Comprehensive Martial Arts Begins with Dacheng Iron Sand Palm

If I remember correctly, Ma Dayuan, the deputy leader of the Beggar Clan, was killed by Bai Shijing of the Beggar Clan, right? Afterwards, it was faked that the Murong family was in trouble, and then Xingzilin was involved...

There is something wrong with your age. Huang Rong's debut means that Guo Jing has also made his debut, so the Seven Monsters of Jiangnan have been living in the grassland for more than ten years. Han Xiaoying has long been old, and Zhang Asheng has died long ago. The martial arts timeline does not matter, but the timeline in the same book should not have such low-level errors. It's okay to put works from different timelines together, but it shouldn't be confusing if you only write about the characters in Legend of the Condor Heroes. When Han Xiaoying came out of the desert, it was clearly stated in the book that her youth was gone and her face was covered with frost, and because Zhang Asheng died to save her, she vowed not to marry for the rest of her life. I don't understand why you have to choose Han Xiaoying when you choose the heroine? If you write like this, it will be too messy. Zongwu is already messy. If you write like this and make it more messy, you are just doing it for your own pleasure without caring about the lives of readers!

Today's martial arts novels are all accepted by women. No woman will die. You have to choose everything you buy. Women don't choose. Is it okay if it's a woman? I'm speechless.

Is anyone watching? 😭

What does Shennong think 🙂

It's not that it's not well written, the problem is that the stitching is too messy, it's a bit dramatic, and it's hard to put it in.

Didn't you also buy the so-called 298 online course and use the iceberg method and fog method to write the introduction? Haha

There are so many worlds, how big is your map? Still on that mini map? ?

The one I read better in the foreign persimmon mixed martial arts next door is the Lezi book. The fusion method is that the book is almost the same as the continent, and then it is far apart. Otherwise, if you pile them all into one, it will be difficult to explain in many places.

A eunuch? Or no updates for National Day?

Then no one would care about his Khitan identity, but it would be a good talk, hahaha

The writing is not strong enough and the setting is too messy. The protagonist feels frivolous and the storyline is also frivolous.

Can I choose the fourth one? Send me back

This kind of brainless woman will be killed directly.

The best thing I have written about mixed martial arts so far is Zongwu: Dreaming of becoming the mastermind behind the scenes. I wrote about Tokyo in Zhongshen Village, Tokyo.