Data Daojun

It died in the first chapter, wasting such a good title. In the beginning, it is said that his adoptive father saved money for him to buy good spiritual objects to build a foundation. Within less than 100 words, his adoptive father died. Then the author forgot all the money he saved and turned to selling family property to barely pay for his adoptive father's funeral.

The opening three golden chapters attract the reader, explain the background of the characters, cheats, and lead out the hidden enemies, and start the tense escape directly. The following is from a general perspective, involving macro spoilers. Time, place, and characters are the three elements of the novel, and contradiction is the driving force for the development of the plot. The author handles the contradiction very well. In the opening stage, in order to avoid hidden enemies, you enter the workshop and enter the character learning and development stage, which plays the role of an "academy stream". The main line of this stage is development and finding hidden enemies. In the second stage, Marxism said that contradictions will not disappear, but will only transform from one contradiction to another. After the problem of the mastermind behind the scenes was solved, the next conflict turned into the conflict between one's own freedom and the interests of the workshop owner. In fact, I thought this stage would be as long as the opening stage, but the author ended it quickly, only retaining the hidden clue that the workshop owner had problems. He may not be good at business processing, so he used his strengths and avoided weaknesses. The third stage is to enlist in the army. The reasonable way to end the commercial struggle in the workshop is to enlist in the army. This is handled well, and it is difficult for businessmen and important figures in the military not to accept it. The world view was opened up through the power of the military, but I felt that the main contradiction here could not be found, and there was no sense of urgency to push the plot forward. It entered a period of calm. This may be the reason why the author did not update it. He could not find a good contradiction to drive a lot of description, but there were secondary contradictions, the contradiction between the captain's promotion route and his own strength; the contradiction between the cult and the protagonist's own interests. (The following discussion about the outline and foreshadowing involves spoilers) Of course, the author's outline and general direction should be there. In the previous article, "Yue Jun" opened his eyes, causing poisonous gas to be mixed in the spiritual energy, which caused problems in cultivating immortals in this world, and required the help of parasites. From the level of cultivating immortals, it is usually to practice Qi first and then build the foundation. In the book, "building the foundation" first and then "training Qi" is also related to this parasite. The parasite is used to build the foundation first. If there is a conspiracy theory later, it is that there is a Taoist master who broke off the path, used parasites to build the foundation, and then cultivated to the point where he could not become an immortal. He was just a resource from the upper world. And the Taoist master is probably related to "Yue Jun", either "Yue Jun", or killing "Yue Jun" to induce this poison. In short, there should be no problem with the main plot outline. The chapter outline is probably not detailed. It is currently judged as a "two-update beast", and may become a "one-update beast" during the period of time.

How can you become One Punch Man without any skills?

The author's writing skills are good and the writing is sophisticated, but the writing is too frustrating. The protagonist should have run away early, changing maps to find things to upgrade like the Lord of Mysteries, while using his golden finger physique to manipulate various things behind the scenes. This feels better. It's already hundreds of thousands of words, but it's still wandering around the city. The upgrade article is almost like a farming article, and the world view has not been expanded. Every day, after the protagonist finally gets something, he gives it away in frustration. He doesn't dare to take the good stuff, for fear that the boss will kill him, and some city lord or something will beat the protagonist, and the protagonist has to be docile and obedient like a dog. I really don't understand what the purpose of letting the protagonist sit with a head and a living father sitting around every day.

Systematic Cultivation: I work as a slave in a shop

I finally understand why the author has good writing skills. The exemption was limited a while ago, and the results are not very good. He is always stuck in the cool writing, with hundreds of thousands of words, and he is always a grandson in the same city. I don't know what the author was thinking, but the breaking point was just when the protagonist wanted to run away, but somehow he came back. I thought he wanted to suppress his desire first, but it turned out that he kept suppressing it. To put it bluntly, the protagonist is almost like the mysterious Goldfinger. He stays with him in that city every day, and is suppressed and suppressed.

There are obviously data and results, but if you still put the card level at this low level, it is hard water.

You can change the introduction, which feels a bit like trying to sell someone else's meat. The behind-the-scenes flow of the main group chat is directly written, and data lags only appear in the first two chapters. It is more about optimizing a panel for spiritual objects, and at most adding an unobvious data-based blood lock function. I want to do crowdfunding to cultivate immortality, but I lack control over the scattered spiritual objects. I just borrow a store to scatter them. It is a bit new to create a parasitic monster, but it seems to be of no use at the moment. I have nothing unique so I just pretend to be a boss. If people ask more and find out how the spiritual objects appear in the market, then you won't be bombarded. I haven't seen much of the behind-the-scenes footage, so I'm not sure if it's all written this way. Anyway, I think it's a bit awkward for the protagonist to pretend to be out of character, and the secondary hosts who are scattered are not far apart in terms of social relations, and there is an uneasy feeling of bragging being exposed at any time.

