Prehistoric: from the Beginning of the Sky to the Eternal Prehistoric

What rubbish? A Taiyi Golden Immortal doesn't even have a single magical power and can't defeat a ferocious beast in the middle stage of the Golden Immortal. This is the most rubbish protagonist of all the prehistoric novels I've read.

First of all, there is no overstepping of boundaries when writing about prehistoric times. It is all about innate divine talents and talents. It all depends on the realm to crush

In Honghuangliu, realm is king. There is no such thing as leapfrogging.

The author is writing a prehistoric novel, not a fantasy novel. The ferocious beast does not have any powerful innate spiritual treasures or innate treasures. Why can he leapfrog the level? The protagonist is the one who gets better, I'm really convinced

What a loser, not worthy of these heels

After reading several other people's comments, I feel that your book has a bit of a big problem. For example, the protagonist seems a bit weak, and secondly, the division of realms is unclear, and there is also a partial difference in strength. The suggestion is that the protagonist should be a little further ahead than others, especially one step ahead than Hongjun, because he will definitely participate the most in the future, and if you are controlled by him, it will make it difficult for you to advance. And you need to confirm a general direction first, whether you plan to let the protagonist go to eternity, or let the whole world go to eternity together. If it is the former, then try to let the protagonist go in front of everyone. Many first titles can be attributed to the protagonist, which will also help the development of your plot, because the number one must be involved in many people, so that more readers can feel the protagonist's growth. If the world is eternal, then we need to identify a big core and make this the antecedent of the protagonist's actions. Of course, it is best to help both sides and fight both sides. The side that has contributed more to the growth of the world will help more, and the smaller side will suppress more. But don't help too much, and don't hit too hard, because this is not conducive to the progress of others, others will not be able to progress, and it will be difficult to promote the world, and it will be sidetracked. Finally, I hope that if you have more words, I can still read them, and then I will dig deeper. Do you want to listen to your suggestions? It's up to you. Your suggestions may not be useful, because I haven't read them yet.

Although I don't know if I will survive, it's not bad to occupy a building in advance.

There are a lot of typos, and some of them feel weird to read, but it's okay, come on!

Encouragement