Let You Be a Love Succubus and You Will Thrive in Another World?

I have saved a lot of chapters that I haven't read yet, and I hope to write better and better in the future.

I can't understand why someone in a country that prohibits drugs can write such a great work.

Xinghan

The idea is good, but the content of the speech is too dry and has no provocative power. You can find the speech content of a big Western speaker In addition, Shenwu Liuliu is pretty good in this regard. You can read the book to get a feel for it.

I want to have a sweet and big love with the people all over the world. I have read a book with a similar theme to yours. He wrote it very well. The first world has been conquered, and now the world is being conquered.

Good reviews on the cover👍

I don't understand why you can easily meet beautiful women in a defeated country. Do you really think that people from this period are good people? ? Tavern pretty girl Reporter pretty girl Spy pretty girl Chapter 55 should be a spy

I feel like the author shouldn't appear in a male channel. Do you still want to be favored if a man does great things? Ordinary people can do this, but if those who are rich and powerful agree with your thoughts, you should not focus on your favorable impression of the protagonist, but your recognition of this ideal and your recognition of the protagonist's personal abilities. I'm about to go to Xuanwu Gate to fight with others. You tell me how so-and-so is attractive?

It actually wants to make people happy. I think it's better to write as little as possible about a beautiful girl appearing here and a beautiful girl appearing there. If you want to write, just write. For the protagonist, you can at least give it a try. A beautiful girl who can develop relationships and marry home to maximize political interests can be your wife. In addition, the author's writing is really to my liking. After all, I am a veteran player of P Club and have read many works related to hair washing. ps: By the way, Xinghan! !

Why don't you just copy someone else's speech? The thing you fixed at the beginning is unattractive and dry.

The data is a bit outrageous. You recruit thousands of soldiers in a small town with only tens of thousands of people. How to provide logistics and who will do the farming? It's all just a matter of taking as many as you want without considering the actual situation.

The idea is very good, but the author's writing and speech are average, and others are infected basically by cheating. The protagonist does not have a formed ideological system and action plan. When there are more people, everyone has their own little ideas, and the leader cannot control where the group will go.

The idea is good, but the plot is too poor, and the personal charm of the protagonist is not seen. It is all about the system, and the writing is too relaxed. Of course, it may be because I usually eat too much fine chaff. I compare your book with the battlefield priest next door.

You mean Xinghan? What kind of beautiful girl do you want? Of course, I can sleep with my brothers in the grand ceremony. Beautiful girls are boring.

The cover is probably just a 10,000-character change, so I didn't take a closer look at Vision. Upon closer inspection, I realized it was Han 🙂

The subject matter is creative and the pace is fast, but the writing style is too bland and lacks appeal. The author of 4 million words is still like this, which is really wrong. As soon as the emotions were aroused to a wonderful point, they were quickly and crudely resolved, which was discouraging. The protagonist's ability to regain his subordinates relies solely on the charm of the system and shows no personality charm. In particular, the lines in several speeches were dry and lacked passion and artistic conception. It is recommended that the author use AI to generate and polish new speech lines, which are better than this, or go directly to station B to substitute the "Xier" speech to feel the atmosphere. It relies too much on the charm of the system. Overall evaluation: hay.

The reputation of succubi is ruined by people like you😡Traditional succubus will never spare you

Go and ask Teacher D for help. Even if you use AI to run the speech? If you ask the teacher to copy the speeches of famous people, the quality will be much higher.

The speech was too pale and weak, and looked very fragmented.

It's a bit embarrassing. You don't need to write so much in terms of speeches. You can really borrow money to develop, which is more attractive than your words.

It feels good, give yourself a thumbs up. I found another book that I can read.

I see there are three women on the character card? The most taboo thing about fighting for hegemony is to have too many emotional lines for the heroine. Let Shen Nong talk about the situation.

The book is very exciting in the early stages, and I can finish it in one go. The disadvantage is that it is very small and updates very slowly. I hope the author will release it soon to release more updates! ! !

After being put on the shelves, several chapters still contain the reactions of other towns, the inner monologues of small people, the opinions of passers-by in the city on the policy, and the slow progress of farming and training, which makes people just want to skip it. To be honest, unless you are an author who is rigorous in farming and climbing science and technology like "Release That Witch" Teacher Ermu, and can also write a sense of pleasure, otherwise these empty and meaningless descriptions of expansion, such as speeches and the establishment of a military academy, are not written in detail and rigorously, so it is better to just brush it off and skip the process, no matter how important it is. Build productivity, crush the enemy with iron horses, or use the system to use the advantages of time travelers to develop technology, sharp firearms, strong ships and cannons to directly reduce the enemy's dimension and strike. More than 80 chapters have passed, and I still can't figure out what route to take, and even the rebellion I'm taking now The military line is not consistent with the hair-washing guy. He was legally selected back then. The protagonist must have learned from Mussolini. The article is full of the familiar feeling of a late Ming rebellion novel. After reading a few chapters, I really want to abandon the book if I don't decide on the course of action and advance the plot.

What about operation? What's the plan? Take lives directly

The update is a bit shabby, it took a long time to be like this 😭

Is there a map that can give me a rough idea of ​​the approximate location of each city-state?

The mountains and rivers are dying, and the land of Han Dynasty is dying, and the sun and moon are reopening and the sky of Han Dynasty is prosperous! Three thousand tigers can reach the north bank; dragons can fly to the sky of Hans again! Drive out the bloody claws and restore Hansi; establish an outline and discipline to save the people.

What about updates? You asked for leave yesterday but not today?

The author had a lot of fun with the homophones, so he transliterated them directly 🤓