Wasteland Ying Ying Beast

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Sorry, I want to make a guest appearance. Why does the system show that more than 200 readers came to read your first doomsday novel? I want to see it too, because I myself also failed to sign a contract. I want to see what attracts them to come?

1. Author, your description of the wasteland environment setting at the beginning and the writing style are very attractive to me (the advantages are attractive, I am very interested in continuing to pursue it) 2. You found that the symbiote is acceptable to Goldfinger, no problem. But you turned the subsequent plot into a series of crises encountered by the symbiote, which felt a bit too deliberate and illogical. (The shortcomings made me unhappy and made me want to give up the book) 3. And the moments you wrote about the Symbiote Crisis were, to be honest, not interesting, and the feeling of escaping from death was too deliberate. It's also a bit confusing. How come the desperate situation, the guards forced the mole hole and blocked it, so you just escaped? How about playing? The writing is incomprehensible (disadvantage, the plot is really just for the sake of crisis and conflict?) (This is already a point of speechlessness and complaint, and I seriously want to abandon the book because it is no longer attractive.) 4. Suggestions. It is recommended that the main character be rewritten starting from the first chapter. 1. Keep the setting of the wasteland and rust belt. From the beginning, you will be bullied and starved to death. (This is very attractive to me) 2. You can write more stories about survival and Brother Scar. For example, how to kill Brother Scar and fill your own stomach. Even the story of becoming the eldest brother (the setting description is very attractive) 3. Don't write the plot as a conflict. You are conflicting for conflict's sake. You just get the symbiote, go down the cave, and immediately encounter monsters, followed by one crisis after another. This is too deliberate, not that it cannot be written. The key point is that when you write about these crises, it feels very deliberate and childish. These so-called crises, to me as a reader, seem to be a kind of, I don't think the author can decide for himself that this is a crisis. It's quite interesting to write like this. So, you don't handle the writing of continuous crisis conflicts very well. What attracts you is not writing about continuous crises and conflicts. Instead, I write about survival in the wasteland, and then slowly develop a few crises. This is what makes your writing so attractive. 4. One last thing to add. About the author's question about the length of each paragraph in your book. Actually, I can accept this. As long as the content of the article is attractive, the length of each paragraph may not necessarily be your style. PS: Okay, that's it. I have said so much, and I think you can also tell that I really like your wasteland setting at the beginning, the plot that I will send immediately when I am hungry, and the writing style. So, I hope the author can really adopt my suggestion as a reader and change the article. I believe you will be popular if you change it. No matter what else, after you change it, I will definitely support reading.

I think the results are good, but I have 65 follow-up readings. Many signed books don't have this score. Why haven't I signed the contract yet? Is it because the author didn't sign? Or the editor won't sign it? 🙂