Douluo Dalu: Rebirth of Huo Yuhao and Return to Peerless World

Don't write about Huo Yuhao being reborn. This character has nothing to do with Huo Yuhao. Just write about a time traveler. To be honest, even if Huo Yuhao hated Tang San, he would never hate the Tang Clan and Shrek, let alone go to the Sun Moon Empire like this.

Are you so insistent on writing about Huo Yuhao being added to Shrek? You could just pull a jar and get a prop that hides the strong man's sight. What you wrote before is okay, but you have to force the connection, and the development method of the soul guide is clearly given.

Don't talk about developing based on the original plot. This is already poisonous. You can see which fan fiction would write like this. If you want to leave, Shrek will be forced to keep him for another year. I'm sorry, it's too poisonous. Farewell.

A Snow Emperor with memories would not be so cold to Yu Hao.

I'm here too. Are the Douluo fanfics about Huo Yuhao so popular now?

It doesn't feel like Destiny's Child anymore, and it's not very enjoyable to watch 😐

Regarding the following attachment form of the Ice Emperor's martial spirit and soul bone, fellow Taoists can refer to the following picture, 😁😁😁 In the normal state, it has legs, and in the true form of the martial spirit, it looks like this. As for Tianmeng's appearance after awakening, it can be understood as elements of mega Rayquaza plus ice moth. If there is any infringement, please contact me and I will apologize and delete it immediately, 🙏🙏🙏

The manager of the can store is a time traveler, right?

Is there a female protagonist? The protagonist is always working as a nanny, so there's nothing interesting about it.

There are quite a few problems to be honest. First of all, there is the issue of character. Huo Yuhao would never hate Shrek or even hate Wang Dong, and Tang San would not blatantly make any oracles. The only things Huo Yuhao really loved were autumn and winter. To him, Tang Wutong was just Wang Dong's phantom. If he were reborn, even if he took Wang Dong to perform a role of fatherly love and daughterly filial piety, he would not be able to act like a ruthless knight. Then there is the setting issue. Is there any difference between running Shrek and running Sun and Moon? Shrek is indeed bad, but compared to Sun and Moon, it pales into insignificance. After all, Shrek is attacking evil soul masters, instead of colluding with evil soul masters like Sun and Moon.

While talking about going against my will, I turned my head and started barking. I like this feeling of being a dog.

For the ice dragon martial spirit, this plot is very interesting, and the soul bones are so handsome. The eight spider spears, ice jade scorpion tail bone, dark gold hand bones, plus the three attributes of fate, dark ice spirit, head soul bones, are so rich and cool. I am Shennong, non-poisonous brothers. It is worth recommending. If you are not a virgin and don't lick dogs, you don't have your own ideas with the plot author 💡 Support it. Come on I gave you this, with soul bones attached to the eyes

The front and middle are okay, but the latter is inflationary. In the end, the world view becomes an Emperor-type novel, and the last dozen or so chapters are boring.

There are so many flaws, I don't know how to complain

I just want to say that the author's original intention of writing this book was probably to make up for most of the regrets in Peerless Tang Sect. Right? The main purpose of this book is to make up for regrets.