All the Dharmas That Cover the Sky Become Enlightened

If the author wants to make money, he might as well cut it! From Mars to Beidou feels like there are more things happening than in the original novel. The most important thing is that the protagonist actually dislikes the sacred spring in the ancient forbidden land. Damn it, I am speechless.

Damn, the female channel is turned into a male channel and they have sex 😡

I feel that the protagonist's acting style is not right with Zhetian's style of painting. Zhetian is a tough guy, either bold and generous, or greedy and cruel. As a result, the protagonist spent more than 20 chapters on his so-called classmates. I feel that the protagonist should go to a world where karma and retribution are emphasized in traditional fairy tales, rather than the bloody world of Zhetian where benevolence, justice and morality are not evident.

How can I put it, it's quite gloomy, she was doing whatever she was doing along the way, How can you come up with so many psychological activities to write about, why don't you just write more behavioral action scenes and character interactions, It's so boring

To be honest, I don't like male-to-female fanfics, especially those about Zhe Tian and the ones where the time traveler is female or changes into a female. I have passed all the fanfics. Firstly, this one is very interesting. Secondly, the author's plot design and writing style are attractive. I have seen the latest one so far. I hope the author can work hard. There are not many good books after all.

This novel is still well written, but there are too few updates. There are some opportunities that are suitable for the protagonist. You can take whatever you can. Anyway, there is no rule that whoever takes it belongs to whom. For example, some fairy gold, masterless Emperor Sutra and Emperor Weapon, etc. The protagonist's cultivation is a little bit higher. You can take away the Jiang family's quasi-emperor soldiers who are living outside. You can collect the Nine Secrets, like those immortal medicines and pig's feet, and take them away if you know where they are. In the original work, Lin Jia can find the quasi-emperor by practicing on his own. Now you know the plot, and you know where the many opportunities are. It is not easy for the protagonist to become an emperor. In the early stage, you can use the Saintess of Zi Mansion to receive her subordinates. And the princess of the demon clan. And An Miaoyi. Their talents are good. The protagonist's subordinates are more than enough. When the protagonist reminds them of the first and second-class protagonists, they are all enlightened in a different way. It's okay to help the protagonist with some small things. You can't have the protagonist do everything by yourself. When the protagonist is on the road to the starry sky, he has to recruit a few reliable subordinates in different star regions. Doesn't the protagonist know where many unowned emperors are?

Talking to himself too much, and the plot is very bland, directly copied from Zhetian

I just arrived in Beidou now, and overall it's good. It means that the protagonist has too much inner drama, and the inner drama begins to explain when he makes a choice that is not good enough. In fact, there is no need to explain. Not being good enough does not mean being bad. Knowing the plot, it is normal to be cautious. But the protagonist still has too many calculations and does some unnecessary things, which seems to be a bit of a loss of character. There are many fans of this subject, but there are not many that can be read. This book can still be read, and it's pretty good. I hope to avoid some common problems, which for the author is also equivalent to increasing the difficulty of plot design. For example, the time traveler knew the plot and tried every means to take advantage of Ye Fan. Not only will the plot have a fixed routine, but there will also be flaws in the plot, which will reduce the quality of the work. At the same time, it will also make the protagonist look like he has a lack of character, and he will have a sense of deja vu as he is sneaking around and trying to trick his teammates. The main character's plug-in in this book is already very strong. Although it is not as fast as the fast plug-in, it is easy to improve faster than Ye Fan. With this kind of plug-in, there is no need to take advantage of Ye Fan's opportunity. Because the heavenly materials and earthly treasures in this world are basically products of the essence of heaven and earth, as long as the cultivation route is okay, most of the heavenly materials and earthly treasures are of little use to the protagonist. A little source is enough to get through the early accumulation stage. Those scriptures and secrets can be learned through plug-ins as long as they watch Ye Fan's battle once in a while. It can be said that Ye Fan's opportunity can only be the icing on the cake, or it can be easily obtained, and the protagonist does not need to steal Ye Fan's opportunity like a dog. Going out of your own plot will definitely look better than following the route that Ye Fan took. But this places high demands on the author, and I don't know if the author can do it well. You can try it and see the feedback before deciding whether to continue taking this route. The reason why I mention this is because most of the fan works in this timeline revolve around Ye Fan's opportunities to promote the plot. They either revolve around Ye Fan or intercept Ye Fan's opportunities. It seems that the most is watchable. There are many fans who fail to handle this process well. There are loopholes or conflicts in the plot, and the protagonist is described in such a bad way that I can't stand it. Although the protagonist is not good enough, I still hope that the protagonist can be good. Because the plot of the original work is mainly good, unless the fan is an enemy of the protagonist, it is better to be kinder to fit the original plot. Moreover, kindness can also lead to side plots, which is also a means of enriching content. Ye Fan often uses this trick. The main plot basically revolves around this routine. Naturally, fan works can also imitate it.

Is this a female video author who switched to male videos?

Why not invest in female videos?

To write this kind of thing, I have to use my imagination to give Ye Fan a chance to have children. The title of the book is called "I am a wet nurse in Zhetian".

Generally speaking the protagonist always pays attention to cause and effect. It's not that he can't talk about these things, but the protagonist is too particular.

Talk to yourself the most. I talk a lot in my heart and feel it is unnecessary.

Dear book lovers, please come and check in if you have anything to do, and help this book get out of the circle.

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20250706113250658","UserId":475945598} The author ignores the malicious comments of some people in the comment area. This does not prove that your book has become popular. Come on. Can you also pay close attention to the appearance of the protagonist (the most beautiful in the book)? Can you not be so cold and reply to the readers?

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20250706113250658","UserId":475945598} Come on, the author is very good-looking. Can you make the protagonist the most beautiful woman in the book, with a gorgeous crown that covers the sky? Please reply.

Several fandoms have recently run out of money. Have you guys discussed this?

It feels outrageous to see how easy it is to get an imperial weapon.

This book is okay, you can read it.

As the title suggests, the protagonist of this book is female and single.

Is the author using a sewing machine? It's been so long, not a single letter

This book is very good, why is it about eunuchs?

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