I Am Struggling to Survive in the Divine Eagle

1. Huang Rong. It is a flaw that the author randomly wrote "Mrs. Guo". 2. "Guo Mansion". Similar to 1, in the Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing Dynasties, only officials who reached a certain level could be called "Madam" and "Fu". Two flaws. Correction: Huang Rong should be called Lady Guo or Gang Leader Huang, and "Guo Mansion" should be changed to Guo Zhai, Guo Ge, etc.

Yang Guo's 16th year is a good time-travel point. I've always wanted to read the story that happened in the middle. But I just read two chapters, where I had sex with Guo Fu after marriage, and she was still drugged. If you can pass this level, keep reading. I gave up! What I want to see is the story of Guo Xiang and even Zhang Sanfeng 16 years later!

After Xiao Longnu jumped off the cliff, Yang Guo wandered around the world. It can be said that the name of the Condor Heroes was gained during these 16 years. It was also because of these 16 years that he was able to make many friends and extend kindness. Only then was he able to accomplish so many great things on Guo Xiang's birthday. If he lives in seclusion all day long, then what's the use of his high martial arts skills when no one knows him.

The author likes to write about Cao thieves so much, which is quite perverted, and he has dissuaded a lot of readers.

I was convinced, and after reading it for half an hour, it turned out to be a system panel article. Let's talk about the introduction, so that people who like to read it can be attracted at once, right?

When I saw Chapter 14, I took out a pen and paper to write a poem on the battlefield, I couldn't hold it in anymore and died of poison 😅

The system panel is hacked and you are still struggling to survive? Selling dog meat on sheep's heads😅

I don't understand what the author wants to express. On the one hand, Dugu Jiujian doesn't care. On the other hand, he despises his lack of combat power. On the other hand, he wants to express his deep feelings and his hair turns gray overnight. On the other hand, Yu'er is going to die. It's rubbish.

Recruit more beauties and ask for more beautiful wives. Drive out the Tartars and rule the world.

The writing is okay, but it's a bit awkward to write about home and country when it's too exciting.

After reading two and a half chapters, I ended up with Guo Fu taking a shower. To be honest, the perspective was not bad, and it made people want to keep reading. However, the fighting scenes are very simple, and the three chapters are not enough to stir up the emotions of the two women. After checking, most of the supporting characters are female, I guess it is a pick-up stud story, so I gave up.

Goba meal replacement literature😥

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it any longer. I had just passed through the scholar and had sex with the married woman Guo Fu. Then in the introduction, he regained the mountains and rivers, and Lizi focused on martial arts. When the city of Xiangyang was destroyed, it was clearly stated that Guo Jing, Huang Rong, and Guo Polu died for their country. Then, according to the character and final description of Yelu Qi in the newly revised edition, Guo Fu and Yelu Qi most likely also died for their country. Yelu Qi and a Khitan died for Xiangyang. How dare you come up and put a hat on him? I don't understand why I came up to give Guo Fulai a shot. There are so many women in the Condor, so it has to be her? What, are you going to kill Yeluqi later?

Martial arts novels with systems are the most boring

At this point, is Gongsun Lv'e already dead? What a pity...

When I saw the plot of Jiuyang, I couldn't stand it anymore🤣

Brother, I suggest that we should focus on the storyline and the creation of characters, and do side effects. Being a Cao thief can only attract people to watch the fun for a while, but it will not last long. It is better to go directly to the Swordsman than to go straight to the Swordsman. The stitching is not bad, and there is a plot.

It's time to change your mind. Don't think about taking on thousands of troops alone. The time traveler's IQ and foresight have not been fully demonstrated. Apart from some magical secrets, do you want to learn the cross sword female sword Ah Qing to pick 3,000 armors with one sword?

😍 Go to the bottom of the Heartless Valley and play with Xiao Longnu for ten years.

It's a bit nonsense. When Yitian Zhang Sanfeng was 100 years old, he said that Taoist Baishu had been dead for about 30 years, which means that Zhang Sanfeng killed Taoist Baishu at the age of 70. Taoist Baishu was not necessarily the same age as Zhang Sanfeng. Baishu appeared in your time period, which means he had to live for more than 150 years.

Huang Rong was written as too weak. In the original work, Huang Rong's skills were not fully recovered after childbirth, so she completely suppressed her and defeated Li Mochou. From the description in the original work, it seems that Li Mochou was a bit more powerful than the three heroes Xiao Xiangzi, Yin Ke and Meng Gu.

I recently read book reviews and found that many book friends commented that the chapter on drunken sex was unreasonable. As a time traveler, a modern person who has dated seven or eight girlfriends. The protagonist is not an innocent little virgin. It is his nature to take advantage of any advantage. The same is true for He Lianyu. The gray hair overnight is caused by various reasons, such as being sad and taking too much snake gall. Most of the protagonist's heartache comes from He Lianyu's last smile, which becomes the protagonist's unhappiness.

The first is to avoid the "homogenization" of the character Chen Feng. Without a unique martial arts, it is difficult to establish this character. Second, Chen Feng's combat power will always be the benchmark of Yang Guo. A person with the same combat power as Yang Guo will be obedient to the protagonist. Third, Lu Chenzhou's "Destined Divine Weapon" is about to appear, and everyone will wait and see. Although this book's Golden Finger has no sense of existence, it will have the effect of integrating the martial arts of "Same Sect, Same Origin" in the later period, which is like super understanding. Fourth, the Nine Yang Divine Art, there will be a sixth volume and a seventh volume... With these, is the Dugu Nine Swords still important?

The fact that Xiao Longnu is at the bottom of his heartlessness can be revealed to Yang Guo earlier, and the Condor Heroes can live together and fly together. This can be regarded as making up for the regret, and Cheng Ying can be given up early, so that the protagonist has a chance.

Xiao Longnu was poisoned, and the protagonist went to use Jiuyang to rescue her. This can also explain why Xiao Longnu detoxified inexplicably 😄

I hope you can teach me a lot