It's over 500,000 words, and it's still wandering around the city, and it's still like being a grandson every day.

I read about a hundred novels about Gao Wu with names other than those in the data. There is neither a character panel nor an equipment panel. Fake data flow

A very skilled author, very skilled in writing and plotting.

This plug-in is like a piece of shit. It's not as good as the natives. It has an inexplicable plot.

It doesn't feel like writing a behind-the-scenes article at all. What you do behind the scenes to build a trading platform is better than what you do in Luo Liba.

It's all water, and the water is laced with poison. It's obviously a way to gather people to cultivate immortality. If you insist on being a slave all the time, you're still a slave of a local landlord at the level of a township landlord. It's not easy to upgrade. The first level of foundation building is perfect, and the second level is perfect. Foundation building is still the first level, and the second is Qi training. Just like this, you still encounter bottlenecks.

An addictive article about cows and horses, nothing exciting at all

The digitization is not reflected at all. After reading almost 20 or so novels, I feel that it is a very ordinary novel of this kind. I am not ready to continue reading.

It's on the shelves, the plot is not promoted, the word count is low every day, the grades are so bad, don't you think about what the problem is? I read the titles of the last 4 chapters and I know they are too plot-y. If you don't recommend the plot, just see if anyone will read it.

The logic is quite good. It is quite interesting to combine modern data knowledge with fantasy and make it logically self-consistent! After reading the latest chapter, the author didn't write any bad points, and the refreshing points were just right! Summary: This novel is quite interesting! Interesting is the most important core of a novel!

I don't understand how many interesting highlight settings in the early stage were not expanded to link up the world view, but instead some so-called masterminds were used to show off. After it was released, the plot fell into a cliché and it felt very rushed. Where are your leveled spiritual objects? What about your chat group? You pretend to be more awesome each time, but the more you pretend, the more vain you are. What is the difference between you and those Di Hua Wen? When I hear the name of the supporting characters, I think, oh, so awesome, so powerful. Everyone will kneel down. Such a powerful god has hundreds of things. Your supporting characters are like retarded people who have never seen the world. There are so-called high-level officials in the city. They are shocked. The picture you open now should only be a corner. You just try to show off after the gods. What are you going to write?

The content is serious and interesting. But the title of the book is a bit informal and doesn't fit in well. I have seen this title several times, but I thought it was some nonsense, and I was too lazy to click on it. I was bored and read it today, and unexpectedly found that the writing was pretty good.

The setting is okay, the plot is a mess, and the writing is boring

After reading Chapter 40, the protagonist is like a high-level cow horse. His salary is not enough, he can't resign seriously, he can only run away with a bucket, and he is worried about hurting others and who he will hurt. It's very awkward. They are all part-time workers. More than a hundred people were recruited, and only thirty or forty people came back. What kind of moral sense do you need!

A Different Cultivation of Immortals. I read the thirty-plus chapters in one go without any poisonous points. The writing style is very experienced. It doesn't look like a new author. It should be the trumpet of some big boss. I like it very much.

This is a pity. I originally planned to raise it, but who knew that it would be raised to death by me?

It's very smooth and comfortable. It's not that the writing is very good, but the plot is smooth and slippery.

The writing is quite to my liking, and the author's writing style is a good combination of ancient style and vernacular, so the reading is detailed but not sluggish, and there are no poisonous points that are beyond the tolerance range. Unlike some books that don't have the same level of detail and need to be described in detail, I feel like it's a waste of time and money after reading it.

There is no immediate drop in level after charging. It's okay and watchable, but too little.

What a pity this book is. I haven't seen such an interesting book for a long time. It reminded me of the era when a hundred flowers bloomed and all kinds of new ideas came into being. It's hard to find now. This book is much better than other Sanjiang books.

I can't stand it any longer. The golden finger of your profile is suitable for the path of the behind-the-scenes mastermind flow. But as a result, you kept writing and writing, but you chose the path of the martial arts flow. You want to learn the Tao of Weird Immortals, but you can't learn it. You can't write about distortions and the like, and the increase in abilities is not clear. You still have low combat power. So far, you only have golden elixirs and Qi refining to build the foundation. Why, you want to learn the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, but only those realms are available? The problem is that you don't write group portraits.

The title is not very eye-catching, It is worth mentioning that the content is very well written (*¯¯*) Even an old bookworm like me who has read 10,000 books was attracted Keep up the good work, duck