There's Something Wrong with This Witch's Proficiency

The latest plot is written in a petty style by the author. Being ridiculed by those dark wizard apprentices, he didn't even dare to say anything, and he only dared to secretly retaliate behind his back. It's okay to take revenge secretly, but the way to retaliate is to pour wine on them? At first, the cat looked so menacing that it thought it was going to kill the group of dark wizard apprentices, but in the end it just secretly broke the wine glass. The heroine expressed that she wanted to take revenge, but in the end, using the envelope to curse her only caused the wine to spread all over her body. This is a dangerous wizarding world. If you don't know, you might think it's just children playing around. I don't expect the heroine to kill those dark wizard apprentices, but at least give them a profound lesson, right? Letting them get hurt is considered the heroine's revenge, but this is the result? In reality, this is equivalent to someone pointing their noses at you and scolding you in front of you, but you don't dare to say a word, and you only dare to do small tricks behind your back. However, when you do small tricks behind your back, you don't dare to give him a hard blow, and you only dare to secretly pour a glass of water on his clothes. I like this book very much, and I hope the author can make this book better and better, so that I will have the motivation to pursue it. But if the author writes this kind of plot in the future, then I can only say that this book is not suitable for me.

The writing is too slow, the overall progress is slow, and the details are not detailed properly. A task can be written in more than ten chapters at the beginning, and it is expected to take hundreds of chapters to complete. I really don't know why I keep dragging it there. It's smelly and long, and it's uncomfortable to watch.

I've only watched a little bit, and although the plot was fairly smooth in the early stages, the awkward plot, such as heavy and extreme wording, chewing on settings and so on, is already very obvious, and it's obviously an AI novel. Moreover, the author's choice of words and sentences hardly seems to have been polished. If there are bugs in the settings, he will not modify them, which shows no sincerity.

The protagonist is obviously not suitable for the prophecy genre. He is obviously a genre that uses Lao Yin Bi's behind-the-scenes manipulation to kill with one hit. As a result, the author forced the author to write a story that feels like he is going to be tough and escaping from death at every turn. The most hateful thing is that the perception skill has no effect at all. Even if you sense it in advance, you can only fight head-on, without any idea of ​​ambushing others. The so-called hidden strength is only used to deceive teammates. Every time he faces the enemy, he tries his best to escape from death, hiding his loneliness.

Inexplicably, in order not to expose himself when the protagonist went to a new dimension, he exposed the fugitive, leading to his capture. This is to offend someone to death. As a result, for the sake of his own face, he curses the officer who caught the fugitive, which indirectly caused the fugitive to escape. It's very baffling. I've just arrived, I don't know anything, I don't understand what the extraordinary power of this plane is, so I dare to attack people directly. It's because the officer has a bad attitude and makes the protagonist feel unhappy. Such an inexplicable reason. . At this time, if you identify someone in front of a fugitive and offend him, shouldn't you just kill him? If you indirectly help him escape, won't he come back to you for revenge later?

From Chapter 69 to Chapter 73, I hardly see the protagonist having any role. After two battles, it is clear that the protagonist is responsible for sensing early warning in the team, and has sensed all the information in advance, but he does not report it, and without early warning, someone makes a sneak attack first. Then based on the reaction of his teammates, one of them is almost killed by someone, and it is not saved by the protagonist. Moreover, the protagonist has no attack ability now, and he cannot give his teammates a guarantee. The author said that the protagonist needs to hide his clumsiness. Let's not talk about whether it is meaningful to hide his perceptual ability. Hiding clumsiness is not the way to hide it. You can at least give early warning, at least report something, and at least prepare your teammates.

Why does a male channel pretend to be a female protagonist again? ? ?

If you are a eunuch, I will really hand you the blade I want to contact the people on the dark web and kill them.

More than once, the protagonist teamed up with others and was in danger, and his teammates were beaten. The protagonist kept waiting and watching with the caption "Watch the critical moment to take action." This waiting and watching teammates was the disadvantage of Chapter 4 or 5. In the end, Mysterious made a move and won the battle. His teammate Yunliwu said, "Oh, this prophecy teammate is so awesome." I don't know how powerful he is. I will continue to get beaten next time I'm in danger. It's really miserable to be the protagonist's teammate.

The settings at the front are okay, but basic common sense is disappointing. 1 The protagonist's family is predicted to be wiped out by the wizard family. Why don't other wizard organizations destroy the protagonist if they are so awesome? After all, the protagonist revealed his identity openly and even went out. And the seed resources left by the family can be developed before the wizards. After all, the protagonist is the only prophecy wizard family in the southern region. Why do first-level apprentices not have enough resources? If they don't have enough resources to understand, their knowledge is like being illiterate. This is the story of Family Wizard 2. In the article, the protagonist's roommate chats up the protagonist abnormally. The protagonist thinks there is something wrong, but it turns out that there is no problem when he peeks. Moreover, it is also written in the end that they need the protagonist's potion. What is the meaning of writing this text? It seems to be a dirty villain with a pig's foot, so why not go directly to the dark wizard at the beginning. 3 The protagonist went on an adventure with his teammates. Before going there, he hid the information about the big problems in this mission. I thought he was going to trick his teammates to death. The problem was that the protagonist did not have escape spells. Then the forest warning was 10 meters. How close was Bolt? In less than a second, the car had already flown away when it saw the person, and the protagonist shouted it out, that is, the attack was already there as soon as he started speaking. A normal person could feel this distance even in the dense forest, not to mention that the protagonist was sitting in a carriage and walking on the road. Generally, the standard railway track for carriages is wider than the road. I would like to know how wide it is and the distance between the two railway tracks and the train platform. In addition, the distance for road construction and maintenance is wider. Generally, main roads in non-mountainous areas must have at least enough margin for two horses to ride side by side. The carriage the protagonist rides is from the Wizarding Academy to the city. Look, I need you to predict the wizard, the most basic work can't be done well 4 The enemy carriage arrived and started to talk. The road they took from the academy to the city was a road that even ordinary people could see for more than ten or twenty meters. Plus the sound of the carriage was no louder than that of an ordinary car. Living in this world, I am just an ordinary person. I am 40 meters away from the road now. I can clearly hear the car passing by. Waiting for the opponent to stop before starting the battle and still being beaten like that. Is it useful for you to predict the wizard? When the enemy comes, the type, general style, appearance and decoration are not aware of the investigation. The protagonist in the article does not have the awareness to hear the sound of the enemy's carriage and starts the investigation. The divination perception makes the whole team almost hit GG. Then what are your perception witchcraft and divination witchcraft for? The world view of this book is still very good, and the writing style is okay. As for why the protagonist remains so holy. I don't blame the protagonist, after all, author, have you ever been a human being? Just write it like this, take it for granted!

