
One Piece: Space Is King
海贼:空间为王
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 388k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 11mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I don't know why, but capable authors write the fruits of garbage. A weak author can produce great results. Fruit development is like shit, I don't know how to recommend this kind of book, relying on C woman? If you want to see C Woman, you can watch it. If you want to see the various developments of the space fruit, there is no need to pursue it. It doesn't even have the minimum mobility in space, and there is no one who can't hurt Garp with an extremely powerful fruit that kills at first sight.
The setting at the beginning was very good. He took the risk to collect the harem leisurely, and it was quite satisfying to kill Aaron. He emphasized many times that the protagonist should keep a low profile, and it didn't matter if he beat the dragons. He could just use space to kill them silently, but he had to show his face to pretend to be a cup. This kind of plot was written based on the defense, and the left brain attacked the right brain.
The plot is too blunt, and the advantage of being a time traveler is not used.
Drunk, let me briefly talk about the viewing experience. The fruit of invincible space ability, because the domineering power overrides everything, the main purpose is to be defeated when encountering a strong person with a name. Then I was forced to follow the original plot. I saved Ace in the war but was killed by the plot in the blink of an eye. I saw the Straw Hat's dangerous past and said, "I won't let the Navy do it." To protect the Straw Hat... Anyway, the protagonist's ability is to suppress and limit it to death, and that's it.
Why does this protagonist look like a spirited young man?
The plot is too blunt and the fruit development is not very good. There are so many characters in animation, film and television games with spatial abilities that we can refer to.
I couldn't help myself when I saw Piaopiao fruit being eaten by a broken NPC. For such an awesome person like Golden Lion, is it appropriate to give the fruit to an NPC? That Porchi is the cheerleader of the original Fox Pirates. In other words, she is Fox's concubine. Don't tell me that a standard pirate like Fox is not lewd. I will really laugh For such a second-hand broken shoe, I don't want to judge if you are willing to take it on board, but how does she deserve the fluttering fruit? What if you give it to Princess Weiwei? Even if it's an original female character, it'll be okay, but a broken shoe… awesome
Generally speaking, it doesn't even feel good, not as good as these three
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There is really no concept of development of Devil Fruit. It only has the aspects of usage, control, and power. After eating the fruit, all the abilities are given to you. The rest depends on how you use it. The original work Kakukali Fatiqi Sabo is the evidence, and Tikki's shock also uses the huge destructive power of his predecessor Whitebeard. Sabo, like Tikki, cannot be controlled after eating the fruit for the first time and using up his power. Furthermore, from the beginning to before his awakening, Luffy only used his rubber stretching ability. After his awakening, he just added the name of the Sun God. The essence of his ability is rubber stretching + awakening assimilation. These signs indicate that Devil Fruit has not developed this concept, only creative ideas + knowledge + control + physical effort = Devil Fruit ability.
Why is there Shalulia Palace among the female protagonists? Not only is she ugly, but she also has a bad personality!
Looking at the introduction, does it sound like Teddy is a dog licker? Or turtle text?
The space of One Piece is just a space of belief. The sun in the real universe cannot be torn apart by constant nuclear explosions.
The protagonist's strength is almost crushing him, space! It's outrageous that he can still be hurt by others. If it was a special devil fruit ability, I could accept it, but Garp is stupid. He defeated the protagonist with his physical skills and domineering. If Garp could break the space, he could become the king and ride Im as a horse.
Stallion stories are popular recently? How come so many new books are all about stallions?
Alas, the writing is too casual. The author just wrote it for fun and didn't put any thought into it, but you can still tell.
Well written, no big problem
It just suppressed the combat power. . The cowardly writing is not in line with today's cool writing process, and he actually let Blackbeard do it. ,, You said just let Qingzhi and Kapu do it. . Then fuck Blackbeard and everyone will fuck your woman. . Even his poisonous Q and Badgers can't kill you. Nothing else
What a piece of shit, a YY person creates a garbage protagonist who looks like Teddy
The combat power is erratic, and the Space Fruit is speechless when written like this. The protagonist has an unpleasant personality. He keeps a low profile and kills the Celestial Dragons. He always thinks about escaping during battles. Can such a character awaken his overlord color? The general's frozen fruit can hinder his space ability. He is really that powerful and invincible.
Space is respected
There's nothing wrong with the plot, it's just that it's too boring to just recruit girls. One or two are too good and boring.
In addition, I would like to find a role for the author, which can appear in this book or the next one or the next one. Spider Prince Nicholas, the Yellow Dragon Fruit of the Phantom Beast. Digimon Yellowdramon prototype setting. Typical attack is high, defense is high and speed is slow. A dozen Yonko generals can't break through the enemy's defense, but their turning and attack speeds are slow, making them a typical big tank. To the blast. Just search Spider Prince Nicholas on Baidu for his appearance. The attack power is at the level of the Yonko Aunt at best, and it comes with a desert-like terrain. Because the defense is too high, you can wander around and bring in any combination of plots. But eat the seal. As for domineering and fruit awakening, they will not break the defense.
It was good to be an idle person, but I didn't even have the ability to protect myself, so I went to catch the Tianlong people!
Have you written anything before? Appreciate it
Author, your chapter 88 is banned, so how does your first order count? Counting Chapter 90? Can the update time be unified at the same time? I'm really afraid that one day it will be blocked before I even have time to read it when it is just released 😥