The World of Candlelight

I came across a new article by chance. The setting is quite interesting and the writing is not bad. It just talks about the setting and throws away too many book bags. The most important thing is to follow the plot and tell the story. The setting is shaken out little by little along with the plot, which makes it interesting. After reading so many chapters, I feel that the progress of the plot has stopped. The first 100,000 or 200,000 words are very important. They pay attention to the tense plot and conflicts one after another, and the story cannot be let down. Also, please have less dialogue, it looks tiring Come on! It's not easy for newbies, I look forward to getting better and better~

I read the comment section before and said that Wu Zu was made too abstract. I didn't realize the seriousness. Now that I see it, I can only say that it is true.

The previous writing is very good, but the emotional plot is too cliche. Although it is well written, the heroine has a big poisonous point 😅

Investigation report: "Number" - 277 Investigation target: "The World of Heavenly Candle" - the male protagonist - [Lu Chen] Investigation result: [Reincarnation (Awakening Su Hui)] Judgment basis: Abnormal characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time-travel situations of time-travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with quick time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——Wanling Feast Zhenjun Stay on July 2, 2025

It's quite difficult. Every time I see people put aside their worldview and talk about the pros and cons of the road. Logically speaking, if there really is a supernatural martial arts in reality, its practitioners must be proficient in human body science, physics and chemistry.

After becoming a teacher, the conversation between the two of them seemed awkward.

I won't cut it 😵

It is a good book, but the writing is a bit mysterious. It can be seen that the author has a good idea and the writing style is very good. If it can be kept up, it will definitely become popular next time.

Don't speak human words, use your brain

I feel like the male protagonist's last name is not good, he might as well be called Lu Chen

It's so confusing, I'm a little worried about the problem of interrupted updates…

The author is too depressing. The Martial Ancestor he wrote is so magical and abstract.

Another one who did it before he had time to invest.

If the protagonist wants to kill Shinto, he must show the deformity of Shinto in the future. Just because the protagonist wants to practice martial arts, Shinto cannot be allowed to exist.

In reality, if there are these paths, the first one to rule out is martial arts. Every path is better than martial arts. How big do you think the upper limit can be for a path that only grows muscles but not brains?

Why did I feel so angry when I was writing a book? I gave up on it and started reading a peaceful spiritual book.

The volume is too small, the number of words is not enough, and the plot is advanced too slowly.

It's well written, but not many people read it.

Come on, the plot is well polished and the connection is smooth. You will be the next platinum player.

The introduction to the worldview and cultivation content is quite complete and somewhat interesting. However, the plot is not satisfactory. I feel that the author wants to play a big game, but cannot write what he wants to express. This book feels a bit like a Japanese anime. The content of the cultivation was amazing at first, but a bit confusing afterward.

😭Dead? Tonic medicine

It's a pity. It was very well written, but it turned out to be a eunuch. I'll take a sip and leave the author.

Lu Chen, I think it's okay, just don't imitate some authors and add "boy" in the middle of their names.