I have read about chapter 40 and will tell you about my poisonous points. Behavioral Logic: The protagonist is in the prophecy faction and has weak combat power in the early stage. The golden finger is to gain learning points and proficiency through learning. It is estimated that it also comes with a permanent certificate common in the system and can be upgraded without comprehensive learning. Then the protagonist should work hard to learn some skills instead of relying on the only missile skill to put himself in danger (Shadow Cat Incident). If he has to participate in the battle, he must arrange the plot instead of actively participating. Interpersonal Relationships According to the description of the protagonist, wizards are not good people, not to mention that the classmates and teachers they meet do not show this. Even if they are bad people, they still need to interact and cooperate. Not establishing contact rejects potential malice and also rejects potential goodwill (visits from residential students). In the early stage of prophecy, the direct combat power is low, and cooperation is more needed. As for the fear of being betrayed, isn't the protagonist from the prophecy school? Why didn't he find his own reason for not discovering the betrayal in advance? And since the delusion of being persecuted is so serious, why didn't you think about whether there might be pitfalls when you took advantage of the organization and the mentor? (Leaf of Wisdom, Mentor Reward) In addition, the handling of shadow cats is not good. To raise pets, you have to use carrots and sticks instead of direct oppression, otherwise they are worse than undead. In general, the protagonist does not show the ability to anticipate the enemy and strategize as expected from the prophecy faction. Instead, he has the stereotype of the undead faction as being indifferent to living people, not good at interpersonal relationships, and reckless as a warrior.

The protagonist's profession is prophecy, and the plug-in is to obtain knowledge points and then increase skill proficiency by adding points. And the article mentioned that the plug-in can obtain knowledge points no matter what knowledge the protagonist acquires. This is obviously to encourage the protagonist to learn more skills to gain knowledge points and enhance the proficiency of his existing skills, right? I have read 300,000 words so far. This knowledge point has appeared about 10 points in total. Each time, the proficiency is increased by 20-40. The rest is really just the protagonist's own talent and hard work and has nothing to do with plug-ins. The reason why there are so few is not that the protagonist doesn't pay attention, but that the protagonist sneaks into the battlefield from left to right. As a profession with no early attack power and weak prophecy ability in the later stage, the protagonist has no chance to use plug-ins in the early stage and has been running around. Does the author mean that he wants the protagonist to grow her prophecy ability through combat like those combat professions? Seriously? The protagonist is now almost using Curse + Perception in order to survive. As for the prophecy? The prediction is weak in the early stage so it is not important. Originally, when the protagonist sneaked into the house and the adults said nothing, it would be fine. I thought the protagonist would seize the opportunity to gain knowledge points. However, it turned out that there was an upgrade channel for the plug-in, and he started to make trouble again by upgrading the plug-in. No sister, do you usually use this plug-in? If you don't even use the basic functions, don't worry about your upgraded unknown functions. Now it's very dangerous to fight as a soldier. Wouldn't it be nice to find a library to learn something casually and gain knowledge?

I made hundreds of dollars selling soup and medicine, but for five dollars I went into a dangerous forest to collect medicine? And even when he was reminded of the danger, he only knew one attack trick. 6 Ah, I have to say If the reader doesn't care about the danger, can the protagonist not care about the danger? It's so haha

Fairy Tales, for me, is an absolute fairy tale. The protagonist who bears the blood feud of his family, the sense of fantasy in the mysterious world, and the secret of Golden Finger are so exciting to me that I will save all my monthly tickets for this book in the future. It's just too little 🚬

The biggest advantage of female protagonists is that they don't have crotch problems

Hey! How can you return this article to me when it's actually a heroine? 😳

Why haven't you updated it yet? We need food urgently.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but I don't know if it's the pig's feet or the author. It's a common problem among women, being indecisive, thinking too much, and not being able to find the key to the problem. The direction of solving the problem is quite feminine.

It's good to watch, I love watching it, and I voted for you five times a month. Although it's not much, I didn't vote for it either. 😜

I thought the main film was about to start, but it cut off after a few chapters and ran away...😅

I like this kind of prophecy heroine who has a sneaky dog ​​and a strong sense of secrets. The author must write down

Why is the update interval so long now?

Hey, I hope you don't give up 😟

It's been five days. Is the author back?

It's a pity, it's a pity, it's a very good book. I've been waiting for a month, but it still hasn't come back. It seems like it's really unfinished.

Are the voice and text in the new world the same as those in the Wizarding World? What about the accents?

Halfway through Yang Wenyang, I discovered that the author is a eunuch 😭 Do you have any similar recommendations?

Is it a transformation story or was the heroine also a woman in her previous life?

Run, author, but don't come back again. Goodbye, friend.

This one can die, it's time to look good