is not ideal, there will be no exposure! The lack of exposure data really affects the writing mentality. Please everyone! As long as the results are decent, I will definitely update the content with 10,000 words per day after it is put on the shelves to repay you greatly! ! !

A small suggestion to the author: reduce the proportion of daughter plots, either harem plots or daughter plots. It is not easy to combine them. Personally, I am rather vulgar and I only like to watch the protagonist train magical girls.

The father who has achieved the achievement of collecting all magical girls. And the target is the daughter of the magic mother who collects all.

Finally, I was bored and took a look at it. It turned out that the daughter of the retrieval department was looking for her mother. That's great.

I thought the protagonist turned into a mother... Why don't you change the introduction? Daodu has promoted too many sex-change stories where the main character is a male and a magical girl is transformed into a female. It made me stressed.

In fact, most of the online works in the magical girl genre tend to focus on the two directions of change/hundred. The proportion of writing about orthodox harems is very small, and even fewer are famous for their writings. This is a very niche direction. In my personal impression, the most outstanding author in this direction is probably Nan Jing, who has left this subject matter. His writing style and emotional explosion/tension shaping are particularly good. The Off-duty Demon has no emotional line, and the theme direction is also different. You can borrow some settings, but it is easy to cause problems if you continue to imitate it. I suggest the author to read the 24 Best of the Year next door when you have time. I would like to send you a monthly ticket to encourage you, and I hope you can persevere in this subject and write to become famous 🙂

Junior Brother Wa is calling 😰😰

I really like the background and setting of this book. The author also writes very well and innovatively. However, the author's ability to control the logic of the worldview and background needs to be improved, and many settings can only be rationalized by his own brain. A few problems I saw here: 1. Nightingale and her tribe were not clearly explained and it was very vague. The author said that he met Nightingale and her tribe while traveling in the stars, but he also said that magical girls are a specialty of this world (this planet). So what happened to Nightingale and her tribe? The author later added a setting saying that Nightingale and her tribe are part of the world tree crown. Can we say that the setting of this world is similar to Nordic mythology, and the spaces in different parts of the world tree are different? The so-called "Empire" only occupies a part of the atrium, so Nightingale and her tribe have never seen the Empire and the Emperor, and Nightingale's tribe has a special mission to cultivate "Magic Goddess Pilots" through reproduction and inheritance? 2. If the Magic Goddess is actually a "Gundam" and needs a "pilot", then why is the "pilot" who is a "consumable" still showing up in the sycamore forest? Moreover, the goddess of magic will fall asleep because she is defeated or the driver's energy is exhausted, so where will the "pilot" go? Is it a shift system or some other method? Will the pilot who consumes energy retire directly, or will his body and soul be destroyed? The one left in Wutong Forest is actually a "backup", or a soul clone similar to Star Crow? 3. What kind of country is the "Empire" actually? Is Shi Da unified the Zhongtuan, or is it just a big name but actually a larger separatist force? The author said that before the empire, there were other human kingdoms that lasted for thousands of years. The humans in this world were quite strong and could develop independently even if they were scattered like this... 4. Regarding the emotional line, Xueque once said that if it hadn't been for that incident, Star Crow (the president) and the protagonist were a perfect match, and there would be nothing to do with them. According to what is described later, "that thing" was that the Empire killed Star Crow's biological parents, causing her to collapse and become a witch. Then the protagonist starts to become the devil. However, according to the recent situation, the protagonist actually started collecting magical girls when he first traveled through time, that is, he started attacking them when Star Crow was still a magical girl. As one of the parties involved, Xueqiao must be very aware of the identity of the president and the protagonist, so this part is inconsistent. There are many similar situations. Many times I can only make up my own mind, and the author needs to slowly fill in the holes and explain.

So the Internet is very open, and you can even see Mr. Wa writing novels at Qidian. Com

I just watched it and I have a question: Who is my daughter's mother?

I thought Brother Wa came to Qidian to write a book.

I feel like it was well written, and there are no flaws in the general logic of the plot. I quite like the fact that the male protagonist has already reached the top of all the magical girls of his generation at the beginning, but what I hate most now is the kind of relationship that is uncertain for hundreds of chapters. There are many harems and many kinds of tricks, qcqs, and the part where the author writes 🥩 dramas based on scenery is also good. Both the male protagonist and the female protagonist are world-class in strength, and they look very happy without any setbacks. It is also very good to have the daughter take the initiative to find her mother to flashback to how the male protagonist defeated each female protagonist. First, she clearly knows the results of the strategy and then looks back at the process. There is no uncertainty about the outcome. Watching the whole process is very satisfying and full of satisfaction. The lightning protection part is also good, but the dungeon part is a bit depressing. After reading it, I went back and looked for some details to confirm that the magical girls in the dungeon have not been sexually abused. Maybe I read it too quickly the first time. I feel that the lightning protection effect will be much better if I add that only witches from the empire are involved in the dungeon and only witches can cause enough pain to the magical girls to cause their corruption. Finally, I suggest changing the cover. This cover looks a bit old-fashioned, not very attractive, and even a bit discouraging. If it weren't for the strong recommendation from a group of friends, I wouldn't have clicked in to take a look.

It has more than one million words, but this book still does not support emotional reading 😐

The ending of "Spreading Flowers" is at least finished. It's much better than other books.

It lands smoothly and is not outstanding, but it is in line with the level of food and grass. Overall, there is no big problem. It is good to take a look at it in your spare time. Now let's talk about the shortcomings Do you know that you are a ハレム novel? Since it is this kind of novel, why do you want to create a plot where the female character is interesting but the male protagonist does not have this idea? Although most of them have been accepted, a few of them do exist. Since I really don't have this idea, why do I still write this kind of plot?

If I hadn't taken a look at Great God's Light and discovered that yours was gone, I wouldn't even know when you, the author, would publish a new book. . .

396 Is gone? As soon as I clicked in, it said it does not exist.

Add it to your bookshelf first and check it out when you have time.

Although I haven't started reading it yet, this title is abstract enough.