Mortals Ask: Start Liver Entry from Fishing Village

The content in the book has a vague feeling, many details are not written, and it is unclear.

I like Goldfinger very much, but the author specializes in writing awkward plots, and it becomes awkward every time he talks. Obviously Goldfinger's writing skills are very good.

It's so fake. After practicing a few levels of Qi, you can get the best gold mine.

If your cultivation level is so low and you are doing so big things, how will you write when your cultivation level is high? Is the plane a chessboard?

Not bad, it looks like it's still a basic material at the moment, come on

The writing is good, there is nothing poisonous at the moment, Liangcao Come on, author!

How many lives are there for a mortal to cross the sea in a single boat?

The cheat settings are okay, but the others are not.

Voted 3 monthly votes! Come on author

The plot is too fragmented. I feel like the author is trying his best to write well and separate each paragraph. In fact, the writing style is pretty good. It's difficult to have a sense of immersion if you continue. The logic is confusing. What's the problem?

The introduction is the highlight, very attractive, I came here just for the introduction! However, the content of the novel does not quite match the introduction. I personally feel that the narrative style and dialogue are really unappealing, and it feels like writing an article.

Overall, it was pretty good. The plot in the first 10 chapters was bland. I thought it was about martial arts and spirituality. However, a sudden twist killed the gang members and entered the story of cultivating immortals. It was too abrupt for the chief officer. The plot isn't too outstanding, but it's pretty good. It's not particularly cliche. I believe it would be a good book if I polished the outline and plot more.